First fanfic review please

First fanfic review please

Don't own anything so calm down

I don't have anything against any nationality that may be abused by WW2

I'm only against Fairfield during the current season I'm playing them in.

Summary: Naruto Rokudaime Hokage is sent back in time to D-Day were he joins the fight with America to help end the war but then is sent back to the future to when he was a genin NARUTO IS A SNIPER and is kind of based on the sniper private Jackson from "Saving Private Ryan"

Naruto: sniper

Extended Training - shipping out

Description of Naruto at end of chapter & timeline up to Omaha beach

'Boom!!' he was thrown into the water his thick clothing and bag quickly filling with water. Around him the rest of his group were in a similar predicament. Quickly pulling out his knife he cut the bag from his back but not before grabbing his gun and slinging it onto his back all the while under. Swimming over to one of his men he started to cut the bag off of him as well before the water erupted in red as the large guns on the beach tore into the wreckage of his companies' landing craft. It was the same every where he looked his men being torn apart by the bullets or drowning in the ever deepening ocean. And he could do nothing to stop it so he swam out of the water and onto the beach before sitting against a hedgehog that was all the cover they had 'were are our tanks' he thought angrily looking for the amphibious tanks that command said 'would be there'

"Fuck it" he said before looking into the fog the screams were coming out of. Reaching into his ammo pouch he pulled out a pack of cigarettes wrapped in cellophane before lighting it with his lighter 'thank god for small miracles' he thought before taking his gun off his back and checking his supply of bullets "all right you German fuckers" he said pulling back the bolt on his rifle "lets do this" slamming the bolt into place and loading a bullet before running into the fog

"WAKE UP CALL" (taps playing loudly in the background)

'Sigh' was all Naruto could say it had been almost a year since he had joined the marines and he had been having those strange almost every night, though sometimes alternating to Hinata and all the family he had been separated from he really liked those dreams

"I just wana go home, DAMMIT" he yelled before punching a hole in the wall and sitting on his bunk the flag still pinned to the front of the bunk bed that he was 'supposed' to share with the other recruits but he pretty much made it his personal goal to keep what was his, that and not give in to any arrogant punk from some hot shot academy.

'Ha, I can still beat the lot of them in anything' he thought, thinking back to all the new recruits he basically smashed into the ground for either picking a fight with him or the commander Stones

"Better get up I guess" he said more to himself then to anyone else, not that any of the others would answer back, before getting up and walking out the door

Over the year Naruto had changed, no more was he just a Hokage of Konoha, but also a United States Marine and as such his look had changed his hair was cut shorter into a spiky flat top (his hair was his normal hair). He still wore his head band (if you don't know what it is then get out) but attached to the arm on his green uniform (underneath the flag) that he never buttoned showing his white T-shirt and his green pants held up with a black belt and tucked into his boots. He was the epitome of what a soldier should look like from the dog tags around his neck to the way he showed respect to anyone who he thought deserved it, he was a soldier of the United States of America and was proud of it now what about Konoha he's the Hokage, well his thought was he was here now and would do what he believed in. now the training he had been doing well it started out with what every soldier had to start with basic training or Boot Camp were he all but excelled at everything they threw at him, the twin commanders had once taken him into the desert before telling him that he had 5 days to find a flag that they had randomly put out there before leaving for the base, that had been 5 days before Naruto showed up with two flags and a 6-pack of beer claiming he had some extra time. When questioned about the extra flag he just said that he found the right one first but he didn't know if it was the right one so kept on looking. (Dedication) Anyway after the physical torture (they thought) they had put him through the commanders had taken him to a gun range were he once again was classified as being in the words of both Commanders Stone 'the best damn shot I ever seen' and was from then on trained as a sniper.

From there it only got easier in his opinion

Stealth: being a ninja he was all about stealth and learning how to keep hidden in plain sight but sniper stealth being able to blend in to the world not just the shadows that opened whole new worlds of ideas to the former ninja. He especially liked the ghillie suit idea why hide yourself behind something when you could hide in it genius.

