A/N: I just would like to thank the reviewers. -No comment-
Summary: (For those who want to preview the summary) They pretended to be a couple to fool his fan girls and her fan boys. Hugging, holding hands and even kissing each other in public! But what if this simple deal comes to reality? Will they have the guts to accept the fact and face the challenges ahead?SxS
Disclaimer: All characters that I used are not mine.
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» I forgot to type down the 'thing' that inside the tote bag. Well, the 'thing' that was inside the tote was her female necessities like sanitary napkins and the other paraphernalia. Maybe you know got the point why Sasuke smirked when he opened the bag, ne?
» And about the long silence of Sakura, I didn't put up there her conversation with her inner self, debating whether to agree with Sasuke or not. The reason behind it because I do not know how to put it up. I tried but I had a very hard time.
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» I know that you all noticed how I type my fics. We people are not perfect. And if you think that my writing is lame, tell me straight ahead. Flame me if you want, I don't care, I even asked for it. We all have different styles in writing, so don't ask about mine. If you think that I have a wrong grammar, well, copy paste my chapters in MS Word and find out yourself. If there are red or green marks in it, it either means a wrong spelling, intentional, Japanese words that MS Word isn't familiar with or because the spacebar here in out keyboard is defective.
MS Word actually has a grammar, spelling and an auto corrector, actually, every MS Word has, so every time one would appear, I immediately take action. But if there is still, it only means I was typing my fics as fast as I could.
It's my first time in my first few months here in that three reviewers ask me about my style of writing. And it saddens me to only take note of that now. And for your information people, this kind of writing or the style of how I write my award winning or perfect essays in school.
Even though I asked for constructive criticisms from you guys, please don't rub it in my face that my grammars and spellings are wrong. Please! The way you typed your review was like you wanted to kill me or sort. I have to admit I do that too to other authors, but I wasn't that harsh on them, and I even joke about it to them! .
So please, next time you write a constructive criticism or a flame, please make it something other than grammars and spellings, we cannot escape those. Write about how lame the chapter was and what kind of scene I should improve. All the flames and comments I read from other stories and mine as well are all about the grammar and spelling. God! There are many other things to improve at! Not just that! Okay? Got it?! Gosh a page of rants!
To kaibasgirlx,
I am really looking for a beta reader to beta my stories and I would like to accept your offer, but then, no thanks. It's because if I let you beta my stories, I sure that the chapter I submitted to you is not the chapter I ought to know. And if you think that I was bitching Ino, well I'm not. Actually, my next favorite character after Sakura would be Ino. And if you think that the fan boys were a cliché, so as the fan girls who wanted to be impregnated by Sasuke, it's for the story to work, it's not just me, wanting them to die or sort.
To Cunning Angel,
Well, as far as I know, colleges and universities are just the same. The difference is, university offers more courses the college. And university doesn't accept tertiary and secondary levels, while in college, it depends. I asked my sister about the geometry thing, she said it depends on the course you take. She took up Biology is college, so it only means that the main there is about Biology, which we study in high school. Architecture could use geometry because of the prisms and the sort. It really depends on what you take.
Foolish Heart
Chapter 2 : It Started with a Kiss
The next day, lunch time…
"Sakura, let's go." Sasuke provoked as he invited his so called girlfriend to eat lunch. Sakura stood up from her chair and picked up her things, gathering her books, which Sasuke took from her arms, being a king gentleman and boyfriend he was.
In his left hand was Sakura's things, and using his right, which was free from any other material, he took Sakura's hand and intertwined it with his, giving out a first sweet gesture in public being couples. The plan worked though, after their fans noted about how overprotective and possessive Sasuke was after their break time that morning, they took note that they were officially on.
"Let's eat at the rooftop." Sasuke provoked as he gently pulled Sakura towards the door that lead to the rooftop. "My friends are there." He added after a while, continuing towards the place, drawing attention from the students who were present in the hallways and classrooms.
