Disclaimer: You know I don't own Rosario+Vampire honestly if I owned it then I'd be drawing the freaking manga not writing this
Author's Notes: Okay this is prewritten as well so may not correspond to the reviews but it is edited slightly to match reviews the best I could in my brief scan anyway: As you can probably guess this chapter features meeting with Kurumu. The Kurumu I've decided to put in the story is: the more mature personality and stronger powers (witchcraft in addition to flying and melee combat) of the manga version, with the less revealing outfit from the anime. She'll still be the main coquette like she is in both but is more mature and friendlier to other people
I normally don't respond to reviews but I guess I'd better because I've already had to review my own story once to answer and don't want to again:
The Question Mark Guy and Black Nhite: I'm keeping this single line form with plenty of dialogue but after I update my next chapter I'm going to add some more detail and hope people can visualize things better and as you can clearly see I've deleted the intro and sincerely hope nobody noticed it when it was still up (1 day so let's hope not)
One Little Looksee: Okay thanks for the compliment and for somewhat adding constructive criticism to your review but since this ties to the other reviews: I know that the antagonist SEEMED very shallow so for one hold it before you say that again because she and her family DID have a significant impact on Wayne's past so even if this is a bit of a spoiler (you asked for it sorry guys): Her family's dead and made Wayne's life miserable but thanks to them Wayne's met people and has knowledge of many things which will be implemented in the story they will be mentioned one or two times but they're officially dead and Wayne's sorta their legacy since he's their "masterpiece", anyway when one of you asked how that final battle was important: well he's permanently free I'll tell you that and it's important because his past deeds and knowledge will eventually have an impact.
Okay now that you know HOW hard it is for me to not overwrite in the A/N: unless it's important and I can't respond via PM beware of these incredibly huge openings and hopefully you'll have slightly less complex questions. That being said: R&R
Succubus and Vampire
Tsukune Aono walked towards school feeling quite calm now compared to his regular nervous wreck.
"I've attended this school for a few weeks now and I think I've actually gotten used to things here", thought Tsukune, "Wayne's a really great friend for giving me this thing and Moka…Moka"
Just the thought of Moka made Tsukune drool. Then he started to hear many male voices give out all too familiar lines.
"I guess she's here already"
Sure enough when Tsukune turned around he saw his dream girl Moka followed by a huge group of boys shouting out compliments which she seemed quite oblivious to
"Good Morning Moka!", called Tsukune
"Hmm? Oh Tsukune!", cried Moka as she suddenly jumped towards Tsukune and hugged him much to the displeasure of the large mob of boys
"What? That guy again?", "No way! How come he gets the cute girl", "Curse you Aono!", the mob of boys shouted behind Tsukune
"I really hope that some other girl gets their attention soon or I'm gonna be turned into monster chum!"
Little did Tsukune know that such a thing would indeed happen sooner than he would expect…
"Excuse me, get outta my way, I don't care how long you've been here I gotta go, hey Move!, Good Morning Moka, Good Morning Tsukune!", shouted a familiar voice from the crowd
"Hmm?, oh Wayne, glad you're here!", called back Tsukune
"Man, this crowd of suitors just never shrinks does it?", said Wayne, "Can't say I could take all this attention very well"
"Yeah, if there were a bunch of girls fighting over me I'd have a nervous breakdown right about now", replied Tsukune
"Well that'd be…interesting", replied Wayne, "That would be hilarious! I have to find some girls and get Tsukune a harem…nah that'd be hilarious but I think it'd bother Tsukune too much and I owe him…still that would be funny though", he decided
"Wayne what are you doing?", asked Moka
"Hmm oh…nothing", replied Wayne, "anyway before these guys make Tsukune their chew toy I say we get out of here"
"I agree!", exclaimed Tsukune as he grabbed Moka's hand ran away
"Ha are you sure you aren't making an excuse to hold her hand?", thought Wayne grinning devilishly, "I'll have to start recording this through my helmet when I can"
"Hey Tsukune?"
"Hmm what's wrong Moka?"
"You're holding my hand…"
"What? Oh nononono wait I"
"Aww your face turned red"
"Huh? Wha- nononono I'm"
"Mmmmm I can smell your blood now too"
"Wait what are you-"
"Sorry Tsukune, KAPPU CHUUUUUU!"
