Clash of the Populars
Hey Guys, thanks!
I'm so glad that I got one review! LOL…
I did the first chappie during Geography so this one is longer!
I would like it if you review but if you don't want to I might run out of inspiration.
Recognition:
To Forever Unknown69: Thanks and keep supporting because as soon as I read your review…
kInagoshi – Thanks for the inspiration! I started writing as soon as I read your review. Thanks
Silver Ride- I took your idea into consideration and here is the result. I hope its longer. Its meant to be 1100 words and Brigid is so a (in your words) a female dog. FAX IS MY GOAL but if people don't review, I might take that into consideration and make it Fissa. I won't but I'm a TOTAL FAX FAN. Thumbs up if you agree…
Sun Alice Auguste- I was going to ignore the fact that I was going to skip the boxing part but went back JUST FOR YOU so I had to change some parts. I hope that you will continue supporting me!
Disclaimer: I don't own Maximum Ride
I updated a wayyy longer chapter.
So to you folks, READ N REVIEW OR CRITICISE!
Okay! So maybe I didn't wait but people please review. How would you feel if you got a detention because you were writing Fanfiction in class and got nothing back?
Max POV
The boxing battle began. We circled around each other in the ring. My arms raised defensively. My blue boxing gloves were placed into front of my chest. We blocked and dodged attacks from each other. We withdrew, breathing heavily. Determined onyx eyes met my own. Perspiration from his head, flowing freely, dribbles down his jaw and down his chest. That chest… He probably had a six pack! I'm so jealou- noo I mean sorry for his sweat. I shook my head as he gave me an infuriating smirk. A burst of adrenaline shot through me as I flew toward and was rewarded with a strong punch to the gut. Nick would pay. Letting out an animalistic growl, I pounced on him again and started pounding his head. He grunted in agony and instinctively lashed his leg out. I released a moan of pain and fell forward.
Umph!
Fang POV
Max fell on me with an umph, her lips pressing on mine. They were so soft. Her lips moved in sync with mine. White light flashed behind my shut eyelids. I deepened the kiss and tilted my head as she straddled my hips. Her long silky locks covered my lips as we kissed, sweetly and gently.
"UHEM! Maximum Ride and Nicholas Venom! PDA is not allowed in this school!" the coarse voice of the Coach broke our forbidden acts to a halt. "Detention for a week!" Max scrambled off me but I continued to admire her natural beauty. Her face seemed to glow with natural radiance and her eyes were just- CRAP!
Wolf whistles and giggled were exchanged throughout the whole room. The school would know by tomorrow, I bet. That Misa and Brianna girl were there and there was no doubt that the twin bitches would spill to the rest.
The redheads glared at Max intensely (but crappily) and clenched their fists. Max seemed completely unaffected but instead was throwing a harsh glare at my head. I swear if looks could kill. Max would be dead by now.
Lissa POV
How dare that BIATCH go near my Nicky! She cheated with my boyfriend. No one does that to Lissa Ridges! I strutted up to my BF with Brigid next to me.
"Hey Nicky," I said sexily. He shivered but it was probably because of my hotness.
Brigid swayed her hips and like the slut she was, she started to rub MY spot. She wrapped her legs around his legs and began to smile seductively. Her cracked lips inched close to MY Nicky's lips. Oh no she didn't!
SLAP! Brigid's face flew backwards and a blossom of utter joy filled my heart. That science freak bitch deserved it! She turned her head with a murderous glare. A red handprint was left, smudging her foundation that she had put layers and layers upon.
"Nicky, she hit me," the slut whined to Nick.
"So? I don't give the crap about you!" Nick hissed before stalking away. The echoes of Brigid's defeat were passed on in the hallway. I strutted away, swaying my delicious hips and knew that out friendship was over. Brigid the Bitch was going DOWN!
Max POV
I marched down the hall. No guy takes away my first kiss like that! I was the unbreakable and untouchable Maximum Ride. I gasped, stopping in my tracks. Brigid was feeling Nick up and her legs were hooked around his waist. That MANWHORE! And from that day, I knew Nick as the player that girls didn't see coming.
I flew after him and he proceeded to escape down the hall. My anger had just been set alight and it was blazing. "NICHOLAS!" I screamed in utter annoyance. He turned to look at me and flinched. Shit was going down…
Nudge POV
OMG! Lissa just slapped Brigid across the face! I'm so gonna tell Max. I bounded down the hall to see Max glaring at Fang.
Max calls him Nick because she wasn't allowed to our sleepovers with Iggy because she was grounded for a month for blowing up the kitchen. Oh NO! Crap is going down…
I need some ideas to happen in detention…
Oh, my wonderful readers… I am easily touched by reviews. Type two sentences and I'm onto the next chapters. My chapters are a little short because I'm trying to update as fast as possible.
So Reviewing Rules:
3-5 = Updating in the next 5hrs
2 = Updating tomorrow
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Review Questions
Who should be Max's sister- Ella or Nudge?
Who is the other pairing? Eggy? Nazzy? Niggy?
Can you please give me some teachers' names'?
1100 words next time…
Your Dedicated Writer,
WingedAngel8
PS ( I am also a manga freak so if you know any good mangas- review and tell me)
PPS( I don't really care if your review has almost nothing to do with the story)
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