Hey there guys, hoped you liked the first chapter but not many reviews, although thanks Raina for seeing the fault in my title! (red face!) but thanks any way and even if u really hate the story please tell me and I will try my best to make it better for you!

songs:

Tonight (west side story)

I would recommend the reprise as Tony and Maria's parts work very well together and also show Susan and Caspian's feelings as well.

Can I have this dance (High school musical three)

I have to say I hated this film yet the only seen I enjoyed was this scene I thought the song was very cute and would fit in this chapter as it is about the dance.

Here we go see you at the bottom of the page!

Edmund and Peter were stood at the top of the stairs waiting for Lucy to appear they had been waiting at least ten minutes and could hear the quiet whispers from the guests downstairs. They had never usually been late for any event in all the times they had been in Narnia, yet they ere all still adjusting to coming back together.

Peter sighed and leaned on the wall,

"How long will she be?"

Peter did not want the dance tonight he knew he would have to give his sister up tonight he was starting to regret his decision of giving Caspian his permission, in fact he was so very close to taking it back his boot was edged in front of the other he wanted so badly to run down the corridor and lock Susan in her room and tell Caspian it was off.

He sighed again, he had to give her up now for real no exceptions.

Edmund was now pacing in front of Peter, he had always been the most anxious out of all of his brothers and sisters,

"There are guests waiting for us Peter we need to go down soon!"

He said annoyance taking a sharp tone throughout his voice worry was taking over the rest.

Peter was more calm and said reassuringly,

"Lucy will be here soon."

Edmund joined his brother leaning against the pillar and sighed sulking slightly,

"I wish she would hurry up."

Peter looked at him and said sarcastically,

"Are you sure your not waiting for the wine down there?"

Edmund hit his brother on his arm,

"Shut up!"

Edmund had always loved drinking the wines of Narnia and could not get out of the habit at home, there had been a few occasions where his aunt or uncle had scolded him for sneaking sips of wine every so often.

Lucy came running down the hall wearing her red velvet dress with gold embroidery her hair was let down straight and her silver crown rested lopsided on her head.

Peter and Edmund held back there laughter as she ran towards them and said gasping.

"I'm sorry I'm late."

Peter took her buy the shoulders and gently trying to straighten her crown on her head smiling at his sister. Yet Lucy bridled away from him slightly and his face turned slightly angered. He looked at his sister closely, she had on a very dark shade of crimson lipstick, he smelt the strong smell of perfume and grew even more angry as he saw two glittering earrings on either side of her ears. He grabbed her ears gently and shouted in a hushed tone trying to stop any of the guests downstairs hearing him,

"What are these?"

Lucy hissed in pain as his Peter's grip pained her newly pierced ears,

"Peter let go they've just gone in." she screamed quietly in pain.

Peter replied his voice getting more angered,

"Well they will be coming straight out now, Edmund you take the other ear."

Lucy stepped back protesting her brother's advance,

"It's not fair Peter I'm fifteen! Susan had earrings then and make up!"

Peter looked at her sternly and said harshly,

"She was sixteen and she asked me first."

Lucy rolled her eyes and whispered softly her head bent,

"Since when were you the parent."

Peter had heard this,

"Excuse me?"

Lucy sighed and whispered,

"Noting."

Lucy stood reluctantly as her brothers pulled out the earrings as gently as they could, Peter decided to question her further,

"Where did you get that lipstick and perfume?"

"Susan's room." whispered Lucy.

The brothers rolled there eyes as they both pulled out the earrings at the same time as Lucy squealed slightly.

Peter turned Lucy towards him and took out his handkerchief and dabbed off the spots of blood from her ears and the red lipstick and the whispered to her looking into her eyes,

"Listen to me Lucy I know you feel in the shadow of your sister sometimes but you are beautiful you don't need Susan's make up to prove that, now care to join me?"

Peter offered her is arm and Lucy smiled brightly at her brother and took his arm,

"Wait for me." said Edmund hastily, he took Lucy's other arm as the three of them were announced as they walked down the grand staircase smiling into the midst of to the swirling dancers dressed in red and gold. They all looked up,the decorations were beautiful and the ball room was looking amazing.

