One reveiw from one of my favourite reviewers! Who had favourited and followed literally every story I have wrote! And I still need kitties!

Katie Voss~Thanks!

Sorreltail,, (I know she died when she refused to leave the kits but she was barely mentioned. She is one of my favourite cats btw)

The fight was finally over and StarClan won. Sorreltail was exhausted. A wound on her neck was bleeding heavily but she didn't notice.

I need to care for these kits! Looking over at Ferncloud's unmoving body, she felt a pang of grief for her friend. Her kits, Dewkit, Snowkit and Amberkit, kept ask in about everything that happened.

"Who were those big scary cats?"

"Whats that red thing covering the moss?"

"Why is Ferncloud sleeping?" Asked Amberkit.

"She is tired from all the fighting silly!" Dewkit cuffed her ear,

"Dustpelt will wake her up!" Added Snowkit.

Ferncloud wasn't showing any signs that she was being woken up. Then, Dustpelt rushed in. His face was clouded with horror and grief and he buried his muzzke in his dead mate's fur.

Sorreltail suddenly gasped in pain. She was only now aware of the blood trickling down her fur.

"The kits." She mewed weakly, "Let me be with them."

"Mama?" Amberkit, Dewkit and Snowkit stared at her mother in worry.

"Don't. Worry." She said betweed ragged breaths. That made them worry more.

"Don't die!" Wailed Snowkit and the others, burning their faces in Sorreltail's fur. This is how she wanted to die. To die with her kits.

The black haze started creeping in and she dimly felt her head hit the ground. She could barely remember Leafpool rushing in.

"Sorreltail!" She meowed in surprise, "Sorreltail!" The she cat had noticed that she was dying. She remembered Leafpool rushing to get herbs, and the world went black. Then it lightened up again. Two familiar figures stood next to her,

"Sootfur, Rainwisker!" She touched noses.

"Welcomed to StarClan, dear sister." They purred, then led Sorreltail along the paths of the stars as she knew her kits would be in safe paws.

Echofrost

"Can we go hunting yet, please!" Begged her apprentice, Rainpaw.

"Not right now." Sighed Echofrost. Her silver pelt was glimmering with dew drops and she wanted everything to be quiet and peaceful, theway they were before Sleekclaw became leader, Sleekstar. Many cats feared him and he was the reason her mother, Smallmouse, her father, Talonglare and her brother, Reedsky had all died. He said they drowned but Echofrost saw. She thought that Rainpaw was her punishment for spying on her leader. They were complete opposites in every way.

"Now?" He pestered her every seconed now.

"No,"

Half seconeds later,

"Now."

"No."

"Now?"

"NO!" She hissed suddenly.

Rainpaw glared at her.

"You hate me." He spat, then ran off I to the depths of the forest, to Snakerocks. Where adders were waiting.

"Wait!" She yowled. She had to protect her apprentice, now matter how much they hated each other.

She pelted on after him. Her speed outpowering Rainpaw. His eyes were wide as she ran up to him.

"Be caref-" She never got to hear him finish his warning.

She skidded on a stone and tripped. Suddenly, she felt a searing pain on her spine. It was near enough to kill her, but not straight away.

It-It burns!

She gave in to the pain quickly and let out a screech for help.

"Where are you!?" Cried out Rainpaw.

"Over here." It hurt even to move her jaws.

"You were bit!" He sounded surprised, and his gaze was full of horror.

"It burns!" She yowled, "Stop the pain!" Its dumb begging Rainpaw, but maybe he can stop it?

"I can't help!" As if Rainpaw guessed her thoughts.

Black started to creep into her vision and everything was cloudy.

"Farewell Rainpaw." She whispered, faintly. Rainpaw gave a wail of grief as her life faded away.

It broke her heart when nobody was there to welcome her into StarClan.

Smallmouse, Talonglare, Reedsky? She padded along the stars, hoping to find her kin somewhere.