Hey here is the first chapter of this story. last chapter i forgot to inform you how Nazu looked beside his hair. well let hope you guys like it and please read enjoy and also this will have the first duel of this series but not in between Nazu and someone else that is for the next chapteror iy might not depends on everything. and please I know the grammer is not really good i still need a beta, that is until I get better at you want it just post me a link and i took this down for a small edit
Welcome
The bell rang as Nazu Yukia got up out of his desk and and grab his backpack that was red with black and white spider web design on it. Sticking out of the left side of it was his duel disk. It was a light blue one with the red card slots. He was wearing a white t-shirt with an unzipped gray jacket over it. He also was wearing a pair of black blue jeans. Now back to the story. Nazu sling his backpack over left shoulder and began to leave when his best friend, Tusa Kisha(He is a guy that had a silver hair that was styled to look like one a biker from an 80's movie. He wear back to his friends a blue jean jacket zipped up the front and the collar up was turned up and wears black leather always had a tooth pick in his mouth.) called out to him and said"Hey, how about later today we dual at the park. Ok."
"Sure but I do not see why not right now"Nazu said back to his friend.
"It is because I left my dual disk at my house" Tusa said rubbing the back of his head.
"Come on. You would forget your own head if it was not attach to your head"Nazu said back to his forgetful friend as they went out of the class room when Nazu said"hey where is your backpack."
"Uh I think it is in class"Tusa said as he made a quick u-turn back to the class room.
Later that day at the duel park in town there was tons of people there people just watching duels or people dueling. Nazu entered the Virtual Reality Zone (It is like the AR system in Zexal but like a glass house so D-gazers are no longer needed beside for phones only) and looked around to see who was dueling with what type of decks. He saw a duel just getting started not that long ago due to both players still have all there life points in between a comet deck user named Jake and an oracle deck user name Rachel. On the field was Comet Loneos(level 4/light/rock/1700 atk/400 def) which looks like a guy with blue hair that looks like it is gelled back inside of a large rock and holding a sword, a face up Solar Wind and a face down card on the comet user side of the field. On the other side of the field there was Oracle Pythia(level 4/light/spellcaster/1500 atk/2000 def),a woman wearing a white toga with a white belt round her waist while her hands was on her head. Rachel said"I activate Pythia's effect to reveal the top five cards and for each monster revealed she gets the 100 attack points for each one of them until the end of your end phase." As she was saying this Pythia moved her hand in front of her and revealed honest, Comet Halley, mirror force, bottemless trap hole and Comet Faya "that is a total of 3 monsters so Pythia gain 300 attack points"
Oracle Pythia(1500 atk → 1800 atk)
"Oh and I get to choose the order in which they are placed back in so the 2 comets up top followed by bottemless trap hole honest and lastly mirror force."The cards was sent back into the deck in that order."Ok now Pythia attack Lenoes"
Jake (4000 lp→ 3900 lp)
"I activate Shooting Star. Since you destroyed a comet monster in battle I get to summon one comet monster from my deck and I choose Comet Faya(level 4/light/rock/1500 atk/1400 def) and then my deck is shuffled"The comet user said as a giant rock appeared on his field with a females head that has long blue hair and arms that reached out of the sides that looked like they were a little to small to do any good.
"It is still my turn. I place one card face down and end my turn"the oracle user said as her face down appeared right behind the oracle.
"Ok then it is my turn. Draw"Jake said as he drew his card and looked at it."During my standby phase Faya can destroy one face down spell or trap card and depending on if it is a spell or trap her attack points ether rise or fall by 500." The card flipped face up revealing it was a Mirror force. "Ok since it is a trap Faya lose attack points"
Comet Faya(1500→ 1000)
"Since the attack of a comet monster changed solar winds deals you that much in damage"Jake said as faya ran up to Rachel and around her causing her life points to drop.
Rachel(4000 lp → 3500 lp)
"But due to that I can not attack with it this turn so I set one card and end my turn."Jake said as the card appeared face down on the field.
Oracle Pythia(1800→ 1500)
Comet Faya(1000→ 1500)
"My turn. I draw"Rachel said drawing it the top card."I will use Pythia effect again"This time the cards revealed was Comet Gale, Comet Comas Sola, Mystical Space Typhoon, Solar Winds and Honest"So she gain 300 more again"
Oracle Pythia(1500 → 1800)
"And now I summon Oracle Dorono(light/spellcaster/1600 atk/1300 def)."A girl wearing a light yellow robe with a golden belt appeared on the field next to Pythia"Now I will use her effect to guess your top three cards and if they are correct I get to destroy one card for each one I get correct so I say Comet Gale, Comet Comas Sola and Mystical Space Typhoon"The top three cards was in the exact order the oracle user said they were."Say so long to your monster ,Solar wind and your face down"Rachel said as the face down was revealed to be Dimensional Prison followed by the monster and the 2 cards becoming dust"Now both of my monsters will attack you directly"both of the oracle focus sending mystical wave at the comet user
comet user(3900 lp→ 2100 lp→ 600 lp)
"next I will overlay my two monsters to xyz summon The Oracles of Fate(rank 4/light/spellcaster/2000 atk/2000 def)" Rachel said as both of the oracles on the field turned yellow and floated up into a galaxy portal that opened and three old women with only one eye in between them as the other two only has one empty eye socket as two yellow orbs began to float around them"Now I will use her effect by removing one overlay unit from her I can look through the top five cards of your deck and choose one to add to your I can look through your hand and send one card from your hand to your I can choose one of your cards in your graveyard and return it to your deck."Just then a yellow overlay unit got out of orbit and wet into the eyeball and it began to glow. The top five cards from earlier was revealed to be Comet Gale, Comet Comas Sola, Mystical Space Typhoon, Solar Winds and Honest just like before."First I choose to add Honest to your hand."Just the the card was removed from the deck and added itself to Jake's hand. The eyeball began to float out of the first one's eye socket and into the second one's as there hand began to be revealed to be Honest, Comet Halley, Comet Faya and Solar Winds"I choose to send Honest to your graveyard"The card that was just added to his hand was sent right into his graveyard. "And lastly I will return faya from your graveyard to your deck." The eyeball left the second sisters eye socket and into the third ones as the monster ejected itself from his grave before adding itself back into the deck."I will end my turn there. Your go."
