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As soon as everybody jumps we all gather around who I presume to be the leaders. I know Max is one of them because I've seen Marcus talk to him before. I also see Six? I think that was her name. I should be listening although all I find myself doing is looking at is Six. Soon enough people start jumping off the building and I have no clue what is going on.
I quickly start listening again and it appears that we have to jump off the building to make it into dauntless. We're these tasks made to torture me? Soon it's only me and this dark haired erudite. I'm about to volunteer when he gets up and jumps. Great now it my turn
I don't think about anything and try to focus on the freedom that I can taste in my mouth. More freedom than I've ever had before. Soon I find myself bouncing off of something and a hand reached out to help me. I take it and soon realize who the hand belongs to. Six.
She looks at me and say "name" I think about this for a second and don't know what to say. Tobias is the boy who is afraid of his father, who everyone knows as the poor child from abnegation. "So" she says visibly annoyed that I haven't answered her yet. I'm about to blurt out a random name when she say "alright stiff it is" great. "I hear her say under her breathe "that's what everyone would've called you anyways". Then she points me to the side with the rest of the transfers.
"If you've made it this far it at least means that you don't suck" wow isn't she nice "yet" she continues. "My name is Six and I will be your trainer. You better make it count because I have a lot of better things to do seeing as I am a leader". I hear someone clear his throat. The same person who was talking to Six on the train. Six rolls her eyes and says "and this" she says as she places a hand on his shoulder "is Uriah he will be training you alongside myself. Over there are Lynn and Christina they will be training the Dauntless born."
"Come with us" Lynn says and the dauntless born start filing out. "Follow me and I'll show you to the pit" "wow clever name" some Candor says. I see the aggravated look become visible on Six and I know she's already had enough. She walks over to the candor girl who is probably a good 3 inches taller than her and says "if I wanted to deal with candor smart mouths a would've joined there faction" she moves closer to the girls face and says "the first lesson you will learn from me is to keep your mouth shut. You got that candor" with venom in her words.
She stares at her with the same cold stare she gave me on the train but, somehow worse. She turns around and Uriah is trying to contain his laughter as the candor girl looks like she is about to cry. Six leads the way and Uriah follows us close behind. We make it to the pit and I suddenly see why it's called that. There's no other way to explain it. It's a pit full of energy and life. I see Six watching our faces glow and a faint smile appears on her face.
She continues to show us around and the tour concludes with a place called the chasm. "Don't be stupid enough to try to jump and live" she say "an initiate every year jumps and I don't see any exception to you all." She looks down the chasm and almost looks sad. Uriah comes behind her and places a hand on her back. He smiles at her and brings her to the caf along with the rest of us. Are they together?
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