Like I may have said, this is my first story so I'd love to read your reviews. Please give me your comments and ideas so that I can get better at this. So far i've had more people read the intro than people have read anything in my life. Please review and tell me what I need to work on or what you think I should do in the story

As Johnny walked out of Mavis' room he started thinking to himself, had he had that much trouble when he packed up his bag for the first time?

He thought back to when he was in tenth grade, the first time he wanted to go backpacking across Europe. All the way though the rest of highschool he thought about going on his adventure. He remembered when he went and bought that backpack, he had been looking at backpacks in the store and went to buy his as soon as school let out that final day senior year.

Johnny had already planned the Trip and already had the plane ticket waiting for him at home. When he got the backpack he drove strait home to pack the bag with all his things. "I guess I didnt have near as much trouble, maybe it was since I had been planning for so long..."

Johnny reached the lobby where he figured he'd find Dracula "Mavis really seem like she needed help...she had no clue what she needed to bring with her." Johnny started looking for Drac, as he did he continued to think to himself "she had even had her underwear drawer strewn around the room" laughing a little as he remembered the unmentionables laying on his girlfriend bed. Johnny realized that he didn't see Dracula anywhere in the lobby.

Johnny walked over to one of the suits of armor that worked in the hotel. The suit have Johnny a dirty look as he approached. (apparently this was the suit he had tried to wear when he had first met Mavis) When Johnny reached the magic suit of armor be started taking to it "hey! Tinman bro, you know where I can find Dracula at?" Pretending not to hear the tinman comment, the armor addressed Johnny. "I have not seen master Dracula recently, last I heard he was planning to go set up the tables for his daughters going away party." Johnny loved the ballroom, it always reminded him of when he and Drac had flown on the tables and when he sung with Mavis at her birthday party.

Johnny thanked the suit of armor and headed towards the ballroom. When Johnny stood outside his destination he could already hear Dracula talking to the tables and directing them where to go. Johnny opened the door and quickly slid into the ballroom and ducked behind a table, hopeing to see an opportunity to start a table battle again.

When he saw that Dracula was simply standing in the middle of the room talking to the tables he stood up and walked over to Dracula to tell him that he had found an airline. "hey Drac! I found a flight that agreed to keeping the blinds closed." Dracula looked over his sholder at Johnny "I am glad to hear this. Are you and Mavy still planning on leaving in the morning?" Dracula really wanted them to stay longer, but he knew that Mavis was very excited to leave on her first adventure and go see the world. "well..yeah. We had already decided to leave tommorow." Johnny looked down at the floor "she wanted to leave as soon as possible so we booked the first flight we could...I know you wanted us to stay longer but I couldn't say no."

When Johnny was finished talking to Dracula he made his way back up to Mavis' bedroom. As he reached her door he knocked on it. "Mavy? Still want me to help you pack your bag?" She paused briefly to stuff the last of her bras into the bag and cover them up with a shirt. "yeah come on in I think I've finally got a good start." Johnny walked in and noticed that she really had gotten at least a few things packed. (including the underwear so already he wouldn't have to help her with that.) "what kinds of things are you planning to bring with you?"

She looked over at him as she picked up a bottle off the bed. "that's the problem...i'm not sure what I need to bring! I know that I'll need clothes and my fangbrush, but i'm not sure what else. Oh! And I found this bottle of sunblock!" As she looked over the writing on the bottle Johnny saw that she really had found a bottle of human sunblock somewhere. "The bottle says that it will protect your skin from the sun, so hopefully we can do some stuff in the daytime like you usually do!"

Johnny had been telling Mavis about his trips so she had heard about the stuff he had seen and done. "my mom used to use this stuff on me and my brothers when we would go to the beach so it should protect you ... at least for a few hours" Johnny tucked the bottle into the backpack and went back to looking thought the things she had lain out. "umm Mavy? Do you really need to bring every thing you own?" Giving Mavis a mischievous grin Johnny picked up a pile of random items in his arms. "don't you give me that look...I just want to be prepaired. This its the first time i've ever really left the hotel!"

Mavis glided over to the window and looked out, knowing they would be leaving in less than 24 hours. "i've always wanted to do this and now i'm going to get to do it with you! I get to live my dream with my zing by my side" Mavis walked over and sat on the bed next to Johnny, she laid her head on his thin shoulder. It was bone-y but somehow still very comfortable to lay over on. "I just can't wait Johnny, when my dad set up that fake village to scare me and make me think that the humans were evil I was afraid that I would lose my dream." Looking up into Johnny's big brown eyes before continuing "now I've had my zing and see that my dream isn't dead i'm not sure my life could get any more perfect."

Johnny smiled down as he saw his own reflection in the piercing cobalt blue eyes of his vampire girlfriend. "i've been on lots of trips before but i've never been more excited than I am sitting here with you right now. Wandering into this hotel was the best choice I ever made, even if Drac nearly sucked me dry." Johnny stood up and turned so that he was facing Mavis, holding his arm over his face as if holding a cape he donned a fake accent. "I vill suck your blood! Now leave! bleh bleh bleh!" It was times like this that Mavis realized How much she loved Johnny, and as Johnny saw her giggling at his terrible impression he realised that he never wanted to be without Mavis by his side.

"come on Mavy, we really need to get finished packing. Your dads throwing that party and we are leaving for London tomorrow morning!"

So there it is. Chapter two of my story. Go up to the reviews and tell me what you did and didn't like. Any ideas are greatly appreciated and will be considered!