I wrote this after I finished the K-PREP test in school and smuggled it out risking my test scores so you'd better appreciate it! Now, SURPRISE! I decided to not make this a one-shot! YAY! Tell me what you think in a review. Love it, hate it, want to kill it with fire, tell me so I can improve.
I picked up the ring and put it on. I heard a jingle that plays when I solve a puzzle and was warped away. I woke again in a new place. It was very crowded and there were very tall buildings, and is extremely loud. Many people had their hair cut short and wore outfits that seemed very hot and stifling. I looked around and saw a guy with orange hair walk up to a girl, who seemed to be his age, and tap her on the shoulder. She seemed confused for a moment then they walked away together. I had the strange urge to follow them. So I did just that. They went to a café and sat down. They talked for a while and the girl suddenly burst into tears. I walked up to them for no apparent reason. I realized once I had gotten closer that the guy was Otonashi! Otonashi sees me and says, "Who are you?" I seem surprised that he doesn't recognize me. "Otonashi don't you recognize me? It's me, Link! You helped me fight that statue BEN!" He gave me a puzzled look and said "Sorry pal but I don't know anyone named Link. Kanade do you know who this guy is or what he's talking about?" Looking at the white haired girl I noticed this was the girl Yuri had been aiming her weapon at when we met. She said "He seems familiar but I do not know him." in her calm almost monotonous voice. 'Why don't they remember our battle with BEN?' I ask them, "Do you know where Yuri or anyone else from the Battlefront is?" Suddenly they both gained a look of realization on their faces and Otonashi said "We need to go somewhere safe!" Kanade seconded this with a terrified look on her face.
Otonashi led us to his home where he explained, "Recently there have been deaths of teens around our age, one of them was named Yurippe. It said she went by Yuri. It also said that all that was found at the scene was a statue covered in blood and a message carved into their backs. The message was 'Beware Undead Battlefront, I'm after you and the hero, you could be next.' It's been the same statue each time." I was shocked to say the least. Yuri had been sent back to that damned place again. I decided then and there, "We have to go back to the high school and stop BEN from there. In other words we need to let BEN kill us. When he does, hold onto your memories of your friends from the Battlefront. We will stop BEN once and for all." Now it was their turn to look surprised. We waited it out and one day, BEN came. He killed us while we slept and when we woke we were in purgatory.
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