AN: Ok so as some of the reviewers picked up on dialog have never been my strong point and I would like to thank the ones who gave suggestions on how I might go about fixing this problem. Also just on a side note do you know how hard it is to write dialog for a four year old? Pretty hard so this chapter we have the trip to Suna. Then time skip in chapter 3 because really I dont think I can handle this whole 4 year old situation much longer. And I cant promise rapid improvements in the dialog department. I might get better with time though.


The morning of the departure Kakashi and the Hokage are at the gates of the Hidden Leaf. Kakashi with a rather large pack on his back. The Third and Kakashi take off from the village know it is in the loving hands the elders. After about an hour of walking the large sack on the copy nins back start to move a wiggle. Then a muffled "let me outta here I have to pee" is heard from within the bag.

"Well the quiet could not last forever huh Kakashi- san" Kakashi looking at the aging kage then awnsers " I guess not but you dont understand how much the little kid talks" Kakashi paused "you know it might be better if we dont let him out of the bag Hokage-sama" the kage looked at Kakashi before Kakashi added "for safety reasons of course, we dont want him to get hurt". The Third looks at him again "ok, ok if you think we should" and with that Kakashi pulls the bag off of his back and unzips it. Out of the bag hops Naruto looking a little worse for wear. Naruto just now free of the bag runs to the nearest tree and quickly pulls down his pants and relives himself. "This is my tree now" laughs Naruto after he pulls his pants up and rejoined his two companions. He cast a glance at the Hokage then cast another at Kakashi " Are we their yet" Kakashi face faults while the old Hokage kindly replies with a "not yet Naruto- kun" Naruto looking at the old man says "well old man how long is it until we get there? My feet hurt."

An: there it is. It is short sweet n incomplete I ran outta steam and can not finish this story go figure... any way anyone who want to take over the story is more then welcome to. I would even give my plot n notes on where this was going to help them if they wanted. Again...sorry.