Yo! So there has been a slight confusion I see... I guess everyone is unsure of the pairings so I'll just give em to ya.

Ikuto and Amu... duh

Kukai and Utau... duh also

Rima and Nagi... they're so cute... why would I NOT support them?

Kairi and Yaya... still duh.

Tadase and Saaya... um yeah... I'm kind of stealing this pairing from the Hunger Games cuz you know how Peeta's dad was in love with Katniss's mom but she loved someone else so he married a wench/witch/really snobish lady... so that's how it all goes down. If you don't get it PM me and I will gladly gladly obsessively rant to you about HG. Or we can talk... OF TOPIC! In case you haven't noticed yet... I'm ADD, or worse, ADHD. DEMIGOD! jk.


Also I would like to make it clear that I am only allowing about 4-5 kids per family. It is evident through the reviews that everyone wants to be a daughter or son of Ikuto and Amu. I'm probably NOT going to choose your OC if you have very little description. I NEED DESCRIPTION!

So here is a good example of a good description...


Name: Yorumi Tsukiyomi

Age: 11
Gender: Female

Grade/ Occupation: 5th
Family: whoever is in the Tsukiyomi's/ Souma's (remember? Utau is the auntie?)

Past: She had never ridden on a plane till she started high school, and LOVED it. Ever since then, she dreams of being a pilot. She begged for rides on private planes/jets all the time. She's known as the most adventurous person in the family :3

Appearance: Super silky blue hair, always leaves it down. It is in layers and goes just below her shoulders. Golden eyes. Received 'the smirk' from her father. LOL.

Attitude: Always likes an adventure. When she first meets someone, she acts all sweet... But then, when she gets to know people, she shows her sarcastic and weird self. :3

Style: School Uniform with jacket. ALWAYS has a jacket wrapped around her waist. Couldn't care less about fashion, just wears things that aren't TOO horrible.

Friends: Guardians/ people at school. I guess siblings. Best friend is Keiko Souma. (haha. I left out the Ai)

Guardian or New Enemy?: Guardian of highschool. Ace

Loves and Hates: loves- planes, jets, helicopters ; hates- people who act stupid- aka boys, bugs

Crush: No one. She hates boys remember?

Hobbies/Extracurricular Activities: riding on private planes/jets/whatever. (hey, aren't the Tsukiyomi's rich?)

Favorite Stuff: Plane models

Special Trinkets?: None

Son or Daughter of Anyone in the ORIGINAL SHUGO CHARA?: Amu and Ikuto

Shugo Chara?: Hawk- represents adventurous-ness of Yorumi. Pilot hat, goggles, gloves, everything. Carries a backpack that has jet wings sticking out of it. Orange hair and amber eyes. Sarcastic and rude to people she meets for the first time. In chara change, pilot goggles appear. In chara nari, turns into Soaring Wings. Fully dressed like a pilot and grows jet wing on back (yup. she can fly)

Nicknames?: Rumi

Extra!: Makes super awesome paper airplanes from time to time during class.


That was a good one. Not being biased or anything but I want them really descriptive. did I say descriptive? And even the one I just showed you was pretty short. Later I will be uploading my own OC but that will probably next chapter soooooooooooooo here are the OC's I have chosen so far...

Azure Tsukiyomi- MissXAmulet

Bayzy- Guest

Akemi Souma- BluePinkFlowers

Rei Fujisaki- Renia

Rai Fujisaki- YorumiTsukiyomi

(Rai and Rei are twins... yes I know the Tsukiyomis have twins too...)

Possibly Rin Tsukiyomi- xAnimeGirl114x

Chisaki (I'm changing it to Hotori, scroll up)-Mikashimotaku


Now here is a revised edition of my first chapter... it's written by my friend Niki who is also one of the characters...


Yorumi's POV:

I wake up to the sun blinding me, and my hair flows down to my shoulders as I hear the birds chirping outside... NOT! The rain was deafening and and my hair was slightly damp due to the moisture creeping through the windows. 'Ugh. Guess I can't fly my jet today,' I thought, my mood matching the weather. I looked over at my two friends sleeping like angels! Actually, they were more on the devil side when they were awake... Seems like they aren't angels when they sleep, either.

Keiko was sleeping with her mouth open and drool threatening to drop onto the futon I set up for her. I panicked and grabbed a towel. It fluttered down and covered her face.

I sweat dropped and looked over to my twin sister, Ayumi. She was no different, being lazy and all. I mean, Ayumi could be active and stuff, but she usually needed to charge herself with sleep. Oh well I guess I'll just go down to the kitchen... I almost trip down the stairs, but due to my quick reflexes used when flying my jets, I twist and land on my feet at the bottom of the stairs. I'll have to thank my dad later for passing on the genes of a cat.

I tried to make my way into the kitchen to steal some sprite cans for my friends.

"Boo."

"Kyaaaaaaaaaaa! Get away from me!" I smashed a sprite can on the attacker's head, only to see that it was just Keiko. She was drenched, and she did not particularly like being drenched in soda...

