December 25, 2006
Disclaimer: I don't own YGO GX.
Title: Honor your commitment
Author: ImHotAndSexy
Genre: Romance
: Science Fantasy
Summary: Alexis is an obelisk blue. She was the best. Yet a time comes when no one could save her… except for a certain silfer slacker.
Notes: well this is my first story on this show… review please and if u have any good ideas, feel free to discuss.
Bold - emphasis on words
Italics - Flashbacks or thoughts
Brackets – Author notes
A/N: ok…. Fine I admit. I dun check my grammar
Qu-ko: Ok…. I saw the mistakes and changed it…. my "…" are for creating tension.
(I'm going to make this more fun. I am going to change the duel. You know mega man? It's kind of like that. A person will have only one monster. When the duel starts, he will become that monster and fight out with the other dude. There will be equip, spell and traps for them. When his life points go to 0, he loses. During a shadow duel, the battles become real, for example, if a person was holding a sword and he cuts the opponent, it will be a real cut. Oh yeah and their weapons will be random. At the starting, there will be weapons scattered across the arena)
Chapter 1 – my first battle, my first win
Night came quickly to Duel Academy
The sun hovered briefly on the horizon, then dipped below. At once, the clouds rolled in – first red, then mauve, silver, green and black as if all the colors in the world were being sucked into a vast melting pot. A single frigate bird soared over the mangroves, its own colors lost in the chaos behind it. The air was close. Rain hung waiting. There was going to be a storm.
The single engine Cessna Sky Hawk SP circled twice before coming in the land. It was the sort of plane that would barely be noticed, flying in his part of the world. That was why it had been chosen. If anyone had been curious enough to check the registration number printed under the wing, they would have learned that this plane belonged to a photographic company based in Jamaica. This was not true. There was no company and it was already too dark to take photographs.
There were twenty one people in total on the plane. The pilot had long black hair, deep brown eyes and a thin scar running down his check. He had only met his passengers that afternoon. He had received an order from very high up and was told to send those twenty aged fourteen to eighteen students to this special coordinates. 201 -1232 what the hell? The pilot wondered, it is in the middle of the frigging sea. The pilot almost choked on his coffee when he saw what was in front of him.
A huge uncharted island appears right in front of him, and there were huge buildings all around the island. The pilot glanced down at the multifunction display in the control panel. The illuminated computer screen was warning him of landless sea. That didn't worry him; after all, it wasn't really landless is it?
There it was, the island, stretching out before him, three hundred kilometers long and nine kilometers across at its widest point. The sea around it, which had been an extraordinary, brilliant blue until a few minutes ago, had suddenly darkened, as if someone had thrown a switch.
The pilot looked out of the darkened wind screen and found the run way. It was a rough strip of land on the edge of the coast, hacked out of the jungle and running parallel with the sea. The pilot would have missed it altogether in the dying light but for the two lines of electric bulbs burning at ground level, outlining the path for the plane.
The Cessna swooped out of the sky. At the last minute it was buffeted about by a sudden damp squall that had been sent to try the pilot's nerve. The pilot didn't even blink and a moment later, the wheels hit the ground and the plant was bouncing and shuddering along, dead centre between the two rolls of light. The pilot flicked switches. The engine died and the twin bladed propellers slowed down and came to a halt. He clicked a button and the main doors hissed open. He saw a fat plump man walk to the plane.
Chancellor Sheppard was there to receive his new batch of students. He greeted each and every one of them as they passed him. As the final person walked passed, Sheppard looked into his eyes, and saw fire raging, burning like never before. The Sheppard watched in shock as the student passed him. The Sheppard regain his posture, read the name chart and shouted out, "welcome… um… Jaden"
Chancellor Sheppard sat at his office, the one which overlooks the duel arena and shouted into the mike. "New students, I welcome you to the famous school of duel monsters, the duel academy. The most elaborate dormitory, Obelisk Blue (Oberisuku Burū), is named after Obelisk the Tormentor. As the highest ranked dormitory, Obelisk Blue's facilities are of the highest quality, on the level of the world's classiest hotels and restaurants. The center dorm, Ra Yellow (Rā Ierō), is named after the winged dragon of Ra. Those who were given the highest scores in the entrance exam, or who only did mediocrity in the junior school enter this dormitory, which, while not as extravagant as Obelisk Blue, still has incredibly clean and well-kept facilities and meals of a quality far above the lifestyle of the average salary man. The lowest dorm, Slifer Red (Osiris Red; Oshirisu Reddo), is named after Silfer the Sky Dragon. Those who failed completely or scored poorly are put into the shoddy dorms of Slifer Red. Now, we shall each test you by battling with you on the duel arena. May the first representative Jaden step up?"
