My Biggest Case Chapter 2
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Loren pov.
When I walked back to my desk I sit down and try to process what just happened. My partner just got replaced by the one and only Eddie Duran, the guy who I met or "bumped into" at the coffee shop. How did this happen? Things were doing great before he came. Now he's here and it's all different now.
Eddie: thinking about me already?
Loren: oh please I was thinking about how we are going to make this (pointing at me and him) work. So get off your pedestal.
Eddie: didn't know I had a pedestal until now.
Loren: whatever just-
Rinnggggg rinnggggg
Loren (picking up the phone): hello this is Loren Tate with the LAPD whats your emergency? Uhum. Yes. Okay. Me and my partner will be there soon just stay calm and whatever you do don't move.
Eddie: whats going on?
Loren: theres a woman being held hostage at a warehouse down on 5th. We gotta go.
Eddie: lets move!
After the phone call eddie and I jumped into one of the cop cars and drove down as fast as we could.
Eddie: oooo my first case at the LAPD so excitingggg.
Loren: well you should feel honored because you get to experience it with the best.
Eddie: well look who has herself on her own pedestal
Loren: shut up
Eddie: you know Loren I feel like we got off on the wrong foot so why don't we just start over?
Loren: I would like that
Eddie: hi my names Edward Matthew Duran and I am very excited and honored to be working with you.
Loren: haha well nice to meet you. My name is Loren Elizabeth Tate and I too am excited to be working with you.
Eddie: haha see this is nice
Loren: look we are here.
Eddie: great how about you take the lead on this one so I can see how you work.
Loren: okay. Well first put on your ear set that will connect us together. Next we our phones to show us buildings, blue prints, profiles, etc. got it?
Eddie: got it.
Loren: okay this is the plan. We are going to go around the back entrance and arrest anyone who tries to stop us. We go in and depending on the situation we will decide tactical.
Eddie: let's do it!
So Eddie and I get out of the trucks and walk around the back of the building. Eddie and I are actually working pretty well together to my surprise.
Loren: oh and Eddie?
Eddie: yeah?
Loren: if there is ever a situation where the subject has a weapon threatened towards the hostage we try to negotiate got it?
Eddie: good cause I'm really good at negotiating
Loren: yeah that's definitely one of my weaker subjects
Eddie: well then I will just have to help you now wont I?
Loren: I guess you will.
We walk to the back door to find it unlocked. Wow these people are real amateurs which means they haven't really done this before which means they can be negotiated. I look at Eddie and I can tell he's thinking the same thing I am. We walk up to the top floor and hear screaming from a man to a woman.
Man: do you know how much your Daddy owes me?!
Woman: I'm sorry my dad did this to you but please let me go!
Man: OH NO you are not going anywhere (gun clicking) I'm going to show your daddy never to mess with me.
I look over at Eddie and he gives me the okay signal and we mouth 1…2…3! We bust open the door.
Eddie and Loren: POLICE DROP YOUR WEAPON
Then something happened that never happens when I'm doing a case. The room goes silent. The only person that was still yelling was Eddie but stopped when he realized I froze in place. I was speechless. I felt like my whole world was crashing down at the sight in front of me.
Eddie: Loren? Loren? Are you okay?
Loren: D-Dad? What the hell is going on here?
Trent: Loren what are you doing here?
Loren: I don't know Dad you tell me. I got a call saying a woman is being held hostage and I come in to see that the subject is my Dad who is supposed to be in San Francisco for the weekend?
Eddie: wait this is your Dad?
Loren: no. there is no way this is my dad because my Dad would never do something like this!
Trent: Loren please listen to me.
Loren: No YOU listen to me! You are going to drop your weapon right now.
Trent: I-I'm sorry Loren but I can't do that.
And just like that he takes the woman and puts the gun to her head.
Eddie: Mr. Tate, if you don't put that gun down now we will have to shoot you.
Trent: no my daughter would never do that to me.
Loren (pointing her gun towards Trent): Trent you have 5 Seconds to put down the gun or the only bullet that goes off will go into your head.
Trent: don't you get it Loren? I'm doing this for you and your Mom!
Loren: how in the world does this help me and mom?
Trent: this girl's dad stole from us and I'm here to get it back.
Loren: I don't even know… wait is that AIDRIANNA?!
Aid: Loren I'm so sorry I had no idea!
Loren: this is so not happening right now. Trent for the last time put the gun down and arms in the air!
Trent sighed and dropped the gun and Eddie went behind him and cuffed him. I walked up to him and lowered to his face.
Loren: I don't even know who you are anymore
And with that I walked away tears streaming down my face. How could my own dad do that to me? More importantly my Mom. Oh my god my Mom is going to heartbroken. I am heartbroken. We go back to the front of the building and Eddie puts Trent in back of the cop car. The whole ride there Trent kept trying to talk to me but I wouldn't reply back. Eddie on the other hand was like a chatterbox. He kept answering all the questions Trent had for him. It was like they were friends or something! I finally decided to speak up.
Loren: can both of you just shut up?! Don't either of you realize that we are in a cop car driving my dad to the police station to put him behind bars. I know you guys probably don't care but my world just got flipped upside down so if you don't mind I would like a little piece and quiet! Thank you.
That shut them up. When we got to the station the officers took my dad away and I answered questions that the police had for me. When that was over I walked back into the station and saw Eddie. I was automatically pissed.
Eddie: Loren I-
Loren: Save it! How inconsiderate can you be! If your Dad was accused of attempted murder and kidnapping would you be happy if I had a nice conversation with him in the cop car?
The Next thing I know I was wrapped in his arms sobbing my eyes out. I didn't know how it happened but it was nice. I didn't care who was watching. All I knew was that with Eddie I felt safe.
Second Chapter Done! Don't worry this isn't the end. This is going to be a multi chapter story. Love you guys!