"AHHHHH I'M NOT YOUR FOOD!", screamed Tsukune as he ran away
"Moka did you suck Tsukune's blood again?", asked Wayne as he finally caught up to Moka
"Well…yes but only a little and well I felt some of my own blood leave my body too", replied Moka
"That's good then. The seal's working", Wayne said relieved, "But really! Even if it might be safer for you to suck his blood now you still can't just randomly suck his without his permission!"
"Well…."
"I'll admit it's pretty entertaining to watch him freak out but hey you're my friends and as friends we have to look out for each other rather than mentally maim each other!"
"I-I know but I…"
Wayne sighed mentally. Maybe he was being a bit too harsh after all it was only natural that vampires drink humans' blood.
"Okay I'm sorry maybe I was a bit harsh it's just that well…you're my friends and so I also have to look out for you guys okay? So just try asking for his permission first you know?"
"Of course thanks Wayne I'll apologize the next time I see him", replied Moka
"Aw that's unfortunate", thought Inner Moka to herself making sure not to broadcast it to the other her or anyone else. She really liked the taste of Tsukune's delicious blood even if only through the other Moka's sense of taste
Meanwhile Tsukune had stopped by a pond to catch his breath after sprinting off
"It doesn't really hurt to bad and Wayne's seal keeps me from bleeding to death but still! What am I to Moka…Am I really just food for her?", wondered Tsukune as a mental image of a straw coming from his neck came into view, "I hope not! Moka's too important to me if I'm only food for her then-"
Suddenly he heard crying nearby
"Huh what's going on?", wondered Tsukune as he followed the sound, "It sounds like a girl"
Sure enough, Tsukune then saw a girl with blue hair in a ponytail wearing a sweater vest variant of the girls' school uniform kneeling by the side of the pond and decided to walk up to her
"Hey are you alright?", Tsukune asked the girl
"I-I don't think so I just suddenly started feeling ill", the girl replied back
"Okay come on I'll take you to the school infirmary", Tsukune said as he helped her up
"Thank you very much, I've always felt so weak until now my name's Kurumu Kurono", the girl said
"I'm Tsukune Aono glad to meet you", replied Tsukune
"Oh Tsukune will you hold me?"
"Huh? Wha-WHOA!", Tsukune exclaimed as Kurumu suddenly a little too close for comfort to him, his face turning red from embarrassment
"Oh please be my friend Tsukune", Kurumu practically pleaded
"Ummm I-uh"
"Look down into my eyes"
"Wha-"
"Charm!", Kurumu exclaimed starting to grin
Suddenly Tsukune started to feel dizzy with a sense of vertigo, "Whoa what am I feeling?", wondered Tsukune
"Well come on! Lets go Tsukune!", said Kurumu and practically began dragging him to school
"So much for feeling weak", thought Tsukune as Kurumu pulled him to school
"Ah Tsukune? TSUKUNE!", exclaimed Moka as Tsukune came into view
Moka suddenly felt so happy he'd come back…holding hands…with a…girl…
"What? What's going on", thought Moka as she ran towards Tsukune
"Huh wha-", Tsukune began
"Damn the charm must have worn off. Oh well here's another one!"
"Oh Moka…", Tsukune said in monotone, "came to suck my blood again…?"
