AN: Hello everybody! I've came back only a few hours since the first chapter was released. I'm still not releasing the name of my OC yet since I'm still working out the kinks on how I'll work this story out. Anyways, this is all still an introduction (Hence the Italics). I'll revert back to normal writing after I revealed her name. But I kinda need some suggestions though...
The name needs to rhyme with Hottie. Or at least ending with the vowel ee. Y'know like Lady, Jenny, Timmy. Something of the works. Suggest at the review button and thank you so very much for reading my story~!
Disclaimer: Nope, me no own Twilight. Me own cookie jar! Nom nom nom nom nom~ ^_^
The orange haired woman stopped in her tracks, prompting her partner to mirror her as well.
"I'll get going now. Keep an eye out on this new batch. I can't have another handful to die." She hissed out at him, her voice light and sharp like a knife. Her partner nodded determinedly, wanting to please his mate. The orange female bent down and gave a passionate kiss to her mate. She giggled like a child before disappearing into the forest.
The blonde male gave out a satisfied sigh and continued his way back to the house where his duties lie. The sounds of the bitten girl on his back gripped his attention made him hesitate entering the house. He knew her transformation was nearing half completion. The smell of her blood in her will attract the newborns for sure. He made a point to keep her in the second floor of the cottage he had kept his newborns until her transformation was complete. At least long enough for her to feel incredibly thirsty.
The girl opened her eyes gingerly after what felt like an eternity of being in the damn inferno. She gasped out how everything seemed so so.. Clear. It seemed so unreal. It felt as though she was looking through mud-filled googles before she was knocked out but now, everything was crystal clear. She could see everything in high definition. It almost felt unreal for her to see this much.
She glanced around her surrounding, confirming it as a bedroom. She was lying up on a single bed, the purple sheets ruffled and the window was shut. It was pitch black but even then, she could see things clearer then she previously could. She could see every nook and cranny in the area, seeing the microscopic scratches on each smooth surface. She moved her hand shakily and blinked in surprise at how pale she was.
Her tanned skin was replaced the pale-ish skin she had ever seen. They almost looked translucent. She clenched her fist and unclench. They seem to work perfectly. Her hands went to her hair and she was surprised that her hair was silky and smooth. They were the same color she was born with, light brown. She wiggled her toes and sighed in relief as she felt them cooperating properly.
She stood up at the side of the bed, getting balanced and hurried to the full body mirror in the corner of the room. Something happened to her. That much she knew and she had a hunch that the blonde man had changed her to something she didn't wanted to be. She stood in front of the mirror and gasped.
In front of her, reflecting on the mirror, was the most gorgeous person she had ever saw. No, she can't be human. No human had such delicate features. No human had such curves like those, the curves thousands of girls starves themselves for. No human could stand so still and elegant, making her look almost like a statue. The girl was shocked at how beautiful the facial features the creature had. Her lips were curved and full, a rosy color. Her complexion was flawless and pale. Her light brown hair framed her face well. But what was shocking were the eyes.
The pair of eyes were the color of the richest red she had ever seen. Almost demonic. Suddenly, the girl was afraid. Who was this creature? No, this monster? The absolutely gorgeous monster in front of her. Her hand came to her mouth and she gasped that the monster followed her movements as well. It copied her shocked expression. She let her hand down slowly, the monster following in suit. She held her hand in front and touched the mirror. It was no mistake. She WAS the monster.
She clumped down on the floor and started sobbing. What happened to her? Why was she different? Did something happened to have her change drastically? Surely this was the fault of the blonde male and his orange haired companion. She was angry. How dare they changed her life!
Before she could stand up to find the people responsible for her change, she gasped -no- Choked. Her hand reached to her throat. Her throat was burning! And here she thought the worst was over. Never in her life had she ever felt incredibly thirsty. She felt her throat was as dry as sandpaper. How in the world had she felt this incredible thirst? Her eyes scanned the room, searching for at least some liquid that would douse the feeling she had in her throat. None. She groaned in agony when the door to the room slammed open.
She spun around and gasped in fear. The blonde man was there, standing just as she remembered him in the alley. She cowered backwards, her back touching the wall as the man approached her in a slow manner. He was calm but she wasn't. All she could think about was the burning fire in her throat.
"W-Who are you? What did you do to m-me? W-Why am I-?" She cut herself off, the burning pain intensified with each breath she took from her mouth.
The pale man chuckled and nodded his head, as though he understood her pain. "I know. It's unbearable. I promise, it'll be over soon. I'll get you something to drink." He spoke and held out his hand for her to take. She glanced at the man, terrified at what or who he is. But the burning pain wasn't helping her out either. She held out her hand to grasp his and he flashed a grin.
"That's a good girl." He muttered and they both went out of the house. It was night time, slightly around 7. The girl was surprised to find a few other people there, looking edgy and beautiful at the same time. They were all as pale as she was. She could feel the aggression as well in the atmosphere and she felt herself tense around them. She kept her head down as she followed the blonde man's footsteps.
The blonde man gestured for her to join the group of what could be 6 (7 counting her) of people. The girl glanced up to the people around her, feeling suddenly terrified of them. They had crazed brightening red eyes just like hers but minus the crazed part. They were all thirsty as she had sensed and she inferred that they fell victim to the blonde man and his orange haired companion.
"Now listen up!" The blonde man called out and everyone's head snapped to his. "My name is Riley. I am going and I want you all to listen to what I have to say." He scanned their faces for their utmost attention. "You are gods now. Your creator has changed you all to invincible vampires. That is why you have this burning pain in your throats. You yearn for blood. No water, no fluid will quench your thirst. Blood will quench you. And blood is found in there." He pointed in the direction of the buzzing city across the forest.
"You will hunt but once you have had your fill, you will come back to me. As you may know, vampires will perish in sunlight. So make a point to come back here before sun break otherwise, you Will Die." Riley added darkly and the girl gulped. The crazed newborns growled in anticipation, not wanting to wait any longer. "All right, let's hunt." he spoke and ran in fast speeds towards the city.
The girl ran towards the city as well, her mind crazed for blood. There was not enough sanity for her to calm down and absorb what she was. The fact she was a vampire have not knocked her senses yet. The only thought she had in her mind was blood. Sweet sweet blood. The craving for blood was driven by the monster within her. She was a monster now. A hunter. A demon. And what they bring about is blood and death. And that was shat she will be getting tonight.
Cliffhanger~! Wonder how her first hunting trip would be like. I'm torn on whether having her break down crying after killing a human or maybe having her fight against one of Raoul's soon-to-be member. Or Maybe Raoul himself!
Ahh! Spouting too much info! I'll just shut up now...
Till the next time~ :D