"What is WRONG with you?! You know, you could have put the towel on my face AFTER you spilt the soda on me. Actually, I wouldn't have minded you NOT spilling soda on me AT ALL."

I went into my nerdy character and said, "You just used a double negative."

" I DON'T CARE!" She happened to be screaming this at the top of her lungs right into my poor sensitive ears. Nevermind. I'm NOT gonna thank my dad for the cat genes.

Anyway, going on a different topic, today was the day we were gonna hammer into our parents' heads that we are gonna go to a real school. Before this, we were all homeschooled, so our family were the only friends we had. So going over for a sleepover, going to a karaoke box, shopping, and eating at food courts weren't as special.

Time skip!

"So do you have your speech memorized?!" I asked Keiko who was trying to read her paper one last time.

"What does it look like?!" Keiko retorted. "Ayumi isn't even HERE!" Again the cats ears!

I threw my paper down, which by the way I had already memorized three days before. "FINE! I'LL DO EVERYTHING! AGAIN!" I stormed off to the living room where Mom and Dad were. Mom was reviewing her recepies, and Dad was fiddling with a BALL OF YARN? must be the cat thing...

I looked up at my parents and gulped. I tried to recall the first line of my speech. "I know you two will definitely say no to me, but-"

"Then no," My father said bluntly. "If you know we're gonna say no, then we're probably gonna say no... So, no."

"ugh... Can you at least let me finish?"

"Of course not. i already know what this is about."

I was shocked. My father knew my plans for going to school already? "But dad! Why won't you let me? Keiko and Ayumi want to go too!"

"It can be dangerous. We already gave you priviledges in riding the private jets."

"But everyone-"

"Don't fall to peer pressure! And not EVERYONE-"

"I don't CARE! I want to go to a regular school!" My parents stared at me like I was crazy.

"Wait, wait, wait. Hold on for a second. Rumi, isn't this about how you want to go on that new helicopter model ride you saw on TV?" My mom asked me, completely confused.

"Huh? Of course I want to go on that, but I'm talking about school here. I want to go to school with Keiko and Ayumi!"

"You know... If you wanted to go to school, you could have told us," My father said.

"What do you think I'm doing right NOW?!" I shouted, utterly disappointed that they didn't understand me at all.

"You shouldn't be disrespectful to your father..." My mom barely whispered. My parents looked at each other.

"Rumi. Your mother and I didn't want you to go through all those things that we did when we went to school..." Dad said.

"But it sounds like fun! i wanna do something like guardians! Or fight against an evil company!" I tried to persuade my mom. She was the softer parent. "Yeah! And you can find your true love!" She was totally caught in my trap. I inwardly grinned evilly.

"I know you are very adventurous, but school is sometimes a chore. If you're homeschooled, you don't have to go through all that extra stuff that won't help you in life!" My dad tried to pull me out of the idea that school was a good thing.

"But those extra stuff could lead to new things in my life! I have a shugo chara, you know! If they're cooped up in the house with me forever, my dreams won't come true and they'll disappear, right?!" They gasped, and looked at me, waiting for me to show them the little creature.

"Hi. So you guys are Rumi's parents?" My chara suddenly appeared from behind me. She had bright orange hair, amber eyes, a pilot's uniform, and a backpack with jet wings sticking out from it. She's such a daredevil, even I'm scared of her sometimes. Once, she forced me to do crazy tricks on my jet. "I'm Hawk. Nice to meetcha."

My mom squealed. "Kya! A Shugo Chara! i haven't seen one since Ran, Miki, and Suu! OMGee! I miss their annoying rants now!"

Even my father was close to tears, which was VERY unusual. "She reminds me of Yoru..."

"sigh... So? Getting back on subject, are you gonna let me go to school or NOT?!" I shouted.

"Do you think you're okay with getting up at six thirty in the morning, five days a week?" My mom asked me.

I had been prepared for this kind of Q&A thing. I had to nod without hesitation, which I did, immediately. "If you get bullied at school, promise not to come back crying, and to stay strong?" I nodded once again, now towards my dad.

"Promise not to lose to peer pressure and stay the way you are?"

I nodded my head again.

"Are you sure you won't blame the teachers for the amount of homework you receive?" I was tired at nodding already. Anyways, I'm a genius!

"Promise to have strong bonds between you, your sister and Keiko and not let bad relationships affect the way you are at home?"

"YES! I'm completely ready for this! Just let me GO!" I pleaded.

"One more question," my dad stated. I died. " If you become one of the populars, promise not to bad mouth us, or act snobbish?"

"yes." I said without hesitation, once again.

They looked at each other, and I grinned as cheerfully as I could possibly grin. "You may go to your room. We will discuss this with the Soumas." I smiled at myself as I skipped my way up the stairs to my bedroom.


See, isn't Niki such a good author? I'm sooooooo jealous... so yeah.. the submission forum is on my profile!

love is for

infinty

-Fairest