"What? No! I-"
"You only stick around with me to suck my blood…go away you freak…", said Tsukune still in monotone
"Tsukune…"
"I'd rather stick with Kurumu Kurono here…She doesn't stick around me to suck my blood unlike you…", Tsukune beckoned towards the girl holding hands with him
"Awww how sweet Tsukune lets go!", Kurumu said turning around pulling Tsukune with him
"What? Why did I just say something like that to Moka? That's not how I really felt…was it?", thought Tsukune as Kurumu pulled him away
"Ts..Ku…Ne…", Moka started crying as Tsukune left with Kurumu
"Yes! She started to cry! Just a little more pressure and she'll be completely heartbroken!", thought Kurumu
"Hey Moka! How'd your discussion with Tsukune g-…oh not so well huh…?", said Wayne as he saw Moka
"He…he just ran away with some other g-girl and said I-I only stuck around with him to s-s-suck his b-blood", Moka stammered with tears coming out of her eyes
"Hey hey hey come on! I'm sure he didn't mean it he's probably still just mad or something. Give him a little time and he should come apologize", replied Wayne
"Yeah o-okay I'll talk to him later", said Moka wiping away her tears
Moka sighed in the hallway. It had been hours after Tsukune had left saying such horrible things…
"Tsukune and that girl really looked like lovers just now…do I really just want to suck his blood", wondered Moka
"Hey you're Moka Akashiya the vampire right?", Moka heard a voice above her say
"Huh?", she looked up to see the same girl who had ran off with Tsukune
"Glad to meet you", she said jumping down and flashing a group of boys behind her
"Wow did you just see that?", "Yeah I did", "Who is she?", "She has such a small body but it's soooooo gorgeous", the boys behind her said while drooling, "Her beauty rivals that of Moka!"
"What's going on here?", wondered Wayne as he walked down the hallway. Then he noticed the drooling boys and Moka and the other girl
"Huh…she's emitting some kind of aura seems familiar…wait is she a-"
"My name's Kurumu Kurono in case you didn't get it the first time we met and I'm a succubus", said Kurumu
"Yep I thought so I'd better stay out of her line of sight", decided Wayne as he edged away behind a pillar
"But isn't it against the school rules to reveal your true form?", asked Moka
"Yeah well it doesn't matter. Anyway I'm here to utterly destroy you!", said Kurumu
"Destroy? Why? Succubae and Incubi (A/N: The male version of a succubus) don't do anything outside seducing the opposite gender and trying to survive unless they actually have a reason", wondered Wayne "come to think of it…how is she going to even do that…oh wait lemme guess probably emotionally…guess that's why Moka was crying this morning", he assumed
"Why what do you want from me?", asked Moka
"Simple: my plan was to completely turn every boy in Youkai Academy into my love slaves which would have worked!", explained Kurumu with a twinkle in her eye, "However I found a bit of a problem: Instead of falling for me every boy in the school is falling for you!", her face now turning red with anger
"But I can't control that!", exclaimed Moka
"Whether you can or not doesn't matter I'm going to get you out of the picture by taking Tsukune away from you!"
"I see…that would explain a bit", decided Wayne, "I guess she knows how close Tsukune is to Moka and is trying to break her heart by charming Tsukune", then it hit him, "That's why she was so upset! Kurumu here must have charmed Tsukune and forced him to say horrible things to Moka...Ouch having no control over your actions sucks and I guess being plain out insulted by someone close to you hurts even more", he grimaced and cringed at remembering how many times he had to fight for no reason after all he preferred not to fight and even if he had to: not in his final form
Suddenly Tsukune came running over
"Hey! Hey Moka!", called Tsukune
"Oh great that's what I call a case of being in the wrong place at the wrong time", thought Wayne frowning
"Ah Tsukune!", Kurumu called and got in his way
"Wait I have to talk to Moka first", said Tsukune
"Charm!"
Tsukune then started to feel the same sense of vertigo as before
"Okay Tsukune what did you want to say to Moka?", asked Kurumu
"Uh…Moka you are just a cold-hearted bitch whom I never want to see again ever. Now I want to just spend time with Kurumu", Tsukune said in a monotone voice
"Uh oh I think Tsukune's been charmed again!", thought Wayne
"Oh…Tsukune…", purred Kurumu
"But-but I-", stammered Moka
"Leave me alone forever. Let's go Kurumu", said Tsukune turning around, "Why am I saying such things!", wondered Tsukune
Tsukune then took Kurumu's hand and left while Moka ran the other direction crying
"Nuts!", thought Wayne as he calculated the odds. He only had a 1 in 30 chance of being able to completely resist a succubus' charm. Even then she'd probably get him again. His best chance was to get Moka but she seemed depressed enough to try something crazy..."I gotta get to Moka now before she does something rash!", thought Wayne as he snuck away
Tsukune then took Kurumu into the nurse's office when she wasn't there and sat down on a bed while Kurumu kneeled on the bed and cheered
"YES! I now officially broke Moka's heart! I should have recorded that"
"Why did I say such things and why did I feel weird too I like I was asleep", pondered Tsukune
Tsukune then stood up much to the surprise of Kurumu
Meanwhile Moka was crying outside the building with her face in her hands
"Why…Why? I thought Tsukune and I were better than this! I-I guess this is my fault for just drinking his blood", Moka thought aloud. She then saw the water fountain…water…, "I should just end this all"
"DON'T", shouted Inner Moka from the Rosario
"What?"
