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Hello! - Person Talking
Hello! - Person Thinking
Hello! - Person Shouting
Hello! - Bijū/Summon Talking
Hello! - Bijū/Summon Thinking
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! - Using a Jutsu
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu! - Thinking a Jutsu
Chapter 2 - Back To The Past
Unknown Location
All Naruto saw is white really nothing more, nothing less then suddenly he saw colour well just black anyway.
Mito's Seal - 35 Minutes Till Seal In Kushina
(A.N. (Author Note) Can anyone tell me what mito's seal looks like? But since I don't know what it look like i'm going to pretend it's just a black abyss of nothingness.)
"Owwww" Naruto groan out
"Where am I? and why do I have a deep voice and Nine Tails?" Naruto question himself
"Oh… right Kurama sent me here." Naruto remembering what Kurama said to him
Flashback
"How far back will I go? and will I'll ever be to see you again?" Naruto asked with a hopeful expression.
"Well firstly, you go back to 30 or 40 minutes before I was sealed in Kushina. Secondly, most likely no unless you somehow ended up in a alternate universe." Kurama answered Naruto's question
"Before we go can you promise me something kit?" Kurama said
"Sure, what?" Naruto replied
"Change the future, if I was not the self proclaim "Beast of Hatred" We both might have a better future." Kurama said "Oh and don't forget to tell my siblings, that you know about the time travel." Kurama said
"Sure." Naruto said
The light on both of them begun to glow even brighter, almost as bright as the sun
"Looks like our time is up." Kurama said
Naruto ran up to him and hug one of his paws "Bye, Kurama" Naruto sadly said
Kurama poke Naruto forehead using his nose "Bye, Naruto" Kurama also sadly said
End Flashback
"I promise Kurama I won't fail you" Naruto thought
Outside Mito's Seal - 26 Minutes Until Till Seal In Kushina
Mito was comforting Kushina who is currently crying because she was terrified of having a demon err… bijū err… human? seal into her.
"I"m… going… to… be… a… demon." Kushina sobbed uncontrollably
"Why? WHY? Does it have to be me!" Kushina continued
"You have to understand Kushina, that my time is about to come to an end and you're the only one in our clan beside me who have special chakra which can restraint the Kyūbi." Mito told her
"You won't be a demon Kushina you just be a jinchūriki like me." Mito continued while in a comforting tone
"Whats a jinchūriki?" Kushina asked after her calmed down a bit but a part of her still scared and sad
"Jinchūriki are people who have a bijū sealed in them." Mito answered Kushina's question
"I'm going to be a jinchuuriki then?" Kushina asked
"Yes." Mito answered
"So how you reacted when you become a jinchūriki Mito-sama?" Kushina asked
"Like you I was sadden but I realized if I we're to protect the people that I love and I don't care even if the Kyūbi was to be sealed in me." Mito answered her
"Kushina." Mito said
"Yes?" Kushina said
"Indeed we came here to be the vessels of the, there is a way to find happiness even if you must live as a jinchuuriki. Firstly, by filling ourselves with love." Mito said
Suddenly an escort ninja came in
"Mito-sama the sealing preparation have been completed." The escort ninja said
"Let's go Kushina." Mito said
"Ye… Yes." Kushina stutter with nervousness
Mito's Seal - 5 Minutes Till Seal Inside Kushina
"It's going to be a few minutes before i'm going to be sealed in kaa-san… I think" Naruto thought
Suddenly Mito appeared in the seal
"Who is this again? Oh right Kurama's first jinchuuriki, what her name again… Mito! It's Mito! Gah!" Naruto sighing at himself at not being to remember
"You better not try not anything to escape Kyūbi." Mito said glaring at "Kyūbi"
"Sigh It's looks like I'm back to square one." Naruto start remembering his childhood and began to chuckle
"I'm not going to try anything I know that you probably have some preparation during the sealing so I can't escape." Naruto said calm fully
"What you're planning Kyūbi you seem rather calm today and why did you suddenly start chuckling." Mito said while still rather glaring
"Like I said before I'm not going to try anything." Naruto said
"As if I can believe anything you said." Mito said while stop glaring at the "Kyūbi"
"I don't care if you care or not I'm just telling you the truth." Naruto said "Do you have anything else to say beside complaining to me about escaping?" Naruto in a bored tone
"Hmph" Mito start glaring at "Kyūbi" but quickly stop and fade from the seal
"I not going to be too long now" Naruto thought
Outside Mito's Seal - 30 Seconds till Seal Inside Kushina
"Are you sure every preparation is done?" Mito asked
"Yes Mito-sama we triple checked everything." The escort ninja said
After arriving to their destination the escort ninja disappeared
"Remember my advice Kushina." Mito said to Kushina
"Hai" Kushina said
After Transfer
Kushina's Seal
Naruto being Kyūbi felt large amount of pain not only during the transfer during Mito's Seal to Kushina's but to add further insult to injury he was stuck being impaled with stake and freaking chains on a moon roughly the size of him!
