Hey guys and girls! This is the new and edited chapter 2 as well. Hope it's better than before :P I'm changing a lot of things.
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Edited version
CHAPTER 2
To say that I was okay was probably an understatement since I felt shrunk and smaller than usual. I thought midorkio said that I would just turn back into a 13 year old but to be physically 13, man it sucks. I heard whispered voices around me. I clumsily sat up and I knew it was a bad idea once I felt the pounding headache starting to come. All of a sudden it was silent and it was too silent for my taste. I opened my eyes to find a room full of people staring at me with catiousness.
What everyone was thinking…
When the girl finally woke up and sat up everyone ceased all talking to stare at her with interest. She wasn't hideous that much could be proven with her enchanting sapphire eyes that would look purple in the right light. Her hair was beautiful dark ebony with streaks of red and blue at the ends of her hair, it was also little past the tip of her butt and looked really soft. She had a perfect rosy pink mouth, a straight nose, nice high soft cheekbones, and long thick lashes. She was starting to fill out and had nice curves that made all the girls her age would kill for. She was dressed in her fighting kimono with various weapons on her, twin moon bracelets on each wrist, a sapphire star shaped pendent around her neck (it was more of a choker but had gold chain designs on the black choker with the sapphire star pendent on it), she also had ankle combat boots, and nice tan skin. Everyone had to admit she was like a goddess.
Back to normal POV…
I was feeling pretty annoyed right now with everyone staring at me. Since they were staring at me, it gave me time to assess everyone in the room. There was a man with silver hair and a mask that only showed one eye. He was wearing the standard uniform of a ninja (from the scrolls Midoriko showed me). Then there was an old looking man in a poncho like thing. It was red and white that had the words Hokage written on them. He had a pipe in his mouth which smoke was blown out. Lastly there was a young looking boy that was fairly good looking. My 18 year old mind thought. He had deep onyx colored eyes. His hair was in a low ponytail and he had to be what looked like an ANBU due to the mask in his hand.
"Who are you and how did you end of here?" the Hokage asked with a stern voice. I sighed and looked around to find that I was in a hospital. I nodded and flicked my wrist; a barrier was put up to make sure no one could here the conversation. Everyone looked even warier of me.
"What I say does not leave this room. Understand? If it does you just brought my wrath upon yourselves." I warned. They all nodded still cautious of me. I then explained everything that happened from the very beginning and all the way up to now. They all looked like they didn't believe me so I sighed and put them in a genjustu that showed what happened to me. They soon believed me and agreed that it was wise to keep me as an ally.
"You do know that you will have to be put in the academy with the other kids your age right?" the Hokage asked. I nodded signaling that I understood. They soon left, each going their separate ways to think while the hokage has to do paper work for me. I was left alone to gather my thoughts and rest.
When I was discharged from the hospital, I went to the apartment the hokage let me reside in. It was nice, there was a fully stocked fridge, two full bathrooms, a nice and equipped kitchen, a plasma tv, couch and furniture, etc. It was a good thing that I shrunk my clothes into a charm because now I don't have to buy more! I made all my clothes go back to normal size and folded them and put them away. I took my keys and locked my door then went to explore The Village Hidden in the Leaves.
After hours of shopping and sight seeing, I came back home. I needed to rest since I had to start the academy tomorrow. Oh joy. I let myself drift into unconsciousness…
Once I woke up, I donned myself in my usual fighting kimono. I put my hair up in a high ponytail. If I remembered correctly then I would attend the academy the day they put the genins on teams. Well time to start my way over there... I used a teleportation justu to get to the academy; I appeared with in a flourish of sakura blossoms. I looked around and saw that no one was there yet so I chose a seat by the window in the middle row on the far left. I stared out the window caught up in my thoughts. Soon everyone began to show. No one really noticed me since I didn't move an inch since I was stuck in my own thoughts.
"Hey girl, you're in my seat. Move." An arrogant voice startled me out of my thoughts. I looked up and glared at the offender who dared to tell me to move.
"I don't see your name written on it so no. Go find another seat chicken butt head." I retorted with a scoff. The chicken butt, the new name a just gave the person since the back of their head reminded me of a chickens butt, glared at me and hn'ed and moved to sit behind me. I could practically feel his glare; I just roll my eyes. Once everyone was settled the teacher came in and announced the teams. I took off once he announced lunch break. I ate my lunch in my apartment which consisted of rice balls and juice. After I was finished eating I went to the designated area that we were to meat our new teacher. No one was there so I dozed off in a light sleep. When everyone was in the room I woke up. We all were silent until the blonde put an eraser on top of the door. I smirked, clearly amused but then the pinkie started to yell at the blonde for being stupid while chicken butt just stayed quiet.
When the door opened the blonde, pinkie, and chicken butt all waited in anticipation. They were shocked to find no eraser dropping on the silver haired teacher. They were even more shocked to find that it was attached to the wall above the teacher's head with a ninja star. They all looked at me to find my hand outstretched lazily.
"My first impression of you guys is you all are imbeciles. Meet me at the rooftop in 5 minutes." Was all the silver headed guy said. I sighed and disappeared in sakura blossoms and reappeared on the rooftop while the others took the stairs.
"Okay now introduce yourselves." Kakashi announced. Blah blah blah. (skipping the intro's because you all know what everyone says but instead of killing itachi, sauske wants to surpass him.)
"Okayyy now you newbie." Kakashi pointed at me. I sighed again and began my introduction.
"Hmm, what's there to say? I'm Kagome. I like to train, learn new techniques, and yada yada yah.. I dislike annoying people. And hmm, my dream isn't a dream, it's a goal, no it's a mission. I must destroy a certain man in this world. I will do so at all costs. If you get in my way, you will die. And yeah that's about it haha." I explained while everyone sweat dropped at the switched moods.
'Okay, I have a ramen freak, obsessed fan girl, a surpasser, and a mystery girl. Nice, this has to be the most interesting group yet!' Kakashi thought.
"Meet at training ground 6 at 5:30 sharp. Oh and skip breakfast or else you'll puke." And with that he poofed away. Everyone then left separately.
Okayy, I'm redoing all if not most of the chapters. I'm changing a lot of things so hope you like the first two edited chapters.
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