"It's not your fault or Tsukune's! It's that girl, she's charmed Tsukune into practically her slave. Any man will do as a succubus wants after falling for her charm ability and if she kisses him right on the lips he'll be her slave forever!"
"Bu-But what can I do?"
"If you want to save Tsukune you have to stop that girl from kissing Tsukune or he'll be her slave forever!"
"But where is-"
Hey Moka!", Wayne shouted, "Tsukune doesn't mean what he said it's the succubus' charm! You've got to get to him before she kisses him or he's a goner! Come on he's in the infirmary!"
"Well you already knew the details about succubae but at least now you know where he is come on you have to get to him in the infirmary!", said Inner Moka
Meanwhile in the Infirmary…
"I have to go to Moka and apologize", declared Tsukune
"Oh no but stay here for now though", said Kurumu pushing him on the bed
"What but-"
"Charm!"
Tsukune then felt the same vertigo again and fell back on the bed
"I can't let the vampire get you back! So I guess I'll just do this!", Kurumu then puckered her lips and moved towards Tsukune
"w-wait no!", exclaimed Tsukune pushing Kurumu aside and hugged her instead
"What? How?"
"I'm sorry but I've got someone else in mind and I can't break my faith", said Tsukune once again rising
Kurumu sighed. "Too bad this guy actually seemed pretty sweet and handsome but well I'll have to find another", she thought as she suddenly grew a pair of bat wings, forked tail and her nails extended to claws
"WHAT THE?", shouted Tsukune in utter shock as Kurumu stood up, claws bared
"I worked so hard to get you away from Moka but you've resisted my charm too much! Sorry honey but I'll have to kill you", said Kurumu
"GAH", yelled Tsukune, "Oh no! I won't even be able to apologize to Moka!"
Suddenly the door burst open and Moka and Wayne ran in
"Okay look I know you're upset Kurumu but maybe we can negotia-", started Wayne
"Get your hands off my man!", shrieked Moka shoving Kurumu out the window with all her strength
"Aw…now she'll be pissed you know?", complained Wayne
"Whatever come on Tsukune!", shouted Moka helping Tsukune up
"W-what?"
"That woman was a succubus", explained Moka
"Long story short: She wanted to enslave all the guys in school. Moka was the one person standing in her way. She wanted to break Moka's heart by enslaving you. She was about to kiss you and permanently enslave you", Wayne finished
"Right now come on we have to leave!", shouted Moka
Tsukune was about to get up and run when Kurumu's tail wrapped him by the neck and pulled him out the window
"Tsukune!", cried Moka as she grabbed Tsukune and got pulled out the window with him
"Ah dammit!", said Wayne as he jumped out the window and flew after them
Kurumu started panting and suddenly dropped Tsukune and Moka. They were just too heavy for her
"You guys alright?", asked Wayne as he landed beside them
"Yeah I'm alright!", replied Tsukune, "Come on we have to-"
"DUCK!", shouted Wayne pushing down Tsukune and Moka
"Oh snap!", shouted Wayne as he ducked fight before Kurumu swiped her claws through the forest cleanly cutting down several trees.
"Like a knife through butter", murmured Moka
"Oh boy I hope those trees grow back soon or else the campus' environment will sure be in trouble", said Wayne as all three looked up at Kurumu
"ARG why couldn't you leave me alone?", shouted Kurumu
"What?", asked Moka
"We succubae must enslave large groups of men in order to choose our life's destined one so we may help repopulate our small race", explained Kurumu, "Instead, you walked right into my scheme and stopped it! You must all die!", she shrieked
"Quick Tsukune remove the Rosario!", exclaimed Moka
"Alright!", Tsukune responded and pulled…But it wouldn't budge, "What? It came off the first time!, exclaimed Tsukune
"Hahaha whatever you do is useless!", shouted Kurumu, "It's only a matter of time before you all die!"
