Okay, looking over my chapter, I realized that it was absolutely horrible and that my rough draft was way better than the finished product(sadly I deleted it already), and realized I should tear it down and make it better, put more details in and better explanations(like demonstrations).
I will post anew "chapter" on this when I finish the revamped story along with it's title. I aim to do so on Christmas though, so that's just a formality and to alert any who miss this.
See ya, and I hope I can make this story look plus ultra when I'm through with it.