"Hai, Sasuke-kun." Sakura responded, forcing herself to add the suffix –kun to Sasuke's name, which was not that hard as far as she imagined it. From ahead, they saw a good amount of morbid fan girls and fan boys, which both the heartthrobs cringe. 'I thought that was a good act already!' Both thought as they noticed the herd coming faster and faster.
Using his senses, Sasuke immediately made a sharp right turn, making Sakura almost fall… and her skirt to fly upwards for about an inch. Sakura's fan boys surely saw it and howled as loud as they could. Sakura was now blushing madly and using her free hand that wasn't held by Sasuke, she instantly shot her hand to her skirt to hold it down.
Even though they went to a lot of sharp turns and curves, they couldn't seem to lost track of their fans. Cursing, Sasuke went out to the cherry blossom grove, where a lot of students were, eating their lunch under the Sakura's.
They rushed from tree to tree, trying to loose their fans, but still, they were really persistent and don't want to get lost track of them. From above, you could see three boys and two girls snickering upon seeing the pink haired girl and the raven haired lad running laps around the school mini park, trying to pry off their fans.
"Did you see Sasuke-teme's face?" A blonde asked as he clutched his stomach and leaned on the railings of the rooftop, while laughing out loud. His bright blue eyes were already watery from laughing as the others who were with him tried the urge not to punch him, except for one.
"Shut up Naruto." A silver eyed senior muttered as he closed his eyes and crossing his arms across his chest, his long, coffee brown hair moving with the light zephyr that crossed the rooftop. "Don't bother him Neji-kun; he's just… amused, with Sasuke and his pretend girlfriend." A brunette senior with two bun, calmed her boyfriend, that knowing his cool demeanor from the outside means his pissed off inside.
"Let's go there." The brunette pointed to a secluded part of the rooftop, where a bit of shade was, shadowing every action that would be executed. "But Tenten-… gah!!!" Neji sighed in defeat when his girl friend literally dragged him across the rooftop.
"How troublesome." A tall man with black hair that was tied above his head, which closely resembled a pineapple muttered under his breath when he heard moans coming from the shadowed area, where the couple started making out without them seeing. He leaned over the ledge of the banister and closed his eyes, relaxing.
"C'mon Shikamaru! You're the only guy in our group who doesn't have a girl yet!" Naruto supported his lazy friend and patted him in his back. Shikamaru cracked opened one eye and looked at his blond friend. "Baka! Girls are too troublesome!" He said and resumed in sleeping while standing.
"Ne, ne, what do you mean troublesome? I hear that you have a liking towards that loud blonde, Ino." Naruto nudged the sleeping form, which suddenly moved and gave a lump in his head yet again, with Naruto not much noticing.
Suddenly, a timid voice shouted towards the two men. "Naruto-kun! Naruto-kun! Look at Sasuke-san and Sakura-san!" The two men who were fighting about girls a while ago went towards the alerted girl, followed by the two seniors who were making out, who was also alerted by the timid girl's voice.
Her lavender eyes were wide, neither in horror nor in shock, with a hand pointing down past the cherry blossom grove. "What is it Hinata?" They all followed to where her finger was pointed, and saw a lot of students rooted on their spot, especially fan boys and fan girls of Sakura and Sasuke.
In the soccer field, two solid figures in black were lying down in the grass. They squint their eyes more; and the scene made all of them stiffen at what they saw. There lying on his back was Sasuke and on top of him was Sakura, their lips sealed together. But what they shocked them all was both of them were having fun and returned the kisses the other gave.
'Shit! They're gaining on us!' Sasuke cursed as he looked back to where they came, seeing their fans ripping the head of the other just to have a better look at them. He looked at Sakura, who was at his left, running with the same speed he has.
He again grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards the field to cross and use the other stairway that leads to the rooftop. But then, it was a wrong move because the other fans were waiting at the other side of the field, blocking the only pathway that could lead to the only staircase left.