"If I die then I'll make sure my friends survive!", shouted Tsukune as he stood up and also pulling off the Rosario
"What? What is this?", exclaimed Kurumu as Moka suddenly glowed and grew more muscular and her hair changed to silver
"Ah thanks for that Tsukune I'll take care of this", said Inner Moka
"What? But how?", asked Tsukune
"Well", Wayne explained, "Rosario seals can only be removed when the person removing it fulfills a certain quality. I think that you didn't quite meet that the first time but it seems you suddenly gained that the second time"
"What was it?"
"I don't know. Maybe courage or sacrifice?", guessed Wayne, "either way let's see how this turns out", said Wayne turning back to watch the battle
"Ha! So what if you grew a bit! I'll still destroy you!", shouted Kurumu as she flew towards Moka
Inner Moka sighed and shook her head, "You act like a little devil but you're just a naïve little girl"
"What?"
"You really are too overconfident. KNOW YOUR PLACE", shouted Moka as she roundhouse kicked Kurumu through 2 trees to be stopped by the third one and then fall to the ground
"I…I never knew you were this strong", panted Kurumu
"Hah how about I snap off your wings and tail so you never fly again!", said Inner Moka as she walked towards Kurumu grinning evilly
"Isn't that a bit harsh?", asked Wayne
"I don't think so. Time for her punishment"
"No NOOOOO!", screamed Kurumu as Moka brought back her foot for another kick. Suddenly she heard something get hit but not her…
"What?", she wondered
"Why did you do that?", asked Moka angrily as Tsukune stood back up, "The other Moka would be furious!"
"He…he took the hit for me…"
"That was meant for her you fool! If I hadn't seen you running and hadn't tried to hold back you could have been killed!", Moka berated Tsukune
"I know that", said Tsukune coughing, "But look at her! She's been defeated already!"
"Well he's got a point you know", responded Wayne
"Anyway I don't think Kurumu is a bad person anyway! She did something bad but it's not like she had bad intentions at the start! I think we could all get along together right Moka? That's what you think right?", asked Tsukune
"Tsukune…", said Kurumu before she started crying loudly
"Hah, you misunderstand", said Moka
"What?"
"The other outer me might say that but I'm nothing like her at all unlike her who wanted to save you because she cared for you I only saved you to save your blood for me to drink", Inner Moka said as she put the Rosario back on
"Whoa…", said Tsukune
Meanwhile Kurumu had fainted from exhaustion
"I don't get her", said Wayne, "One minute she actually seems decently friendly to help out someone in need but then she's a cold-hearted demon"
"Well I don't know what to do about that but I really don't think she's a bad person", responded Tsukune as he and Wayne started taking Kurumu and Moka to the girls' dorms
"Hah I'm impressed by you Tsukune", laughed Wayne
"What?"
"You can take virtually any physical blow despite your weak body and you can't really hold a grudge", explained Wayne
"Well...", said Tsukune looking up, "I don't know about taking any hit because even now Moka's kick hurts like heck even when she was holding back but well I just can't hold a grudge"
"Hmph I envy you", said Wayne
"How so?"
Wayne slouched a bit, "The last of my masters' dynasty is gone by my own hand and yet I still want to go to their old residence and spit on their graves, dig them up, and throw them to space to drift forever", said Wayne tightening one of his fists
"Hey hey come on look on the bright side: They gave you immortality, power, and wisdom", said Tsukune trying to cheer him up
"True but really...I was made to be their unstoppable machine of destruction for what I believe to be their own entertainment or some bigger plan", said Wayne, "And I just want to live a normal life so I'm going back to school and all", he said sadly, "I can't even remember my old life that was stolen from me"
"Well how's the search?"
"Not so good I haven't found out much yet other than they let me keep my real first name and Galvan was just something the codename of the project which I assume was picked randomly"
"Don't give up", said Tsukune patting him on the back and accidentally Kurumu's hand
"Thanks man I owe you big, I'll keep searching for my past but I'll be around when you need me", Wayne said as the two of them reached the girls' dorms
"Okay I guess we drop them inside the front in the lounge and get out quick", said Wayne
"Good idea"
The two of them left Kurumu and Moka still asleep in the lounge to be taken back to their rooms by the other residents
The next day Tsukune, Moka, and Wayne stood outside of school
"You say the Rosario talked to you?", asked Tsukune
"Yes and I'm afraid the seal might be weakening", replied Moka
"Not likely", responded Wayne
"Hmm?"
