Chapter One:

Who the fuck are you?

So, here's the first rewritten chapter of Scarred One. Enjoy.

Killer: Wolf owns his OCs and plot only. Oda owns everything else

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It was a surprisingly quiet day on the Kid Pirate's ship. Killer sat on a barrel, watching his crewmates lounge around as they had apparently finished all their chores. It wasn't like their captain was any better. Kid was busy chatting with Heat about what they were going to have for dinner. Oh well, it wasn't as if they had anything better to do. The next island was more than an hour away (according to the look out anyway). Killer lightly brushed his ridiculously long hair with his fingers, getting rid of some of the tangles.

Killer's POV:

I was bored. So bored that I started to brush my hair with my freaking fingers. I sighed. We still had more than an hour to the next island where we can hopefully get some supplies, namely food and ammunition. I watched my fellow crewmates mess around the deck.

"You look bored out of your mind Killer." said Mitch. Mitch was one of the shipwrights. He had a black toque that he never took off covering his short black hair. His outfit consists of a leather jacket covering his torso and torn black jeans. He definitely was someone you would find at a rock concert.

"I can't wait until we get to the island. We can finally get some decent food for once." he said, sitting next to the barrel I'm sitting on.

"Well, to be fair, Heat's food isn't bad." I said, watching Kid grimacing since tonight we were having vegetable stir-fry with rice. Kid wasn't a huge picky eater and it's not like he doesn't like vegetables either (hell, his favorite food is stuffed cabbage rolls for crying out loud), but we did run out of meat last week so all we've had for the past week have been vegetables and rice so I did get how felt.

"Yeah, it's not bad, but I'm craving meat. That, and chocolate." Mitch said, laying down.

"What are you? A female on her period?"

"Eww! Don't even go there! This is why I'm not into women." Mitch said while sitting up, muttering the last bit. I chuckled quietly.

"Do me a favor and wake me up when we get to the island. Or when Kid does something stupid." I say, laying down on the deck.

"Will do. I'll wake you up when Kid falls into the ocean!" Mitch said, running towards Heat.

I laid there, pondering what we'll find on the island. With that thought, I fell asleep.

Timeskip 1 hour later (still Killer's POV):

I felt someone shaking my shoulder as I woke up from my nap. I look through my mask and see Mitch looking at me with a frantic expression.

"Killer! Are you awake?! I can't really tell, but this is urgent! Kid fell into the ocean!" he said. I stood up and stared at him. He started to fidget under my gaze.

"Okay, he didn't fall into the ocean, but we are at the island!" he said, trying to sound happy. I sighed and hit him upside the head. He yelped then mumbled how he deserved that.

"Next time you wake me up, do it normally." I say, walking towards Kid. I vaguely heard Mitch say "Will do!"

As I approached Kid, I assumed that he already gave out the orders as most of the crew were getting off the ship, the exceptions being myself, Mitch, Kid, Rusty and the twins, Snitch and Spoctor. Rusty is our youngest and newest member. He has fluffy brown hair that covers his eyes and wears a white tank top with jeans. Snitch and Spoctor on the other hand both have half-shaved dark green hair, light green eyes, and many piercings on their face, although slightly different from each other per Kid's orders (they loved to do the "Who is who?" game a bit too much). They both had a piercing on the bridge of their nose, but that was the only matching one they had. Snitch had many ear piercings while Spoctor had two eyebrow piercings on his left eyebrow.

"Hi Killer-san!" Rusty said as I approached them. Rusty definitely has an air of innocence that comes in handy when we try and use him as a hostage (he's acting of course).

"Hey Killer, we finally get to go to a bar." Snitch and Spoctor both said at the same time.

"We're getting information first, so drinks after." Kid growled as the twins whined about how strict the captain was. Kid, strict? Don't make me laugh.

We all got off the ship and heading inland towards the town. On the way, I looked at the docks and saw that our ship was the only one there.

Good, if there were other pirates here, I don't want to know what'll happen if they picked a fight with Kid. I thought to myself.

On the way to the bar, I barely acknowledged the locals, but I did notice a woman looking at us with a weird expression then running towards a house, but that wasn't anything new. We were the Kid Pirates after all. I could tell Kid saw her as well, as he had a smirk on his face. Entering the bar, we were greeted with a mostly empty, but still has a few people, bar. I let Kid talk/intimidate the barman for information and looked at the occupants. There was an older man sitting by himself nursing a cup of what looked like whiskey, a group of men playing cards, a woman reading a book while her male companion was sketching, and a lone woman with a white owl perched on her shoulder drinking water. Wait, what?

No one's POV:

Killer stared at the young woman sitting in the far corner. She had lavender colored hair that reached her shoulders, yellow green eyes, a red long sleeved shirt, and a dark purple skirt that reached her ankles. What shocked Killer the most, however, was the scars on her face. There was a large burn on her right cheek that also had what looked like two old vertical cuts, almost as though someone cut her even when she had a burn. On the opposite cheek, she had two horizontal scars as well. As Killer was observing the strange woman, her companion, the owl, noticed him staring and glared back with its piercing red eyes.

"Killer-san? Who are you looking at?" Rusty asked, curiously looking at where Killer was staring.

"Just some person." Killer said, finally looking away.

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So, sorry for the delay. It's been really bad for me lately. I hope you guys like the chapter. As you can maybe tell, I changed the appearances for a couple of my characters. If you guys want I can draw my characters and post it on DeviantArt, but I might not.