Hello again! These little moments will jump from episode to episode in no particular order but I do plan to do most of the Daniel/Vala episodes. So here is a little comic moment from 'Avalon Part 1' I hope you will enjoy it. I actually never explained the title I think, it is a lyric out of a Counting Crows song just at the moment I can't remember which one, its the one that goes something like 'I can't remember all the times I tried to tell myself to hold on to these moments as they past' I just can't remember the name its driving me nuts!

Hold on to these Moments

Chapter 2: She's Back

Vala's POV

"Where's my Daniel?" she asked searching though the crowd for the face of the man she knew could help her find the treasure. She had promised him a tablet, and she did have it. But to be honest she was planning on staying for longer then she knew any of them wanted her to. A man walked around the corner into the room and looked right up at her, he seemed slightly surprised that it was actually her, or maybe it was because of her outfit either way she was flattered and excited to see him. She smiled widely in a bit of a mischievous manner she was going to enjoy this stay.


Daniel's POV

Had she really come? And was this so-called tablet legitimate? He wondered if this was just a scam, whatever it was he was going to find out soon. He turned the corner and walked into the 'Gate room. There she was, she really had come and what was she wearing? He did not know whether to make a wise remark or just keep his mouth shut. He decided the latter was the best way to go. That smile on her face, she was up to no good and one thing was sure. She was going to be one hell of a pain in the ass.


I remembered the name of the song 'A Long December' by the Counting Crows. I liked writing the first impressions as Vala walks thru the gate. I love how Daniel doubts her motives and really is right that she is up to no good. But going back to earlier episodes like this make you think about how much the characters have developed since then. The next chapter I think will be a 'Memento Mori' one and will be on soon. Well remember reviews will make me super happy.