"Rosario seals can last for a long time and only start to weaken if they've been spiritually damaged and not repaired adequately. My theory is that the other you is strong enough to be able to contact you despite the seal. Besides Rosario seals don't really completely cut off contact between two personalities they just keep one personality dominant so she's probably just trying manifesting herself", explained Wayne
"Yeah I hope so", said Moka "But anyway if I completely turned what would you think of me?"
"Well I'd still view you the same way", said Tsukune
"Same here", said Wayne, "Besides all three of you freed me in the first place, Tsukune and both Mokas
But Tsukune and Moka were ignoring Wayne and looking deeply into each others' eyes repeating each others' names
"Riiiight…man I feel ignored…oh well they probably deserve a moment", decided Wayne, "…I imagine this will happen pretty often", He thought absentmindedly as they moved their faces together, "Poor guy he probably thinks it's a kiss but Moka'll likely miss and suck his blood instead"
Wayne was about to pull them apart as soon as he saw Moka's fangs when he heard Kurumu's voice
"Good Morning Tsukune!", called Kurumu from behind utterly scaring Moka and Tsukune out of their wits resulting in Tskune falling face first on the floor and Moka jumping almost two feet in the air
"Wow they must have pretty sensitive nervous systems and hearing", thought Wayne
"I baked some cookies for you this morning we can eat them together if you want!", said Kurumu
"W-Why me?", asked Tsukune
"Seriously, didn't I tell you I was looking for my life's destined one?", asked Kurumu
Tsukune and Moka nervously nodded, while Wayne remained indifferent
"Well…I've decided it to be Tsukune!"
"EHHHH?", exclaimed Tsukune and Moka
"Oh man this is rich! I'd better start filming now!" thought Wayne as he grew an eyepiece on his left eye and started recording (A/N: For those who know: Think of Garrus' sniper eyepiece from Mass Effect…yup just like that if you don't know just look it up on the mass effect wikia under Garrus Vakarian)
"Didn't you risk yourself to protect me from death? You even took me back to the girls' dorms and risked your reputation and health again! I've completely fallen for you!", Kurumu exclaimed rubbing her breasts against Tsukune
"Hmm...I was in it but the guy deserves some credit so I'll let him take it", thought Wayne still watching
Moka growled, "No! Tsukune is mine!", shouted Moka grabbing him away
"Oh yeah?"
"Yeah!"
Tsukune then took this as an opportunity to escape
"Oh no I don't go well with crowds and if any other guys see me I'm dead meat!", panicked Tsukune
"Hey Tsukune come back!", shouted Moka chasing after him
"Oh Tsukune just marry me already!", Kurumu called also chasing after him
"Hey it's that Aono guy again", "What? He's got two hot girls now?", "Hey that's Moka and Kurumu after him that's not fair!", shouted a bunch of boys as Tsukune ran past them with Moka and Kurumu right behind him
Suddenly Tsukune tripped and turned over
"Hey Tsukune Kiss Me!", exclaimed Kurumu as she jumped on him
"No do it with me!", shouted Moka pushing Kurumu off and landing on him instead
"Ohhhhh his blood smells soooo good!", Moka thought as she started drooling
"Huh? Hey wait what?"
"Sorry Tsukune KAPPU CHUUUUUUU!"
"AHHHHHH!"
"Hey you can't suck my Tsukune's blood!", shouted Kurumu as she grew her nails back into claws
"Oh man this is going to be more interesting of a year than I thought", thought Wayne as he watched Kurumu start to chase Moka in circles while Tsukune still lay on the ground with his seal glowing and the crowd of Moka and Kurumu's suitors watched and made bets
Alright that chapter's over and man that was long again…oh well. That was Kurumu's debut up next is Yukari's debut and again: Updates will be pretty random so be patient also leave some constructive reviews thanks!