The announcer took his seat and shouted into the mike, "Are you ready people?! First up, will be new transfer student, JADENNNN YUKIIIIIII. We are short of examiners today, so he will be fighting our student prodigy, Chazz Princeton! Jaden will be using the Armed Samurai Ben Kai while Chazz would be using axe raider. BATTLEEE BEGIN!!"
Bellowing
a war cry. Axe raider pulled out an axe and charged across the
clearing. Taken by surprise by the suddenness of the attack, Ben kai
stumbled back a step and clumsily picked up a hook and chain and
parried Axe Raider's attack at the last second. His hasty defense
blocked his foe's chop at the last second, and Ben kai felt the
impact reverberate through his arms. His opponent was strong! Keeping
the chain up, he blocked a second strike, then ducked under a vicious
swing that only barely missed. Knowing he had to get off the
defensive, Ben kai attempted to hit the other warrior with his hook,
but Axe Raider easily dodged the inept attack. The miss threw him off
balance and sent him stumbling forward, knocking his foe back a few
steps. Ben kai swung wildly, trying to force Axe Raider back
further, but the warrior would have none of it. His enemy grinned as
he casually blocked another strike, and then countered with a brutal
backhand. The blow made Ben kai reel in pain, pain he had not felt
since before. Distracted, he only noticed his opponent's next
attack at the last second, when it was too late to avoid it. The
cleaver bit into Ben kai's shoulder and he roared with pain, his
life points going dangerously low. A reflexive strike knocked the
warrior's arm aside and dislodged the cleaver, and a quick attack
with the hook struck Axe Raider in the face as Ben kai retreated. Axe
Raider shook his head clear and spit out a grimy tooth, then growled
and stomped forward to continue the fight, no longer amused. The
battle continued to rage between the two monstrous enemies. Ben kai
managed to get in a few more weak hits, but was unable to slow the
other warrior's assault. Several more minor wounds leaked blood,
though Ben kai was not yet seriously injured. Axe Raider battered Ben
kai's hook aside with a flurry of attacks, then leaned down and
swung at an exposed leg. Ben kai moved the appendage clear, but a
sudden push sent him careening off balance. Toppling like a falling
tree, he fell to the ground with a deafening crash. Struggling to
right himself, Ben kai barely noticed his opponent bringing his
cleaver down hard. Raising an arm to defend himself, the blade cut
into him and caused immeasurable agony. Fighting through the
pain, Ben kai's anger rose. He knew how to fight! The hook was
slowing him down because he didn't know how to use it, but it could
not keep him from winning! Snarling with rage, Ben kai caught his
foe's head in the hook and pulled him down, head butting him
ferociously. Axe raider reeled back from the blow, giving Ben kai the
time he needed to get to his feet. The other warrior growled and
swung again, but Ben kai neatly caught the blade on the inner curve
of the hook. Spiraling his arm around, he twisted his enemy's arm
around until he lost his grip, sending the cleaver flying across the
clearing. Disarmed, Axe raider tried to get back and retrieve his
weapon, but Ben kai grabbed him by the throat and jammed his hook
into his opponent's stomach, making a almost fatal blow to Axe
Raider's life points. Howling with pain and rage, Axe Raider
struggled to break free of Ben kai's grip. When suddenly Ben kai
heard a shouted and he saw a girl at the bleachers, a necklace on her
neck shinning brightly. Distracted, Ben kai was unable to dodge the
lightning fast blow to his head, and he released his grip. Axe Raider
pushed past him and lurched towards his weapon with grim resolve. Ben
kai's eyes widened with surprise. There was a grenade on the
floor?! They would not do that on his watch, thought Ben kai, his
gaze narrowing. Whipping the hook around like a sling, Ben kai hurled
it at the other warrior. Catching axe raider around the throat, he
jerked the chain viciously and pulled his enemy down to the ground.
Axe raider struggled to rise, but Ben kai lumbered forward and
wrapped the chain around the Warrior's neck and yanked him up.
He lifted his hook up, "my first battle, my first win." And swung it down.
The battle had ended. Jaden walked off the stage, silent. Chazz fell to the ground screaming. The crowd was shocked. A new kid, defeating Chazz? Unbelievable. He walked coolly through the students, for minutes he walked, then something made he look up, and he looked into the eyes of a female obelisk. Electricity flew through their stares, "Hi." He said and continues walking straight.
Straight to his destiny at his new school, his home.
(BOOO YAH!!! Done!!! Review pls!!! )