Cursing a lot again, he checked on Sakura and her status. 'Partially okay, partially tired.' He thought as he examined her tires state. Shaking his head, he made another sharp turn to his left, making Sakura to almost fly from the sudden change of course.
He suddenly slowed down and carried her bridal style, startling her. He ran back to where they came and pushed himself down when they neared the raging fans they both had. Sakura fell first, but the Sasuke's hand cushioned her fall as they both roll on the grassy ground, stopping after a long period of time; Sasuke below and Sakura on top.
Sakura's hands were coincidently wrapped in his neck, whilst his was wrapped in her waist. "Sa-" She was about to ask but then was clamped when Sasuke pulled himself up and kissed her, his elbow rested on the ground.
With this, their fans were rooted in the spot, disbelief present and others were at a total loss of their idol and love. Sakura was shocked at first but then knew that it was just a part of the bet and nothing else.
She never thought that her first kiss would be stolen by a deal. Slowly, she didn't even notice that she was returning the kiss heatedly, the same amount of vigor present. Sasuke slowly licked her lower lip, asking permission to her.
Enjoying the French kiss, Sakura immediately opened her mouth and allowed him to ravage the hollow cavity of her mouth, tasting and licking every corner of it. Sasuke, soon allowed her to have her time of ravaging his mouth, letting her have a taste of him.
A few more minutes have passed; still, no one broke the kiss until when someone from an amazingly far distance shouted. "OI TEME, BREAK IT UP!!!" Abruptly, the two teens broke their bliss and stared at each other's eyes, not wanting to believe on what they just did… in PUBLIC if I may add.
Sasuke smirked and tucked a stray strand of hair behind her ear, looking at her reddish face. Being her boyfriend, he is to tend sweet acts to her. He brought his head up again and pecked her lips before lying down on the grass, panting from their little make out session in the open field.
Yet again, their fans fainted from their long kissing session, giving them time to escape. Sakura immediately sat up, seeing their awkward position. He too sat up and helped her stand to her feet. Fixing his backpack and her things in his hand, he stick out his hand and offered her again a walk to the rooftop, which she gladly accepted.
She sighed as she lied down in her bed, her hand searching for her best friend slash teddy bear. She eyed it and looked into its onyx orbs, which reminded her much of Sasuke. Out of frustration, she threw her teddy bear on the carpeted floor, sighing in frustration.
She immediately brought her fingers up to her lips, touching and remembering what it felt when their lips were one. How his lips gently caressed hers. It was a total bliss! Sighing again, she got up and tucked herself under the covers and turning off the lamp shade that was the only source of light by that time.
He sighed in frustration when he sat on the foot of his bed, drying his hair with a towel. He sighed again when his mind drifted off to his and Sakura's kiss in the open field of their school, how he deepened the feeling between them.
He looked over his study table, where a pink colored notebook was. He sighed for the thrid time. 'Sakura.' He thought as he stood up and got the notebook. Sakura lent him her notebook because he wasn't able to copy the notes in history, in which their teacher Hatake Kakashi warned: 'No notes, no clearance'.
The other fan girls would want to lend him their frilly notebooks, but of course he had a girlfriend and he doesn't want her to be jealous, so he took the notebook of his girlfriend, which she offered to him. He sighed for the fourth time and sat down in his study table and started to jot down the note of Sakura.
But even though one of them was writing notes, and one of them was getting ready for bed, there's only one thing common in their mind:
'It's just a deal, nothing more, nothing less.'
A/N: Hope you liked the crap. Next update would take a long time. I'm not in the mood in typing fics, especially if I get those types of reviews. But if you guys are lucky, I would update in a short span of time. T-T
I'm not mad, I'm just disappointed.
I have a question though,
If the Fire country is called Konoha, if the Sound country is called Oto and the Sand Country is called Suna; what do you call the Mist?
