Hey fellow readers, sorry for the long wait... I have no ispiration and the book isn't helping because I really don't want to make it exactly like the book... but it seems to be going that way. OO ah well shit happens I guess.
Anywho's, my friend said there's no humor in the story... but honestly this isn't my kinda writing style, I don't do well with romances so I'm trying my best. Apologies if it ends up being crappy. If people want to me to concentrate more on the humor side of the story then I will, or I could just stick with romance... but bear in mind that I have a weird sense of humor that ends up being more stupid - therefore I think more humor than romance from me would spoil this story. XD
Also, I'm not going to write Hilary's POV in the way she speaks because frankly, I can't be bothered, and it would get confusing.
Having said all that, enjoy the next chapter of the story.
Disclaimer and warnings pretty much the same as the last chapter. Also, uber short chappie, I apologise for that to. -curses writer's block-
Italics - This means the character's thought when in normal POV, and Character POV. If that makes sense.
Chapter Two
Surveillance (just 'cause I like the word)
Hilary's POV (start's from when Kai's looking directly into her eyes)
Uh oh… my cheeks are firing up I can feel it, but why? What's up with this guy, it's like he can see right through the disguise… I've never known anyone to do that before, it's served me quite well up until now. Maybe…No way he's probably just gay; of course he'd be able to se through my disguise! Why else would he be able to tell the difference? But that doesn't add up, he's so… so handsome, I've never seen anyone as good looking as him. Then again maybe he can't tell that I'm a girl, I'm just being paranoid. Urgh, rich people.
Why the hell is he looking at me like that…I outta kick his where it hurts, pervert. No wait, I'm a boy he can't be a pervert. I wish he'd just say something.
"Like I said, there'll be a reward. I'm not so cheap as to let you do this for free. Now come on, before your group arrives"
Reward me arse! That won't help me, I don't believe this guy, is he deaf or just plain retarded? I really shouldn't have shown my anger like that though, now he's carrying me, this is sooo awkward. Help I'm getting kidnapped! Heh, yeah Hils like anyone would care about a thief like you. –sigh- I'll try kicking him now that he least expects it.
"Argh! What was that for!"
Heh-heh for being such an arrogant ass… damnit he didn't release his grip even abit.
"Let go 'o me yer bastard!" yes, I'm hoping he'll listen. Stupid huh? What else is there to do… I can't trust guys like him, he'll probably end up sending me to- okay now we're getting into a rich lookin' car. This can't be good; I really should be getting back but I've run our of ideas. Oh and look at this, I'm sat in between the egoistical asses so there's no chance of escape.
Normal POV
So they got into the car, with Hilary sat opposite Kai, because he could tell that she felt uncomfortable between them; however she was still well away from the door. Kai motioned his hand at the driver to begin driving and turned his attention to the thief.
She quickly removed her glance for him and turned it to the floor of the car, he cheeks turning red again. She didn't know why, but his gaze had that kind of effect on her; it was probably his gorgeous silver-amethyst eyes. With that thought, she avoided making eye contact with him; she didn't want to give herself away, if she hadn't already.
"Right, now I guess I should explain myself." He said, and Hilary gave him a sarcastic "you think?" look. He simply smirked, yet another reason to try to avoid looking at him. As arrogant as his smirk was, she couldn't deny to herself that it made him irresistible.
"As I mentioned before, I got myself into a bit of a mess last night..."
"In other words, he got completely out of his face." Tala blurted out, interrupting Kai.
"Right, but that wasn't very necessary for him to know…" Hilary chuckled quietly so that they wouldn't notice, despite her current angry state. "Anyway, the point is I gambled and my opponent is a cheat and took away something very, very important to me. Personally, I consider that stealing so I'm only taking back what is mine. This is where you come in."
"Tch, right no need to explain the rest. I 'aven't even agreed to doin' yer dirty work for ya." Hilary said.
"You haven't let me finish, who knows you might just change your mind if you do. Instead of just taking back my blade, you also have the freedom of stealing whatever you find valuable in the house, because honestly it'll look a little suspicious if just my Beyblade is stolen and everything else left untouched; obvious to say the least. As a reward, you get to keep all the extra items you've stolen. I'm sure that'll help you in whatever mess we've got you into with your group." He explained.
Hilary looked skeptical of the situation. They just didn't understand that she'd broken over half of the rules her master had set out for the group; not even that reward could get him to allow her to stay after she returned from this deed. She'd be left homeless for sure – back to where she started, or at least, where her memory started.
Kai watched her, and noticed the doubt in her eyes. He felt a little bad about having to make her do this, but it couldn't have been helped. He supposed he was lucky enough, and she was unlucky enough pick the wrong pocket at the wrong time.
Just as he was consumed in these thoughts, Hilary took the chance to attempt escaping and charged at the door, kicking Tala with her foot and almost slapping Kai in the face. However, Kai grabbed her hand just in time and pushed her back, into his lap. He shook his head and sighed mockingly.
"I thought you would have learned by now." He said, whilst Tala was grasping his side.
"Do me a favor and watch where you release your legs next time, will you? Owe." He said. "Wow, it seems the boy's on a rampage."
Hilary was trying to shake off Kai's grip, but it obviously wasn't working. If anything it seemed Kai was enjoying the situation, as much as he tried to keep his thoughts straight, the slim female rubbing herself against him like that was far too, tempting, for a guy like him. As difficult as it was, Kai kept himself together considering that Tala was there. He still couldn't help wanting her though, he didn't particularly want to – it wasn't difficult for him to bed a female – but she was just so attractive, even when in those grubby clothes. He could even safely say she was the most beautiful girl he'd ever seen, but it wasn't just that. There was also the fact that she didn't allow him to see that she liked him too. He knew she did, it was her cheeks firing up that had given it away, but no obvious indication that she did – not in the way he wanted her anyway.
"Why dun yer get someone else, an' leave me alone!" she screamed.
"Come now, this isn't any way to behave... if anything we're doing you a favor. Think of how pleased your group will be when – " ah yes, Kai actually got hit in the face this time (Bwahaha it was only a matter of time… don't get me wrong, I like Kai, he's awesome... But it's just fun, ne?)
But alas!This was not Hilary's night(or was it) as she still didn't manage to escape.
"Well that settles it then, I guess you'll have to sit on my lap for the rest of the journey" Kai smirked, somewhat sensually which made Hilary blush again. "It's your own doing." He said, matter of factly, at her expression, although he didn't seem to mind it at all.
He wasn't finished just yet though.
"And please, keep the bouncing to a minimum, it's abit weird don't you think?" His voice lowered so that Tala was unable to hear.
Hilary's eyes widened and she could practically feel the heat emitting from her cheeks. Is he flirting with me? That means that he…
That he what! That he what! Isn't it obvious?
If not then I suppose you'll just have to wait 'till next time. Damn my writer's block, this chapter was crappy and short, gomen, I tried. I'll try to try harder next time, promise… that makes sense, honest. Oh looky it rhymes. :) Anyway, don't forget to let me know what you want; more humor,more romance, or mixture of both as it is at the moment. (I think so anywhos) Review or message, by all means do what y'like!
Also, someone please help me come up with a better story title! In The Making is shitty and doesn't make much sense.
Danke, for reading; hope it didn't bore you too much. Okay I'll stop being pessimistic. ;D
