This is a completely OC Naruto story, though it does have characters similar to the cannon story. This is basically an RP me and a bunch of friends are doing...and it's pretty damn awesome. Updates will be kinda random...though if I don't forget about it...prolly once a week.
So here's a rundown of the characters you'll meet so far...and the roles they play so far
Akatsuki members-Mokusei Uche(ex-Kusa), Mikkokou Uchiha(ex-Konoha)
Jinchuuriki- Kaze(9 tailed fox)
Other ninja-Kenshin Uchiha(Mikkokou's little brother), Zenchi Inka(last of his clan, uses the Dracogan, a fire based doujutsu)
well...that should be everyone important....so...have fun reading
Disclaimer: i don't own Naruto...and neither do my friends....we do however own our characters.
Oh...and I edited the last chapter a little bit.....just to say Hebi has gone missing...not much really....
Zenchi ran towards the fight, having heard a commotion "What the hell?" he asked, seeing Kaze, "KAZE, WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!?!"
Kaze looked back at Zanchi and kept a grin on his face. "I'm not quite sure myself." He said, still smiling like a drunk kindergartner. "All I really know is this large guy asked me my name."
"Need some help bro?" Zenchi said, lighting a smoke, acting fairly calm despite the situation.
"I don't think that there'll be any problems Zenchi." Kaze said. "I mean, how many bad people come up behind a sleeping kid, cover their mouth with their hand and tell them not to scream? Wait a moment..." It was then Kaze realized he was in way too deep. His grave was going to be made sooner than he thought, and he had just handed his murderer a shovel.
Mikkokou looked down at Kaze.
"Idiot," he said. He shook Kaze hard to make him release his finger. "Your only making this harder on yourself."
Kenshin charged at Mikkokou. "Let the boy go!"
"Why?" Mikkokou said. "What is he to you?"
"He is a Konoha shinobi!" Kenshin shouted. His blade connected with Mikkokou's. "Even though we share no blood, he is family, just as everyone else in this village is! We are all tied to each other! Just like you and I were, once."
If you only knew, Mikkokou thought. "Don't worry about him, he won't die. We just need to borrow him," he said.
"I don't believe you," Kenshin said through clenched teeth.
Kaze's eyes went wide as he continued to clue in. 'This... This guy...' he thought 'He's part of... The Akatsuki..' Finally, Kaze's smile faded and a small gust of wind passed through, shifting his hair. Around him a red aura gathered.
Zenchi removed his limiters, accessing the full strength of his bloodline, "Suck on this you bastard!" He formed a fireball, shooting it at Mikkokou "NO ONE HURTS HIM BUT ME!" he screamed.
Mikkokou barely dodged the fire by forcing Kenshin away.
Mikkokou looked down at Kaze. This doesn't look good. The fox's chakra is seeping out. I need to get him to look at my eyes. If I can catch him with Tsukiyomi, I can stop this from getting out of hand.
Mikkokou wheeled Kaze around, hoping to catch him in the gaze of his Mangekyou Sharingan.
The aura grew brighter, and Kaze's vision was blurred through sweat and tears almost coming to his eyes. He dropped to his knees but not for long. Hunched over on his hands and on the tips of his feet, he closed his eyes and roared at the top of his lungs. Going into his kunai pouch, he flipped around the sharp weapon and shoved it into his attacker's stomach.
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"Well shit I missed," Zenchi commented, jumping into the trees to hide before trying to land a kick on Mikkokou.
"You're famous today man, Mikkokou." Mokusei takes his ax, throwing it and as it land at Zenchi's feat. "Well, well your friends lucky you save him just to hurt him and you yell too much."
Zenchi paled as the ax lands at his feet "Oh fuck me...Kaze your on you own...HYOUJIN-NO-RYUUJIN!!" He summoned his sword, a gleaming silver blade, "Let's dance bitch"
"Quick to abandon your comrades are you not." The axe is lifted up and swung past Zenchi's face, Mokusei jumps up and rides on the retracting rope as he slides by Zenchi Turning his left arm into lava then punching at him.
Flames surrounded Zenchi, blocking the punch, "Moku, you still think I'm that much of a bitch?" He swung the sword at the lava arm, aiming to cut it off.
Mokusei regenerates his wounds, "This is so much easer then I thought." the axe swings by Zenchi again before an array of Kunai come at him from many directions. "Don't underestimate your opponents always overestimate them." he says he sits atop the rope of his axe which is above the ground by a good 10 feet.
"Aw but then I'm let down or did you not notice I've completely removed my limiters. The flame are now running free...TO BURN YOU! NOW TIME FOR YOU TO SEE ME NEW JUTSU I'VE BEEN WORKING ON! FLAMEING SEA JUTSU" A burst of fire surrounded the boy, burning everything that it touched.
