Here's chapter 2 :) review please.
Its been a year since Valkyrie died, Fletcher still thought about her every day and he missed her. His hair was like it was before and he had moved to Austrailla. He still visited Skullduggury and the other's everyday. Skullduggury had a new partner, Natalia she wasn't the same as Valkyrie but she was had dark blonde hair,green /grey eyes and a pretty face. She had the same style and was juust as fierce as Valkyrie. She had chosen the name Aloe Poison, it suited her well. Fletcher visited more whenever Natalia was around. His heart would beat faster when he saw her, he didn't love her like he loved Valkyrie though. He liked her a lot, she was funny,smart and cute.
*A few days later*
Fletcher,Aloe, Skullduggury and Ghastly were sitting in the living room in Skullduggury's house. Ghastly ordered a pizza, cheese and tomato as Aloe was vegetarian. The bell rang and Natalia and Fletcher got up to answer. They answered, it was the pizza guy,fletcher's hand brushed Aloe's and he blushed. Aloe's looked flushed, they paid and took the pizza back to the living room. The others were talking among themselfs not knowing what had just occured. Both Aloe and Fletcher realized they liked one another. They devoured the pizza in a short space of time, while Skullduggury watched jelously. Not long after that they left, Fletcher saying he'd teleoport Aloe teloported her right outside her and before she could say anything he kissed her, a long lingering kiss. He took a note out of his pocket and handed it to her then vanished with a 'pop'.
Aleo took her key out and put in the lock she turned it and opened the door. She walked into her apartment, it was small and perfect for her style. Aloe took a long shower and grabbed something to eat. She went to bed and decided to open the note as soon she woke up. She read a book then settled down to sleep...zzzz
She woke up at 8:00am and smile, today was her free day. She picked up the note from Fletcher and unfolded it slowly:
"will you be my girlfriend"
She grinned and whipped out her phone and texted Fletcher "yes". A message popped up from skullduggury "Enjoy your free day, you might not have in a long while" she smiled and texted "I will" to skullduggury. Fletcher texted a smiley face and texted "I'll pick you up in 2 hours, we are going to have the funnest day of our lives" "K" Aloe wrote back. She took a bath and ate some pop tarts. Aloe picked out an outfit for the day, black skinny jeans, a band T-shirt and red hoody. She decided to wear her red converse trainers and Aloe waited for Fletcher to arrive. There was knock on the door. She answered and there stood Fletcher looking as cute as ever, wearing a whte shirt and jeans he was holding out white roses. Aloe took them and blushed
"thank you"
" no problem and take your swimsuit" Fletcher said also blushing. Fletcher held out a hand, she took it and they entwined their fingers. A second later there was a 'pop' and they were at a beach. There was glistning indigo water, browny/yellow sand and people sunbathing,talking/laughing. Some were swimming, Aloe was speechless.
"So what do you think" Fletcher asked uncertantainly.
"It's brill"
Aloe smiled and ran into a changing and changed into her swimsuit, Fletcher did the same. Her and Fletcher raced eachother to the water and paddeled, splashed and swam for 5hrs. Then Fletcher brought spades and buckets and they built a sandcastle togather for another 3hrs. After they had finished there as nobody else at the beach, Fletcher excused himself. Natalia changed back into her clothes,a minute later Fletcher came back holding a picnic basket and blanket. He set them down and he sat down and patted the blanket. Aloe sat down next to him.
"Fletcher i can' t thank you enough for today" Aloe said.
"It's okay, it was no problem" Fletcher said, obviously pleased.
He took out white paper plates and plastic forks. "You hungry" he asked.
"Starving"she replied.
Fletcher took out some cheese and cucumber sandwhiches and a bottle of coke. They ate and talked and laughed. He took out a cherry and choclate cake and they that to. Aloe and Fletcher were stuffed. Fletcher wrapped the blanket around them and they cuddled close. The sun was setting and the sky was a brilliant orange and pink turned and Fletcher pressed his lips on hers, there mouth's moved in sinc and Fletcher's toungue begged entrance and Aloe allowed. They broke apart and they blushed. Fletcher teloported them back to her room and he whispered "I love you" and vanished. Aloe whispered to. she threw herself on her bed and sighed happily, she had always liked Fletcher but never knew he felt the same. She thought he would never get over Valkyrie. But it had been since she died. Little did she know that Fletcher's eyes still watered when he her name.
Finished, so whaaaaat do you think. My taken name is Aloe Poison btw i used this name because i couldn't think of another taken name -MistressPleasant p.s please review.
