Well, here's chapter one placed the same night as the prologue...I would post two through four tonight as well but...I'm too lazy.

Enjoy this for now...Oh and I realize that it's not all detailed and stuff...but I'll fix that later when I'm finished writing the story so PLEASE bear with my lazy-ish writing!

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Aftermath Savior: Chapter One: The Offer

I've lost so much…friends, family, comrades…they all just keep getting ripped away from me! Now it has been done again! They've ripped my daughter out of my arms and have taken her away! Why? Why does God hate me so much to tear my only family away from me? They said that they were only taking her to the medic for a check-up, but that was four days ago!

I don't trust them, they work for the government! The damned government lied to my friends and neighbors back at Gunnison and look at how they ended up! Dead. They're DEAD! Oh, Molly, my precious little girl, where have they taken you?

"Mrs. O'Brian?" a voice from a speaker hidden somewhere in this cell spoke. I did not reply, just sat there on the cot staring down at my hands, feet, and floor. My hands and feet, they're covered in dirt as well as the clothes I'm wearing. When was the last time I've had a shower? Oh, that's right…on that night. "Mrs. O'Brian, we have news of your daughter-"

"Where the hell is Molly!?" I yelled, a rage so ferocious filled my being that I threw the cot at the opposite wall across the cell. I was so sure that if they hadn't spoken what they did next I would have shredded the metal and concrete walls like a hot knife through butter!

"We would be happy to escort you to her," the voice sad calmly and with those words my anger dissipated. My trust for them did not waver though. They did not deserve it, my instincts and warrior pride won't allow it. "But before you are escorted to your daughter you will be taken to the showers to clean up."

My heart swelled with happiness. Not only would I be able to get a shower, but more importantly I will see my baby girl! Yet…even though I'm happy I can't help but recognize the feeling that I'm being lied to. I'll have to be alert and cautious and seemingly trusting, but my defenses will stay at an all time high.


Alright! There is chapter one! The foreshadowing is HUGE here and pretty obvious. Honestly I think it's quite depressing, but oh well my thoughts don't matter.

But... *points to reader* YOUR thoughts DO matter!

Reviews are nice and I promise to put in more detail later on in life!