Hey Guys, I've re-read my 1st Chapter otherwise known as the Prolouge and I've noticed alot of mistakes on my part so I apologize. And I'm Wondering If someone could maybe help me with this story as a Beta Reader maybe?
Darth56: Hey dude thanks for the Positive feedback and I'm glad you like it.
Issei POV
It was another boring Sunday Morning so I decided to go to the Park. Immediately after I passed my door I felt someone watching me. Someone who felt... cat-like.
I looked at it and it immediately ran away though I did see a flash of white hair.
("Looks like someone is watching you.")
'I can see that Draig'
("No need to get touchy")
I grunted in confirmation that I heard him but chose not to talk.
I left for school and as usual the Sitri Clan Heiress was there to 'welcome' me
I do not see the point of the time decided who is late is earlier than the time where the classes start.
"I see you are late... Again Hyoudou" the Heiress said
"Yes what is your punishment today..." I replied
"Nothing of the ordinary. You'll clean the boys toilet on the 2nd floor." she said
I grunted.
While I was walking to the entrance Noticed one of my seniors Rias Gremory was watching me probably trying to find out if I have a Sacred Gear and If only they find out about 1 of the 13 Longinus 'The Boosted Gear is with me no doubt they will try to kill me off to resurrect me.
I looked at her and she flinched feeling my passive ability to release bloodlust strong enough to make a Dragon King to run off in fear of battling me.
I smirked and continued my steady pace to the entrance.
Rias POV
I immediately called my brother that much Bloodlust and power at the monsters disposal was tremendous.
To be Continued. Sorry for the shrot chapter I was busy during the making of this chapter. though I will make it put to you at Chapter 2.
