Thought I might publish the first main chapter
R&R Please, would really like the help so I can improve
Thanks for the reviews on the Prologue
2) Without You
Everything was a blur, Everything.
Everything happened so fast that Rachel could hardly remember the last hour. She got the call from The New York Memorial and all she could think about was Finn, screw speed limits on the highway.
Her heels clacked on the stone floor as she ran quickly throughout the hospital in desperate search for her husband, she went up to the first doctor she could, her heart in her sleeve and rather loudly blurted out
"Do you know where Finn Hudson's room is?" Rachel almost screamed with fear in her pupils
"Oh, you must be Mrs. Hudson." The woman replied, Rachel stayed silent as all she really wanted to do is see her husband, not shake some random woman's hand, "I'm Dr. Staff, I called, he's right at the end room on the left." She pointed down the long hall with various white doors in it.
"Thank You!" Rachel screamed as she was already half way down the hall looking her Finn's hospital room, she ran and she ran down the slippy floor in her tainted red high heels and then she saw him...She saw Finn.
A gentle tear rolled down her eyes as she was mesmerized by her unconscious husband.
He was alive.
At least.
For now.
She sat in the unoccupied chair next to the bed where she looked at all of the machines round the room and the tubes in his nose, the oxygen he needed, the oxygen he needed to be alive. Rachel in twined her hands with Finn and took a breath, stealing a moment from her non-crying addiction that she had, had in the last half an hour.
"Hi." She whispered, looking at his beautiful face
"Listen Honey, I know you can hear me..." she began, "and I just wanted to tell you that I know that you can pull through this because you're amazing..." a tear rolled down her face "...and I don't tell you enough but you need to know that I miss you and I will never, ever leave you."
She sighed, tears welling up in her eyes and then running down her face like a river
She was determined to keep that promise, she didn't leave him. Rachel knew that he could be leaving her for the rest of her life and she wanted to spend every moment with him
'Til death do us part
She remembered those words, as she gazed at him, constantly gazing at him. The only moment when she didn't look at his unconscious state was when Dr. Staff came in and apologized for the stress Rachel was under and explained;
"Well you're husband was at a red light at a T Junction and a Drunk Driver, swirved and hit the car. It looks from the x-rays that he has internal head damage caused by a blow to the head, so I think he hit his head on the dashboard and the broken glass from the impact."
Rachel cried.
She couldn't help it.
"I'm sorry Rachel, but visiting hours are well and truly over, I'm afraid you're going to have to leave." Dr. Staff explained with some form of care and humanity in her voice.
She looked at her husband, kissed him on the forehead and as slowly as she could left and then she heard it.
A grunt.
A hoarse grunt.
"What was that?" Rachel whispered trying not to get her hopes up
Dr. Staff looked round to Finn who showed some form of movement, she smiled as she went to get another member of staff.
Rachel ran as quick as lightning to Finn's side gently cupping her soft hands into his, and he squeezed back.
Rachel lost her breath momentarily.
And then she saw it, the flicked of the eye lid.
The flicker of his eye lid, his beautiful brown eyes starting to appear, as he coughed hoarsely
"Am I Dead?" said a deep hoarse voice coming from the newly-awaken Finn
Rachel smiled
"No," she whispered, "No, you're not." She smiled looking at her husband, everything started to feel right.
Finn opened his eyes properly now, and his eyebrows raised, looking at his was a beautiful chocolate bang wearing woman who looked in his eyes with...love.
He looked in to her eyes with confusion, he knew that nurses we're caring but he didn't think they would go to the extremes of holding his hand and looking into his eyes with love.
Rachel was confused, why wasn't he saying anything? Why wasn't he making a joke about how she looked like an angel? Why didn't he look like he was in love?
"H-Honey?" she stuttered, "D-Do you know who I-I am?" She questioned in doubt.
"Umm, My Nurse?" he guessed
"Finn, don't play dumb." Her voice was serious, scaring Finn a little, "Do you know who I am?" she whispered
"My Nurse?" he repeated
Rachel gasped.
Suddenly her whole world came crashing down
Hope it was OK,
I know it's very similar to "The Vow" but it will change, promise
Hope you enjoyed it, worked hard
