I only got two reviews...

But I really don't want to give up on the story.

So, here is the First Chapter.

Chapter 1.

A new Enemy and a New Friend.

Draco looked at the extended hand of Harry Potter for a brief second, then he just picked himself up and brushed himself off. "I dont need to be your friend Potter ," sneered Malfoy. By this time, there were a lot of Gryffindors watching. "Shove off," shouted Draco before pushing Harry over and running out of the Common Room. Theodore Nott, who was also sorted into Gryffindor, just stared, with his mouth wide open in shock. "Here, let me help you up," said Hermione as she offered her hand, which Harry accepted.

The portrait opened, and in came Professor McGonagall holding Draco Malfoy by the ear. "Now, Mr Malfoy, why were you trying to get into the Slytherin Common Room?" asked Professor McGonagall as she stood in the doorway to the Common Room with all of the Gryffindors staring at her. Draco simply said, with a sneer, "I dont want to be in your stupid house. I don't want to be stuck in a room full of mudbloods and I DON'T want to be stuck in a room with ant of this filth you call a brave house!"

It was now McGonagall's turn to get angry as she said while pulling Draco out of the common room by the ear. "IF YOU DON'T WANT TO BE IN MY HOUSE THEN SO BE IT! I DON'T WANT TO SEE-" and the rest of the argument was cut off by a soundproofing spell, cast by a seventh year at the door, in respect to Professor McGonagall more then to Malfoy.

Harry, Ron, Theodore and Neville went up the Dormitory steps laughing and joking about the argument that just took place. (Dean and Seamus were sorted into Hufflepuff)


They all got ready for bed and then crowded around Harry's Bed. Has felt slightly intimidated by the three other boys as they asked him questions like "Why does Draco hate you," and "Did that hurt?" All Harry could answer was "I," before being cut off by another boy wanting to ask a question. When they (Ron,Neville and Theodore) got tired of 20Q they all went under their covers and fell asleep. Harry could hear Ron and Neville's snores as he tried to get to sleep. "What an eventful first day," thought Harry to himself, as he slowly drifted off to sleep.

What do you think?

Do you like the idea of Theodore replacing Dean and Seamus?

Do you think Malfoy should be more or less predujiced?

Should Theo become part of the Gang?

Please R&R with answers to the questions. I also need criticism. Also, you can take a vote on who should the gang save hermione? Or should the gang just go back to their dorms on Halloween?