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Flaws In The System

Summary: Karin and Yuzu died, and are now Shinigami, oh joy! Yuzu, who is a natural talent, is put in the 9th division under Hisagi Shuhei. Karin... She's special in her own way... She can pick any division she wants. She just had to pick his division, though. Then there was the flaw. It was his girlfriend. She must destroy the flaw to get what she wants. And she wants Hitsugaya Toshiro. HitsuHina, IchiRuki, ShuRan. Anti- HitsuKarin and KiraHina


Chapter 1: The Mission

"Now then, Hitsugaya-taicho," the Soitaicho said. "You are going on a mission, as you know."

"Yes, Kazehana told me."

"Matsumoto-taicho, Hinamori-taicho, Abarai-fukutaicho, your 3rd seat, Akahana, the Kurosaki twins, yourself and your fukutaicho are going to the world of the living for a month to deal with a Menos problem. Kurosaki Isshin is there, but he needs back up. In the mean time you will attend Karakura High."

"Understood."

"You leave today, good bye and good luck."

"Thank you, sir."

The Senkaimon was opened, and the Shinigami stepped through.

"I'm so freaking excited!" Koyuki shouted.

"God, Kazehana-fukutaicho, please, SHUT UP!" Karin shouted.

This stopped everyone.

"Oh. I didn't know I bothered you so much, Kurosaki. I was just trying to keep the spirits up." She sounded serious for the first time.

"You guys, c'mon!" Akahana Airi called; she was the 10th's third seat, a joyful person with blonde hair with streaks of purple and red eyes.

"We're coming, Airi-san!" Momo called.

"Koyuki, are you ok?" Rangiku asked.

"I'm fine, Rangiku. I'm just… Fine."

"Ok…" Rangiku sighed.

You look nowhere near ok, Koyuki. It's a shame she doesn't know what you've been through, Rangiku thought.


After they were in the world of the living, it was a Saturday, and they got into Orihime's house and set up their rooms. That's where they were to stay this month.

"I'm glad I can help," she said, "Uryu and I will be in the room next door if you need anything."

"Hai."

"Koyuki-san, tell the truth, are you alright?" Momo asked.

"Well, that Kurosaki girl has no idea what I've been through."

Karin was on the other side of the door, and her fukutaicho already was pissed at her.

"She's here, you know," Yuzu said.

"I feel her reiatsu. Well, come in, Karin."

Karin saw that everyone was in the room.

"I'm gonna tell you all a story. And you'd better listen," Koyuki said.


So sorry this chapter is so short! I never thought I'd make it so short! Anyways, review!

Next time:

Chapter Two: Koyuki's Life Story

Matsumoto: This is gonna be interesting!

Toshiro: Yeah, it is.

Karin: Why?

Momo: You're gonna have to wait!

Renji: Koyuki's life story is a sad one :P

Airi: RENJI! It's a secret!

Koyuki: No one's gonna see this coming!