Hey guys, this is my SIXTH TIME WRITING THIS, so I'm getting PRETTY FUCKING PISSED.

Bold is action. Bold italic is talking. Italic is thinking.

After I escape the monster, I find a place to hide, and I fall asleep...

After a while, I wake up, and I stretch my legs. Only somethings not right, my legs hits the sides of the walls! I look around, and I'm MASSIVE! I stand up, breaking out of the cave, and I finally get real sense for how massive I really am. I'm not scared of the monster anymore, because I AM the monster. But then... I feel... Empty. Like there's some part of me that's missing. I let out a call, a call I am certain only something like me can hear. Nothing. No response. So I let out another call, and nothing. I keep calling out. Hello? Is that you? Are you out there? Can you hear me? I keep calling out, but no response. Eventually, I realize I'm not going to get a response if I don't move, so I start moving.

Hey guys, sorry this chapter is short, but I don't really have much time left for it, and if I make it long, it'll get really dry and boring, more so than usual. Give me your thoughts on the story, and anything I can try and work on to make it better.