Ok this is the second chapter of the story of which I only own the characters and the title.
Frozenpaw lept and landed with a sickening thump on the icy forest floor. The squirrel she was perusing scampered up one of the many trees surrounding them. Her mentor, Brightwing, emerged from a pile of snow some twolegs and created. "Good try but you need to be a little quicker." she tried to cheer up her young apprentice, but to no avail. Frozenpaw slumped and lay in the frost-covered ground. The blades of grass pricking at her underbelly.
"That was my fifth failure today!" Frozenpaw complained as she got up off the ground and stomped off to Thunderclan camp with Brightwing padding alongside her.
As a kit, she was always forgotten. Her mother, Echosong, and her father, Swiftheart, had always preferred her older brother, Lionpaw, and younger sister, Sunpaw. Young Frozenpaw had spent her kit days playing moss-ball alone or sleeping in a tight fluffy white ball wishing she had better Clanmates in the small forgotten corner of the nursery. The whole Clan looked down on her. Even the leader, Mossstar, had been hesitant to give her a mentor. But since he had to, he gave Frozenpaw Brightwing, the worst hunter and fighter in the Clan. While Lionpaw got their father, and Sunpaw received the deputy, Rainwhisker.(Shameless self advertising for my OC!)
Frozenpaw shook her head roughly to get her past out of her thoughts. "You know, lots of apprentices mess up in hunting practice" Brightwing tried again, but instead got an angry hiss from Frozenpaw.
Despite her horrible past, she somehow manged to look on the bright side of things. Of course, she had faked most of her cheerfulness, as if anyone cared for her enough to grow suspicious.
Both Frozenpaw and Brightwing stopped abruptly when they heard a yowl coming from the edge of the Shadowclan border.
The next chapter shall be ready in a little. It's Thanksgiving break and I have to do a freaking packet for math. It's just sitting on my bed taunting me. Geez, I wanna punch it so bad.
