New Whirlpool
Author's Notes: I worked on this all night and day on and off writing a few hundred words here and there to get this finished since it wouldn't leave me alone. I have a feeling I will be making this story as one of my top priorities when my arm is a hundred percent, and probably before to. If you like it please let me know with a review, thanks.
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or anything to do with Naruto but I did create the two sisters that will end up being on Naruto's team unless I decide to use someone else from cannon for the role.
Now The Story:
"So your the damned fox that bastard trapped inside me!" Naruto shrieked as she glared at he large pair of eyes staring back while not even noticing the tears starting to fall. "You! You are just as much to blame as that bastard for everything!"
"Did I ask to be jailed in a newborn child?" The booming voice asked in a weird tone of voice. "I was only here after the damned Uchiha trash who dared thought they could get away with what they did! Do you think that you are the only one who suffered at he hands of this damned village?"
Naruto didn't know what to say to the creature, she could have sworn there was some pain behind the voice of the terrifying fox. She stood there clenching and unclenching her fist fighting back the tears she realized were falling but she was failing to do so. The person she trusted most in the village turned out to be just as much against her as the rest of the populace. She was on the verge of finally giving up as she was realizing that none of her dreams would ever come true.
"So you are so weak that you want to give up?" The voice growled, anger evident in the voice.
"I'm not weak!" Naruto screamed though she knew it was a lie. She was weak, it was why she wasn't able to do a better job of protecting herself from the villagers. She couldn't fight them off and she had no doubts of what would happen if they bastards knew she wasn't a boy. It was because she was weak that she had to keep her hair hideously butchered and wear the hideous jumpsuit. It wasn't that she didn't like orange but she would love to be able to wear skirts or dresses or be able to be a normal girl.
"Prove to me that you aren't weal child, come face me." The voice said, a dare clearly heard in the tone.
"F-Fine, I will!" Naruto snarled. If she was going to die she might as well get a better look at he creature that was one of the biggest reasons that her life has been hell. "How do I?"
"Do you see the seal on the door?" The voice asked which Naruto nodded to. "Good, bite your thumb enough to draw blood then smear it on the seal."
Naruto hesitated for several moments before moving towards the large looking gate doors and put her thumb to her mouth while her heart raced a mile a minute. Did she really want to go through with this? If she messed with the seal would the fox escape and attack the village again or could it take her over? Would it kill her and finally end her suffering in this damned village once and for all? While her mind raced through the different options she seemed to move on auto pilot without thinking it through clearly and bit her thumb. As the blood welled there she reached out and wiped it over the seal causing the lines to start turning red starting where the blood touched and spreading quickly outward.
"What have I done?" Naruto asked herself as she crossed her arms before her face trying to protect herself from the monstrous winds that started ripping through the area seemingly coming from the seal. A small explosion sent Naruto flying back away from the gate as it swung open with a howl.
"I can't believe I'm finally free of that prison!" The voice laughed joyously as mist poured out of the cage into the surrounding sewer as Naruto climbed to her feet. She couldn't believe she just freed the demon that the Third had sealed in her to save Konaha. Looking upwards expecting to see a large beast coming out she didn't see a thing. "After what the Uchiha did to me I swore never to take this form again but I think the occasion calls for it."
Looking back down towards the voice Naruto was shocked to se a humanoid silhouette slinking out of the mist and toward Naruto. The girl was even more shocked when the details started becoming even more obvious. There was a beautiful kimono that had a blood red color and a black flame design traveling along the hems of the outfit. It somehow didn't hide the obvious curves underneath it and actually seemed to accentuate them even further. A beautiful yet pale face belonging the most exotic woman Naruto had ever seen was framed by a head full of long flowing red hair. Instead of normal pupils the woman's were slit and her eyes were a bright yellow color. The strangest part was the nine rust colored tails tipped in white swaying behind her as she moved.
"Wh-What are you?" Naruto asked taking a step back but the woman seemed to move faster that possible as she appeared in front of Naruto and grabbed her. What shocked the blonde was that it wasn't for an attack, the woman was hugging the younger girl while stroking her hair.
"I am the Kyuubi as I said child but you may call me Kyu-Chan, Naruto-Chan." Kyu said with a soft smile. Naruto didn't know why but the warmth and caring that the supposed monster was radiated made her feel safe and yet she couldn't stop the tears from falling. "It is alright child, cry all you want, you are safe."
It seemed like forever to the blonde as she cried into the elegant looking woman's arms before the tears finally stopped. The blonde felt so tired but she had so many questions such as if the demon, if Kyu was free why was she still here?
"That is a simple enough answer child." Kyu said with a fond smile, "I am still sealed inside of you, only thing you did was release me from the prison in your subconscious. To truly free me the seal on your physical self must be removed and in all honesty it would most likely kill you and we don't want that."
"We don't?" Naruto asked looking up at the red haired woman.
"No we don't, child. If we stay here in Konaha you will be killed though. The people here will go too far one day and it will be too late." Kyu said sadly shaking her head, "You should leave here, start a new life somewhere else where you can be happy."
Finding a place to be happy was something easier said than done, she was the demon container and didn't deserve to be happy.
"Don't give me that same shit the people here feed you, girl. I know how you feel and what you think, I am a part of you and have been since that idiot sealed me in you. I know that deep down you want a place to call your own and people to care for you." Kyu said sadly pushing the girl away a bit and starting into her eyes, "Leave here, I'll guide you as much as I can and train you. You can have the life you deserve but you won't have it here, you have to be brave and leave."
"But this is my home." Naruto said trying to find a reason to stay besides that and she couldn't. In fact it wasn't even much of a home, it was more of an apartment that should have been condemned and tore down long ago. No one cared for her and Sarutobi's betrayal, the Hokage she saw as a grandfather took away everything she worked so hard for. She really didn't have anything to stay for. "Where would I go?"
"Anywhere but here, go to Suna or Oto but don't stay where you aren't wanted." Kyu said seriously but caringly hoping to convince the girl to go.
"You said you will train me? Will you teach me to be a ninja?" Naruto asked pleadingly.
"Of course I will and I will teach you to be so much more and one of the things I will teach you is how to change this dump into something pleasant. It may only be a mental representation but when you are here it is as real as the outside which mean it STINKS! Being trapped in a sewer for so long is not a good thing." Kyu said curling her nose in disgust.
Reader Responses:
Sousie:
Thanks, I love female-Naruto fics but I do love the original Naruto canon also. I just hope that you and everyone else likes this story.
Monkey D Dragon:
I updated, hope you liked it.
