For anyone else who did not understand my abstract story, here is an explanation.
Q: Who had taken Bella to the lava?
A: Jasper. "And then I sat up to try and see him, the brother that I had missed so much." That was in Edward's POV. It said it.
Q: Who held Edward back when he had tried to save her?
A: Again, Jasper. He was grabbing Edward from behind. Bella didn't notice who, she was already turning around at that point.
Q: What did Bella do to make
her want to say 'This is what happens when you mess
with my heart.
You get fire.'? What fire?
A: The fire is the guilt. By her doing this, he will have to live with her death on his conscience for the rest of his endless existence.
Q: Where did the mystery
person take Bella? Where did she jump from the cliff?
A: This one is my fault. I will have to fix it. In my original version, it told how Bella visited her mom in California (Phil got traded) and then went to the beach cliffs there. That meant that when Jasper swam out to the lava, it was the Hawaiian Islands.
Q: Why did he hold Edward
back? Why couldn't he save her?
A: Jasper knew how much pain Bella was in from his power, and didn't want her to suffer. Also, he was in just as much pain as she was. So he decided that he would save himself and her at the same time.
Q: How did Edward become such
a jackass?
A: That is a question that I have no answer to. He is who he is in this story.
If you have any more questions, ask them. I always want to know what I need to clarify in my !