"I notice that is what makes this fight allot easier. Your jutsu can not hurt me I can regenerate wounds and can change my forum and substance. Your limitations removed would just hurt your comrades and then we will take the Kyuubi and begin the extraction." Mokusei says as the Zenchi talks about the fires. He then jumps up talking his axe in to the air with him and then lands away from it.
"KAZE MOVE!!! The wave is heading your way." Zenchi turned to Mokusei, "No that could kill him"
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Mikkokou was replaced with a log. Damn it, this wasn't supposed to happen! he thought. This kid is making things very difficult. And to top it off, Kenshin is here. This is getting irritating. He pulled out a tag with the word "surpress" on it in kanji characters. I was hoping I wouldn't need any of these. He dashed at Kaze and slapped the tag to his forehead.
Kaze ran up to the attacker, ready to tear him to shreds when a piece of paper was smacked on his forehead. He lifted his hand to take it off when his chest started to hurt. "Damn it!" the demon child yelled as the pain grew sharper. After a small period of time, Kaze was already on his hands and knees, gasping for breath. 'My chakra... Kaze thought. 'My chakra is being.... Drained...' Trying to get up was a chore within itself.
"I..." Kaze wheezed out. "I don't need chakra." The boy's body was shaking so badly it looked as if he could barely stand. Attempting to lift his hand up to his forehead, he shuddered violently and then clenched his fist around the tag. "You should..." Kaze said as he ripped off the tag. "Should play fairly... Or otherwise... You could get yourself killed." The Kyuubi's chakra was suppressed deep within him but his other chakra was returning slowly. 'I'm getting more strength... Kaze said, forming his chakra in his hand. 'I can...'
"WIN!" The chakra finished it's formation into a small sword. Grinning he said, "Next time to pick on a kid, make sure you can beat him."
"Why are you resisting so much?" Mikkokou said. "We just want the Kyuubi. You can come back when we have it."
Kaze's face stayed as serious as he could make it. "It's because if you take the Kyuubi inside of me", Kaze started, "I won't come back. At least not the same, and I won't let that happen. So please, leave me and Zenchi alone or otherwise, I will not hesitate to show you how I am when you really piss me off..."
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"Well we know what you are cabable of, kid you think we don't know. I witness the Kyuubi front hand at one points its power could destroy all of Konoha." He then jumps up and creates a surge of water. "Now then I say this gives me the advatage."
"YOU TELL 'EM MAN!" Zenchi encouraged "...Moku, you won't beat me this time *Zenchi opens his mouth wide and fire sprayed out, unable to be controlled.
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Kenshin attacked Mikkokou from the side. His attack was blocked by Mikkokou's sword. "Kaze, right?" He said. "Get away from here. I'll keep him busy."
Kaze grinned. "Thanks... Kenshin?" Kaze said. "I owe you one!" Leaping out into the trees, he neared the exit of the training grounds, headed for the Hokage's Office. 'I get it', Kaze thought, 'I'm a freak. If I had a nickel for every homicidal psychopath who tried to kill me, I'd be freaking rich by now.'
Zenchi turned to Kenshin "Yo, old man can you handle both of them?"
"You plan on leaving all ready. I was just getting to know you. Darn, I thought we were becoming friends." Mokusei says in a childish but dark tone.
"I can still make friends with your head...AFTER I PUT IT ON A SPIKE!" Zenchi shouted, though he did nothing to prove it.
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"You're only delaying the inevitable, little brother," Mikkokou said. "Now let me remind you why you will never beat me, the gap that you will never bridge. Mangekyou Sharingan!"
Kenshin instantly found himself tied to a stake, surrounded by nothingness. Mikkokou stood before him.
"72 hours of that reminder begins now," Mikkokou said. He jammed his sword into Kenshin's heart, yet Kenshin did not die, though the pain was immense.
"71 hours, 59 minutes, and 59 seconds to go," Mikkokou grinned.
Kenshin was repeatedly stabbed in the heart for the next 3 days. The dark nothingness collapsed around him.
"AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Kenshin screamed in pain. His body went limp as he collapsed to the ground.
Mikkokou sheathed his sword. "Mokusei, I'm going after the Kyuubi." He then went to Mokusei's ear and whispered, "Make sure Kenshin is gotten to a hospital."
Mikkokou dashed off towards the direction Kaze headed.
"Well there he goes again such a drag, well someone take him to a medic. I have a date today I need to be somewhere shortly." Mokusei disappears.
So...in this lovely chapter of the story, characters are played by these people
Zenchi- Van
Mokusei-Crow
Kaze-ShamanStick
Mikkokou, Kenshin-Taka-kun
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