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Percy POV
The door flew open and I saw the most beautiful woman in the world! I stared at her for what seemed like forever and realization sunk in. I knew this woman, she was Annabeth. I sucked in a deep breath and tried to pry my eyes away from her but I just couldn't.
"Well, it seems like everyone is here so lets get to business." my boss said.
Annabeth and I slowly sat down but I was still in trance. I just couldn't believe she was here.
We stared into each others eyes for the longest time, it was like we had a moment but, this moment was interrupted by my boss.
"If you guys could stop with the googly eyes already!" he shouted
That caught my attention, I sat up straight and looked at him.
" Okay, so, our company, Water Corporations, we are building a new aquarium but, we would need an architectural company, and the AXTZ Architecture Biz. would like to cooperate with us. Our CEO Percy, Percy could you please raise you hand" I raised my hand and I felt pretty stupid doing so," is going to be in charge of this project and his partner int he architectural part would be Annabeth." said my boss.
" You guys would be working together a lot and sharing an office" boss said while making eye contact with us.
" The Meeting is done, you may return to your business." he said.
I awkwardly walked to Annabeth and smiled at her.
" Hi, guess your my partner" as I shook hands with her.
"Yeah I guess so." Annabeth said.
"Thank god that meeting was done!" I thought to myself as I walked through the door.
Annabeth POV
"Oh my gosh...I have to work with him for 1 year? Could it be anymore awkward?" I thought to myself as I walked out the meeting room door.
I just can't forget those green eyes staring into mine. I felt like I could just fall into them any minute now. "No, no, no! Don't fall into them Annabeth! You don't want to be heartbroken again!" I thought to myself as a stepped into my car.
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