Sorry about all grammar mistakes and any other mistakes. (i'm not great at finding them)
Tris POV
Tobias and I walk to the net waiting for our arrivals. As if one of them heard me, we see a small slim, feminine body fall into the net. Is that a boy? The person lays on its back for a minute, taking deep breaths.
"Anybody gonna help me outta this thing?" I raise my eyebrows, It is a boy.
Tobias seems to get over the phase of reality fast than I do and helps the boy.
"Thank you, lad"
"Don't sweat it. Wha-?"
I Interrupt Tobias "Who Pushed you?"
The boy smiles and laughs a little bit "Myself."
"Fair enough, and your name?" I grab his wrist on the left side of his body, while tobias got the other wrist. "Keegan." He swiftly answered.
Tobias and I hold his arms up then yell, "Keegan first jumper!" pumps of fists, whistles, and other harmonized yells all follow. I mean of course celebration should happen, they haven't had a first jumper in 5 years..
I look at Keegan, "Don't fuck up your reputation, right now you seem to be their favorite." He quickly nods, "Yes ma'am."
"Don't call me ma'am"
"What do I call you then."
"Tris, or Six. And get used to them because i'm gonna be your instructor,and it's me you're gonna have to impress."
"Yes ma- Dammit sorry. Stupid Abnegation, god there's a reason why I left." He walks away to another crowd.
I walk over to tobias, seems like while talking to Keegan all except 1 arrived. ~counts~ 1..2..3..4..5..6….18. yup only o- Oh here she comes.
All you hear is screaming and see the kicks of the buff-est woman ever, Damn…
I walk over to the next to help her down but she just pushes me out of the way, "Move." Then just hops out a good 6ft. Okay, tris calm yourself…
I look for Tobias somehow I keep misplacing him, "Four?" he turns around, "y-?" I cut him off by smashing our lips together. He grabs my butt and I pull away only a little. I whisper, "Not in front of the children." We laugh and lead our new initiates to the end of the hall.
Tobias POV
I yell, "Aye, shut up up if you don't want to become factionless!" Of course everything was silent. God dammit I love dauntless, but some quiet is lovely at times.
I speak up,"Good! Now listen well. I am your trainer Four, though I only train Dauntless born. On my left Is Tris also goes by Six, She is also your trainer but only the Faction-transfers. For 10 weeks you will be staying in a Dorm, you'll go through 2 stages by the end of the 10 weeks. At the end of the 10 week training, you'll be ranked on all your progress during the 2 stages. Get in the top ten and you become dauntless, if not then factionless. Look around..That's your competition and friends for the next 10 weeks, may you only show your best and try your best. D.B.'s with me and the rest with Tris."
I unlock the door to their dorm, a few people shout "Hurry up" but I only go slower.
I step in a they all flood in after me, surprisingly they actually look like they enjoy the room..Eh, they saw it coming.
I clap to get everyone's attention.
"This is your dorm, only rules are
1. No killing each other.
2. No doing the nasty, people won't enjoy having to seeing it or listening to it
3. Be up by 5am each morning for training.
Got it?"
Bunch of shaking heads "Good, now get some sleep. Knifes are tomorrow."
Hey guys! I tried to make this chapter a little longer, dialogue is a big thing i try to include and it's hard to put a lot sometimes. I love the support, it feels great! I also want to thank Lalalalalataz for sharing her thoughts it really helped me improve! If there's any scenes you would like to happen in the story, you can review or pm me. I dont mind. If you just want to review to review then go ahead all comments will help me.
