Hey, so I'm back and I just wanted to say thanks in one night I got 45 reads and 2 followers and one review or something like that but that could just be a bug as something like that happened before. Please tell me what you think of the story and stuff like that.
It took a while for everyone to jump but once we all did four people came to the front.
"Okay I'm Will and this is Christina" I was surprised by how un-Dauntless they looked. Well to be fair they did have some tattoos but no crazy hair or a hole through their ears.
"Where going to take the Dauntless born so follow us" Christina tucked some of her hair behind her ear and smiled.
"And I'm six" the blonde Dauntless women from before smiled and pointed to a guy, I think it was Four.
"Four" he said it rather bluntly.
My hand rises without me even noticing "as in the numbers Four and Six" it was a pretty decent question.
Six walks closer and steers at me. "Yes Erudite do you want a gold star for getting it correct" she smirks and keeps her eyes on mine.
"n-no I think I'll be good" I bite my tongue as soon as I say it. Six just raises an eyebrow and walks away.
"Now, since that's out of the way we can show you around unless Erudite as anymore questions" Four looks at me waiting for an answer.
I look down at me feet and shake my head.
We start walking around Dauntless I did have some question but I thought it would be better if I just kept my big mouth shut.
"Hey Erudite, got anything to say or any questions maybe" The skinny Candor jabs me in the ribs.
"Shouldn't you be fixing your makeup or something" Emily shows up beside me with a grin on her face.
"Shouldn't –"
"Am I interrupting something" Six folds her arms.
"Nope not really" Emily smiles and walks closer to the front pulling me with her.
"That's Catherin I'd stay away from her if I was you" Emily fixes her hair and turns her attention back to Four and Six who was talking about our training.
"Training starts a 8:00am tomorrow" Six smiles "I was in your shoes last year and it may feel like you're going to die or want to give up but trust me it's not as bad as it seems at first." Her and Four continues to talk about training for a while until we were shown our dorms, Four reminded us that dinner was in an hour before they left. I unpacked and sat on my bed.
"Hey" Abby jumped down and smiled.
"Oh, hey" I end up mumbling
"So what do you think of this place It's a lot better than Amity but it is darker and more underground"
"yeah, it is different from the other factions" I look around the small dorm, my new home until I ether die, become factionless or actually become Dauntless and at the moment they both seem like a possibility.
"Hey guys I think the dinners ready" Meg opens the door and smiles "It's something called pizza"
My eyes light up "re-really you better not be joking" I stand up so quick I smack me head on the bunk.
"Yeah I'm sure do you guys wan-"I run out of the room before Meg could finish her sentence. If they did have pizza there was no way I'm going to miss it.
Just like Meg said they did have pizza. I didn't realise how hungry I was till I sat down.
"Hey you're that Erudite girl right, the one who asked all the questions" I look up from my plate to see the other two trainers Christina and Will.
"Yeah did I do something wrong" I bite my lip trying to think what I've done.
"Oh no nothing like that it's just I use to be from Erudite and I thought you looked familiar" Will smiles.
"Um" I don't know what to say "I was in student council but that was last year"
"Yeah maybe that's it" He smiles again and shrugs his shoulders "Well we should leave you to your meal" he starts to walk away. That's when I realise he's holding Christina's hand. I'm still steering at them when Emily waves at me.
"Hey that's where you got too" Emily takes a set beside me and waves over the others.
"Yeah I got really hungry so I came here" I laugh a little as I take a bite.
"We can tell you practically sprinted out of the room" Meg laughs and picks up her pizza.
"Like I said I was hungry" I push some hair away from my face.
"So training in the morning huh" Emily looks down at her plate "what do you think we'll have to do."
I have to think about this for a while "I don't know maybe fight or something like that"
"F-Fight?!" Abby looks up nervously.
"Yeah or learn to shoot" I shrug my shoulders.
"Come on Amity you're not scared are you" Emily smirks.
"I'm just not use to violence that's all" she looks down.
"Don't worry I'm not use to it ether" Meg smiles.
"Oh right your from Abnegation" I haven't meet a lot of Abnegation's and my Erudite side is begging me to ask a thousand questions.
"Yep its pretty plan compeered to Dauntless" she looks around the dining hall.
"I think most factions are" Abby mumbles
"Yeah Candor was nothing like this but it's still super cool" Emily laughs
We sit in silents until I finally think of something to say.
"I think I might get a tattoo or dye my hair tomorrow" the table goes silent.
"What really already?" Meg actually looks shocked.
"Yeah, why not" I finish my pizza "I mean better sooner than later right?"
"Well yeah but you just got here" Emily looks at me "it your decision thou"
"So I guess no one wants to get one with me then" They all look at each other.
"I'll think about one" Emily mumbles.
"Same" Meg and Abby said.
I laugh "Mission accomplished then"
"wait where you planning this?!" Abby steers at me with her mouth open.
"Maybe" I laugh and stand up "if I was it kind of worked"
"You jerk" Emily laughs and stands up as well picking up her plate.
We all take our plates up and wonder around till we make our way to the dorm where most of the transfuses are.
"Hey Athena can I ask you something quickly" Denis jumps down from one of the top bunks. He was from Erudite as well. we do know each other but I wouldn't say we where friends.
"Um sure Denis" I turn to my friends and lip bye to them before I walk out the door.
"Do they know who your sister is?" Denis steers at me.
"Some ones going straight to the point"
"Do they?" he raises one of his eyebrows.
"No but do they need to" I already know where this is going.
"Well Erudite and Dauntless have a pretty close relationship"
"Are you really going to bring this up" I roll my eyes.
"Look you're a nice girl but with your sister being who she is you could have an advantage" I know he's only trying to help me but him bringing it up really gets on my nerves.
"I DONT CARE WHAT PEOPLE THINK" I don't mean to yell so I try lowering my voice "Just because Jeanine is my sister it doesn't mean she's going to help me she never did before so why would she start now" I look down.
"Look Athena" He puts his hand on my shoulder "I just thought I should tell you that some people won't be happy if they find out that you related to Jeanine."
"Thanks for trying but I'm fine Denis you don't have to help me" I swot his hand away and storm down the hall.
"Oh come on Athena how old are you!" I ignore him and head down to the pit. I don't know what I'm going to do but there's no way I'm going back to that dorm anytime soon knowing he' in there.
Another chapter done. please tell me what you think of the story, characters and stuff like that.