Peter looked around in awe,

"You did so well Lucy this looks amazing."

She smiled at her brother and said smiling at him,

"Why thank you Peter."

The three royals head turned up slowly as Caspian appeared at the top of the stair case, he was wearing a white shirt and a red waist coat, his black boots were polished and his hear was brown and fluffy and framed his clean and bright face he looked so charming every woman in the room even Lucy blushed.

He approached them all and said gasping slightly in awe,

"Lucy this is amazing."

Lucy smiled happy with all the comments of praise she had been achieving she felt so special,

"So I've been told."

Caspian blushed slightly and asked nervously,

"Where's Susan?"

The three of then stared at him, they had not thought of Susan the whole evening,

"I'll go find her." stated Peter.

"No let me." Lucy said quietly as she ran past her brother and up the staircase towards her sister's room.


Lucy had walked slowly down the corridor towards her sister room and tapped gently on the ivory door and inquired,

"Susan."

She heard no reply, so she knocked again more loudly and stated louder,

"Susan!"

She heard nothing again and entered the room to see Susan in the same position she had been in a few hours ago, yet her hair was curled back with tiny pearl pinks making her dark brown hair sparkle slightly, her face was slightly made up she looked so fair and pure yet her face was pale she looked worried.

"Are you okay Susan?"

Susan hear her sister quite voice and knew she wasn't okay she was scared out of wits she had to face Caspian she wanted to so badly but every time she thought about him her heart began to race and beat out of her chest.

Susan turned to see her sister and told her truth,

"No."

Lucy sighed,

"Your nervous aren't you?"

Susan nodded.

"Why?"

Susan looked at her sister she had to tell someone and she could trust Lucy,

"It's Caspian."

Lucy sighed in realisation.

"It's just that I want to show him so much how I love him but every time I try my heart just takes over and all the words in my mouth just get jumbled up."

Lucy stopped her sister's voice and embraced Susan and said to her, still in the embrace,

"You love him and he loves you forget about you heart and just follow him."

Susan smiled at her sister,

"Since when did you get so smart?"

Lucy shrugged her shoulders beaming, Susan noticed the spots of blood on her ears and asked,

"What happened to your ears?"

Lucy bit her lip nervously,

"Well I pierced them and then Peter got angry and took them out and took my lipstick off."

Susan smiled at her,

"I thought I was missing a lipstick."

Lucy laughed softly at her sister as Susan said,

"Lets get those cleaned up and then we'll head downstairs shall we."

Lucy nodded as they both entered Susan's bathroom.


There was another announcement as Lucy and Susan entered the ball room once more Caspian looked up at Susan, she looked stunning her white dress hung loosely on her figure and matched her pale creamy skin perfectly the red embroidery matched her ruby red lips that were parted slightly in awe, his eyes met hers and she blushed slightly.

The sisters reached the floor just as the Narnia waltz began and Peter took his final chance with a dance form his sister and approached her,

"May I have this dance."

Susan gasped slightly and said quickly,

"Yes of course."

Peter took his sister in hold and they began to waltz slowly around the floor, he leaned over her soft neck and whispered to her,

"You look stunning."

Susan smiled as she danced around the floor and nearly burst out laughing when she saw Lucy bossing Edmund around the floor.

Her smile soon faded when she saw Caspian approaching her and Peter she tried to calm down but her heart began to race and she whispered quickly to Peter,

"I can't do this!"

Susan ran off to the gardens and headed for the bottom balcony looking onto the sea, Caspian went after her but looked back to see an approving nod from Peter.


Susan's body was leaned slightly over the balcony and she was breathing heavily as Caspian approached her silently and she heard his un mistaken Hispanic accent,

"Susan?"

Susan looked up at him her heart was beating again and she threw out her words,

"I'm so sorry."

She fell into his arms her breathing still fast and worried,

Caspian held her in his arms slowly and whispered to her softly,

"Can I have this dance?"

Susan looked up at him slightly startled,

"Now, here?"

He nodded and held out his hand as Susan smiled and slipped his into hers.

They both danced slowly in each others embrace for ten long minutes loving every minute of it,

"Caspian?"

"Yes."

Susan took a deep breath and said something she had been wanting to say to him again for a long time,

"I love you."

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