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Chapter 2: Waking up

When he woke up he was hot. When he opened his eyes he saw fire and heard screams. A man with demon wings and one foot as a hoof stood in front of him. A sinister smile was plastered on his face, as if he had just accomplished something purely evil. It sent shivers down his spine.

"Well! I see you're finally awake! How are you feeling?"

"Satan." He said. He tried to get up but was stopped by a bought of dizziness.

"You seem to know me. Now who are you?"

"A-Atem." He held his head. He felt like he had fallen a long distance. "W-Where am I?"

"In hell."He said smiling wickedly. Atem gasped and looked at his wings. They were still white but a few feathers were gray.

"I-I fell?" Satan's grin widened even more.

"Yes. And I'm here to ask…"

"No." He said it before he had even finished. Satan looked at him in surprise. No one had ever refused his offer. He tried to offer him in several different ways but he still said "No."

"Why? Why do you refuse?"Atem thought about it for a moment.

"I-I don't know. I just know that I can't. I made a promise to someone…I don't know who…I just know I have to keep it." Satan thought about it. Then he said.

"How about this: If you will catch demons and keep an eye on my son then I will not convert you." Atem looked at Satan with interest. This might work, he just had to make sure.

"You promise? You promise not to convert me? At all? No influence whatsoever?" Satan frowned. Atem knew how he worked, and he had made it so that there was no way he could get him. After trying to come up with a way to work around his promise he gave up and agreed. Atem got up unsteadily and looked around. Hell was exactly how he had pictured it. verything was either red from heat or burning. There didn't seem to be any people, unlike angel kingdom. He felt sad knowing that he would never see that place again. But he had to make due with what he had. At the center of the land there was a shining palace, falsely beautiful amongst all this carnage. It was the lure of temptation, Atem reasoned, the thing that drew all creatures of impure hearts to this place. He had no doubt that Satan lived in that palace. Satan conjured a scroll and said.

"This is a list of demons that are getting too frisky. I want you to capture them." Atem nodded and spread his wings. Despite his long fall they were actually intact and ready for flight. The only difference was the grey feathers. Atem knew that as time went on all of his feathers would turn grey, and then deepen to black. HE skyrocketed towards the sky of hell and to the human world. "When you get to the surface you need to get some new clothes! Fallen angels aren't often seen on the human world!" Atem raised his hand to show he had understood. As soon as he left Satan growled and punched the ground. This angel was smart. There had been nothing he could do to get him under his control. He growled. At least he could get the demons he wanted back. But quietly he plotted to get him to join….one way or another.


Yugi watched as his brother stepped off the cliff. He ran to the edge and watched as he fell headfirst toward earth. There was a brief flash of red and he was gone. Yugi cried silent tears. They fell like diamonds toward the sky. Clouds began to colas and it started to rain.

"Atem…..Atem…..why didn't you let me fall too?" He whispered these words over and over as he watched the earth for some sign of his brother. He just wanted to know he was all right. He bent over the ledge for several days. Angels tried to move him, but every attempt caused the young angel to send a blast of his magic that would tear them off of him , and he would be back at the cliff. After twenty days an angel came to his family. He bowed his head as a sign to their grieving.

"Miss Evan. Your son has been at that cliff for over twenty days. He doesn't eat, he doesn't sleep, he just stares at the spot where your son disappeared." Yugi's mother bowed her head as well.

"We know. We've tried to bring him back but he won't move. He refuses. His bond with his brother is too strong. When Atem fell a part of him fell with him." She diverted her eyes, as if ashamed to ask what she said next. "We…we know this isn't done often…but we would like to have the council perform the spell of forgetfulness." The angel looked down.

"The council was already considering this…I was sent to offer that as an option…You must know that if the spell is placed upon him…he won't be able to live with you…He'll have to live with another family until the spell is ready to break." They looked down.

"We know…we have decided that we would rather see our son happy again than have him be with us." The angel nodded.

"I will notify the council of your decision…I grieve for your loss, Atem was a good angel." With that he left. Five days later the council was gathered on the cliff. Yugi would not move so they had to conduct the spell around him. Gabriel started, one by one the angels joined in the spell. When the incantation had passed around in a circle three times Yugi's eyes became absolutely blank. He fell asleep and his family picked him up and gave him to the designated family.

"Take good care of him." His mother muttered.

"We will, don't worry." They nodded and the new family turned and carried him away.

End chapter

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