Reconnaissance: being able to pick up information from just seeing a group of people and identifying what weapons or equipment they had was important in the ninja world you had to be able to know what you were up against you wouldn't fight a nin that was carrying 100 exploding tags with a toothpick would you and in the military you wouldn't fight someone with a 50 caliber machine gun period so it was damn important to him

Shooting: Naruto couldn't count the times he had needed a gun back in Konoha hell he couldn't even begin to fathom how often it would have saved the lives of his friends who died because he was to far away to help or the people he could have killed off to save a friend he could have killed Gato or saved the Sandaime from anywhere he chose but no, no one had ever even considered a piece of metal firing out of a pipe at high speeds as 'deadly' hell he'd show them considering that once he got back he'd snipe Sasuke out of that damn tower he liked so much out in Otto (I know there isn't a tower in Otto… I think there isn't anyway) hell he'd take out Pein from a mile away before he knew what happened. Naruto laughed a bit at that thinking of the reactions of the other Akatsuki members when there leaders head suddenly exploded.

Art: little known fact Naruto likes to draw that is why he has a hand drawn picture of Hinata in a large square locket that he keeps on his dog tag chain, but were getting off topic, anyway Naruto likes to draw and that turns out to be invaluable to a sniper to be able to make a map of your terrain gives you an accurate idea of how far away something is so you can take your shot and Naruto's drawings could be summed up as

3-dimensional maps hell the Stones (as I will call them from time to time) could sell them when he was done to map makers for a hefty sum of money that they used to feed Naruto being that he was on triple rations for being so damn light his metabolism was just that high.

Physical fitness: you could tell by just looking at Naruto he was built, all muscle no fat (had to fight a dude built like this… lost…badly…Fairfield cheats…coughroidscough) on one of his off days he went into the town, that was about 1 hour away by car and utilizing his ninja quickness made it there in half that time, the stones still trying to figure that one out, once he got there he was pretty much swarmed by every woman and girl from 16-30 all asking if he had a girl or was married or would let them bare his children, anyway he got away when he told them about Hinata and being married to her and all that. But that didn't stop them from trying… lets just say he needed a new shirt after that incident. Once again anyway when Naruto got there he was no slouch benching 200 squatting 300 and cleaning 215 (my weights 700 club) after a year of brutal even by his standards weight lifting and physical training he could slow bench (if you lift weights you know its harder to bench slow then it is to do it quick) 375 squat 1000 and clean 400 (holy shit!!) his never ending stamina got even more never ending and even if his commanders didn't know it his chakra levels and control had also sky rocketed he could even do a kage bunshin without seals which was a godsend for long winded speeches from the higher ups (not the stones, higher)

Anyway he was now built but still short witch suited him just fine he found it easier to hide himself if he was short anyway, less to hide or get shot at, he had told the drill sergeant which left him at a lose for words the sergeant had never thought of it that way, he was then checked into the Los Alamos mental facility for 3 months and would never ever pick on Naruto as the runt of the litter ever or actually ever speak to him again. Naruto laughed at that memory as well it was good to be the best

The mess hall

Naruto was just sitting down to morning chow with his three heaping trays of food in from of him he had just finished eating the first tray when both Stones just plopped down on the opposite side of the table and placing a large folder in front of him Naruto just kept eating before opening the folder and scanning through the pages. All this talk of the nazis and France it was as if…

"I'm being deployed aren't I"

Both Stones smiled brightly "yes you are"

"Well if you'll excuse me for a moment" said Naruto getting up and walking outside before loud yelling was heard "hell yeah you nazi sum-bitches I'm comin' for you, you hear me you cant keep Uzumaki down and you cant stop America, yeah" before Naruto came back in and sat down to finish "when do I leave?"

"tomorrow" came the simultaneous reply of the Stones

"OK then see you then" Naruto said before finishing his food in an amazingly short time and leaving

the stones sighed before laughing as Naruto the die hard American scared off some new recruits with his ranting of going off to war 'I'm gonna miss that kid' they both thought before finishing their meals and leaving to finish the paper work

ok sorry about the long wait to update but I only write this during the weekend and I had to do research about boot camp and what they ate and all that it is confusing anyway here is the chapter expect updates every weekend but I may miss one or two

Naruto description

Before year skip just general jonin clothing

After year skip

General ww2 army uniform green sleeves on jacket rolled up jacket unbuttoned hair in flat cut pants tucked into his boots he is going to get a black headband later for a reason I haven't thought of yet

Timeline so far and little into the future

Arrived in 1943ish

Training finished 1944

Deployed May 13, 1944

D-Day June 6, 1944

-later