Hi guys thank you so much for the feed back and I have taken a note of it all and I do prooread all of my writing somtimes my eyes just miss some things anyway I hope you enjoy this again short chapter I am going to refere as shone as puke until I learn how to spel names
After me and puke eventually found our way to where everyone else was it was almost time for our meeting I guess you could call it so we went into the hall and we had this speechabout our stay at beacon first Ozbin spoke a little bit then Glinda spoke.
After the meeting we went to bed there was a room for boys and a room for girls (yes I know that's not how it was but if you watched Rwby you would know that Ruby and Yang wouldn't want her mum to know about all the boys in the room with them)
Before we went to sleep I saw theMysterious girl that helped me with the explosion again me and Yang went over to say hi but she was in her book and after a while of talking she told us kindly kinda to go.
I hope you have enjoyed this again verysmall chapters I am just really busy right now I will try to make longer ones in the future
Again please leave some helpful feedback on what you want to see next or on how you think I could improve my writing!