"Ok. My turn. Draw" Jake said as he drew his card from his deck.
Just then back from behind Nazu some one said"Hey, there you are"
Nazu looked behind him to see Tusa standing behind him with his duel disk on his wrist "Hey, what took you so long getting here. Do not tell me. You forgot the way here?"
"Actually, Yes I did" Tusa aid rubbing the back of his head again.
They then turned to see the end of the duel in front of them,
'I first set one card face down," Jake said as the card appeared on the field all by itself "followed by normal summoning Comet Halley(Light/rock/1600 atk/ 1000 def)" A small girl with long silver hair appeared on the field with a rock around her body,and a small kniife in her left hand. "Upon summon I can destroy one face down spell or trap card on the field to summon another comet monster from my graveyard so I will destroy my own face down but she lose 600."
Comet Halley(1600→ 1000)
The little girl then turned around and threw her knife at the card that was just set as it flipped face up to show that it was another solar wind card."Now say hi back to Comet Leneos," The dust from the card being destroyed began to swirl around and became Comet Leneos(light/rock/1700 atk/400 def) "Now I will overlay my 2 level 4 comet monsters to xyz summon Comet Lord Chateaux(rank 4/Light/Rock/2500 atk/2400 def)" the two humen in the rocks turned white and flew into a galaxy portal and came out was a giant rock with rock arms and legs. the center of the body had a human face in its head was a saphire sticking out of it. all around the body had a strange blue glow to it.
"Now Chateaux will attack your Oracles" Jake said as the giant rock began to run towards the three old ladies and crushed them.
oracle user(3500 lp→ 3000 lp)
"Oh and if he destroys a monster he can detatch one overlay unit to deal you damage equal to the attack points of the destroyed monster" the comet user said as Chateaux grabbed one of his overlay unit and sent it flying towards Rachel.
Rachel(3000 lp→ 1000 lp)
Sorry that I just ended it in the middle of the story but how else will i make sure you guys do not get board with this story to fast and a one story duel is a possibility but i did not feel like it plus where is the fun in here is the cards i used
Comet Faya
[Level 4/LIGHT/Rock-Type/1500 ATK/1400 DEF]
Once per turn, during your Standby Phase: you can destroy 1 face-down Spell or Trap; apply the effect, depending on the Card destroyed.
•Spell: This card gains 500 ATK, until the End Phase.
•Trap: This card loses 500 ATK, until the End Phase.
Comet Halley
[Level 4/LIGHT/Rock-Type/1600 ATK/1000 DEF]
Once per turn: You can destroy 1 face-down card you control; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Comet" monster from your Graveyard in Defense Position. Then, this card loses 600 ATK.
Comet Lord – Chateaux
[Rank 4/LIGHT/Xyz/Rock-Type/2500 ATK/2400 DEF]
2 Level 4 "Comet" monsters
When this card destroys an opponent's Xyz Monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; inflict damage to your opponent's equal to the destroyed monster's original ATK.
Solar Winds (I suggest for you to change its name because "Solar Wind Jammer". But its doesn't really matter, anyway.)
[Continuous Spell Card]
During either player's turn: You can target 1 face-up "Comet" monster you control; you can inflict damage to your Opponent equal to the difference between its original ATK and current ATK. If you do, you cannot conduct you Battle Phase until your next Main Phase 2.
Shooting Star
[Trap Card]
If a "Comet" monster you control is destroyed by battle: You can Special Summon 1 "Comet" monster with the same Level as the monster from your Deck in Attack Position, but its ATK is halved and its effect is negated
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Oracle Pythia
[Level 4/LIGHT/Spellcaster-Type/1500 ATK/2000 DEF]
Once per turn: You can look at the top 5 cards of your opponent's Deck, then return them to the top of the Deck in any order, and if you do, this card gains 100 ATK for each Monster revealed.
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Oracle Dorono
[Level 4/LIGHT/Spellcaster-Type/1600 ATK/1300 DEF]
Once per turn: You can declare 3 card names, then look at the top 3 cards of your opponent's Deck; destroy 1 card for each card declared correctly.
The Oracles of Fate
[Rank 4/LIGHT/Xyz/Spellcaster-Type/2000 ATK/2000 DEF]
2 Level 4 monsterz
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then look at the top 5 cards of your opponent's Deck; add 1 card to your opponent's hand, then your opponent reveals their hand; discard 1 card from your opponent's hand. If you do, you can add 1 card from your opponent's Graveyard to their Deck, and if you do, shuffle it.
So there you go and here are some facts
Interesting fact #1:all of the comets monsters are based off of regular comets are named after periodic comets and the comet lords are based on non-periodic comets.
interesting fact #2:this chapter had the first part of the first duel but the main characters have not yet dueled but he will soon.
interesting fact #3:today is my birthday so to all of my readers here some cake and this is like a personal gift to you all