"Now I see why Kurama said he hate kaa-chan…" Naruto thought while trying to ignore the pain as best as he can
Outside Kushina's Seal
"Oww…" Kushina said while groaning
"Kushina look's like you have awaken" An unknown voice said
"Who's there!" Kushina shouted
"Relax Kushina It's me Mito" Mito said while chuckling
"Oh… Sorry for shouting at you Mito-sama." Kushina apologizing
Suddenly both of them heard a large explosion and a ninja suddenly came in
"Mito-sama! There is an attack on the east side and south side of the village and the attacker's appeared to Iwagakure, Kumogakure and Kirigakure Ninja." The Ninja said while panicking
"Sent an emergency signal to Konoha and get all civilian's to safety." Mito said "Have all ninja stall the enemy until reinforcement for Konoha arrive and get me four escort ninja to sent Kushina to Konoha, Now!." Mito shouted
"As you wish Mito-sama." The Ninja quickly disappeared
"Kushina wait here until the escort ninja arrive." Mito said sternly
"But!" Kushina said
"No But's!, Kushina you are to wait here until they arrive!" Mito said while activating her Byakugō no In
"Wai.." Before Kushina can say a word Mito was already gone
"Great…" Kushina said to herself
"Well might as well visited the Kyūbi I supposed." Kushina thought
In Kushina's Seal
"When Kaa-san get here I'm going to so get her to change the freaking seal!" Naruto thought to himself
As if on queue Kushina suddenly appeared
"Hello Kushina-chan" Naruto said
"How you know my name?!" Kushina almost shouted
On the outside the "Kyūbi" was rolling his eyes but on the inside… "Crap! What I'm going to tell her… Oh I Know!" Naruto thought to himself
"Well I'm sealed in you after all Kushina-chan." Naruto rolled his eyes but really he was sighing of relief
"Hmph." Kushina said
"So do you want to talk about something or do you want to stare at me for the next 8 hours?" Naruto said in a bored tone
"I err… don't know I just want to visit you really." Kushina said while carefully eyeing the "Kyūbi"
"Well if you want a chat, we can have that later but right now there's 4 people outside so you have go." Naruto said in his bored tone as before
"Well I guess they arrived." Kushina thought
"Well, bye Kyūbi." Kushina said
"Oh! Before you go can you change the seal so it's not painful as hell?" Naruto said
"Oh… hehe sorry." Kushina then begin to change the seal into forest and not a torture facility
"Thanks! Kushina-chan, you can go now." Naruto said in a cheerful tone
Kushina then disappeared from the seal
"Well the Kyūbi was rather nice." Kushina thought to herself
"Kushina-san it's time to go." One of the escort ninja said
After that Kushina and the escorts ninja begun to escape from the village using the many secret routes into and out of the village.
Forest of Quiet Movement
"Groan…" Kushina groan out in a bored tone "Are we there yet?" Kushina ask one of the escort ninja
"We're nearly there, Kushina-san" The escort ninja said
Suddenly several enemy ninja's popped out of the tree's nearby
"Give us the girl, NOW!" One of the enemy ninja shouted
"Kushina-san, Run! We try to hold them off as long as we can!" The 4 escort ninja shouted
"GO!" They said
Kushina then begun to run through the forest as fast as her could
"Courageous now are we?" The enemy ninja said with obvious venom in his tone
With Kushina
"Huff… Huff." Kushina huffed out tired tiredly but then cried while being huddled against a tree because she began remembering her village being destroyed and the escort ninja (Who are Uzumaki too btw) being killed protecting her
"I'm… the… last… Uzumaki…" Kushina cried out "They're gone… they're all gone." Kushina continued
Kushina's Seal
Naruto was worried because of what happened to his mother because not only that her (and his) village was destroyed, she also got attack by enemy ninja (Now how Naruto know this you may ask? Well during Kushina visit he manage to set a mental like with her sight)
"I wish I can help you Kaa-san." Naruto thought with a sigh
As if on queue again Kushina appeared in the seal
Naruto then saw Kushina crying and then have one of his tails err… hug? Kushina, while making shushing noise
"Don't worry Kushina-chan I'll protect you." Naruto said with determination
Kushina feeling tired and sleepy after crying and having one of the Kyuubi's tail hug her
"Thank… you… Kyūbi…" Kushina muttered out before falling asleep
"Well she's asleep but I can't just leave her sleeping huddling against the tree." Naruto thought "As much as It pains me to do this to this I have to control Kaa-san body." Naruto thought with a sigh
Forest of Quiet Movement
"Kushina" eyes snap open with her iris red and and pupil turn into a slit
"Look's like it's evening well time to start build a camp." Naruto thought
"Kushina" tried to to walk but suddenly stumble when "she" tried to walk
"Great… I have to learn to walk again." Naruto sigh
After Naruto finished learning to walk again he began to build a small camp. After, that he began to catch some fish to cook.
