This is my first FMA fanfic! I'm so happy!
Alphonse sighed and stood up. He heard a sloshing sound. Looking down, Alu found that his leg had sunk into water! They are on thin ice!
"Edo! Be careful! We're on thin ice!" Alphonse yelled. "Eh?" said Edward. "He's still dazed..." Alu thought miserably.
Edo thought he heard Alu say, "We're on thin ice!", but it was probably, "We're not stuck anymore!". He slowely stood up and smirked.
"Prepare yourself dear brother!" Edo roared. He stomped his way over to a scared Alphonse. But halfway, he heard a sickening "crack".
Tiny cracks appeared in front and behind him. Edward finally realized what Alu was saying, "Careful! Thin ice!" "Damn" The cracks went between
Edward and Alphonse in a strait line. He had one idea. "Alu! When I yell "GO", run to shore like your ass is on fire!" Alu nodded shakily and faced the camp.
"GO!" They both sprinted towards land as fast as possible. Alu had longer strides, so Edo was right behind him. "We're almost there!" Edo thought cheerfully.
Though the cracks in the ice were gaining on them. They appeared right under Edward's feet. Then, Edo slipped! With his bad luck, Edo's automail arm hit first.
The thin ice under him gave away! "CRACK-SPLOOSH!" He landed head-first into the freezing water. He can't swim (automail), can't call for help, can't... anything.
Edowardo can only sink. Let the deadly water steal his warmth. His life. As he sinks to his watery death. In this water, it only takes seconds to die.
There was noone to help for miles. Alu can't swim either. Strength gone. "Alu..." He closed his eyes in defeat. Letting death embrace him.
Edo let himself go...
End of CH 2
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