To see if you're interested here's my very generic first clip. (Using mainly pronouns):
The blaring sound of the siren cracked the half-peace that had enveloped the tower. The new titans dashed from the safety and serenity of their rooms into the common room. One of the titans covered their ears and nearly howled, "Make it stop! Make it stop!"
"I'm so excited its, our very first mission!" cried a perky young boy. He made a run for the door but was blocked by the team's new leader.
"You can't just go leaping in to trouble like that. We need to no what we're up against." He scolded and walked over to the super computer. The tall boy punched in a few words before continuing. "See if you hadn't waited we'd never know we were going to face a fifty-foot mon-!" The leader barely managed the first syllable before a scaly green lizard ripped its tail into the tower.
The tower started to shake and the titans braced them self for the worst.
Sorry, that's all you get for now! Send in your characters please!