Forest of Quiet Movement - Night
"Yawn…" Kushina yawn out
Kushina then look at her surrounding and the first thing her notice is she is at a small camp with some fish cooking
"Wasn't I at a tree last time." Kushina thought
"Finally woken from sleep Kushina-chan?" An unknown voice said in her head
"Eeek! Who are you and why are in my head." Kushina almost shouted
"You forgotten about me already? I'm hurt Kushina-chan." The unknown voice chuckled
"Who are you!" Kushina shouted
"Do I need to really spell it out for you?" Naruto said while he rolled his eyes
"Oh… you're the Kyūbi." Kushina said
After that both of them gone into awkward silence, then Kushina was the first to speak up
"Why?" Kushina asked
"Why what? Naruto replied
"Why are you being so nice with me?" Kushina said
"Well you are my jinchuuriki after all, plus you have beautiful hair." Naruto said with a foxy grin
Kushina blushed "Kyūbi?" Kushina said
"Yes?" Naruto replied
"When I was crying did you really promised that you protect me?" Kushina said
"Well I did promised you after all." Naruto said with the same foxy grin as before "Oh you better eat that fish, It's going to get cold." Naruto said
"Oh right, how did I end up here?" Kushina asked him
"Well… I build this for you after all, I can't leave you huddled against a tree now can't I?" Naruto answered her
"How?" Kushina asked him
"I err… [cough] control [cough] you're [cough] body." Naruto said quickly with a blushed
"Wait, what did you say?" Kushina said
"Err… Nothing." Naruto said with a nervous chuckle
"You know aren't you suppose to be a de…" Kushina tried to say be Naruto quickly cut her off
"Well firstly, i'm a bijū not a demon, secondly, i'm not just a mindless beast who want destruction while watching the world burn to the ground and thirdly, we bijū have name's to you know." Naruto said
"Oh… sorry for misjudging you." Kushina said "Oh you said bijū have name's so can you tell me your name?" Kushina asked her
"My name is… Kurama." Naruto thought "Sorry, kaa-san I can't tell you my real name."
(A.N. (Author Note) For the sake of the story i'm just going to refer Naruto as Kurama… Oh and Hi Future Readers from the future ;D)
"What about the other bijuu?" Kushina asked him
"For their name you have to ask them yourself." Kurama said
"Oh." Kushina respond
After their conversation Kushina began to eat the fish that Kurama cooked for her. After, eating the fish she began to feel sleepy again
"Thanks… for everything, Kurama I'm glad that got to met you." Kushina said tiredly
"Ditto." Kurama said
"Hey Kurama, can I sleep with you?" Kushina said
"Sure." Kurama said
Kushina's Seal
After Kushina appeared in seal she and Kurama slept soundly and while sleeping Kushina unconscious crawled under one of Kurama's tail and used it as a blanket
Translation:-
Bijū - Tailed Beast
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Jutsu
Jinchūriki - Power of Human Sacrifice
Kyūbi - Nine Tails
Bijū - Tailed Beast
Kaa-san - Mother
Hai - Yes
Iwagakure no Sato - Village Hidden Stone Village
Kumogakure no Sato - Village Hidden by Clouds
Kirigakure no Sato - Village Hidden by Mist
Konohagakure no Sato - Village Hidden in the Leaves
Byakugō no In - Strength of a Hundred Seal
Technique's Used:-
Byakugō no In
A seal which is reputed to be the pinnacle of chakra control. By storing a vast amounts of chakra over an extended period of time into a specific point on their body — usually the forehead — the user creates this seal, which manifests in the form of a rhombus-like marking. Once the seal is formed, the user's already impressive chakra control allows them to perform techniques without any wasted energy. When released, the seal will either spread across the user's face or wrap around their entire body. The stored chakra is then released into their body, greatly amplifying their medical techniques and giving them access to both the Creation Rebirth and the Ninja Art Creation Rebirth — Strength of a Hundred Techniques.
Revisions:-
1st Revision (24 January 2015)
2nd Revision (25 January 2015)
3rd Revision (26 January 2015)
4th Revision (2 February 2015)
Pheww all done guys! This chapter took a little over 7 hours (ignoring the time to do revisions anyway) Hope this long enough! Well I guess I sign off suppose XD
