Chapter two is here, it's only been a few hours from the first but I feel like I've learnt a lot in that time I feel my confidence has been boosted so expect a more flamboyant style, last chapter was a little intro but this will be more of a story and the rest shall have action and any suggests my readers give.

Our favourite red and blue spider was feeling down after his recent defeat, as he swung home from The Montana jewellers. He couldn't stop thinking of her, those green eyes that made you lose yourself in seconds, or that platinum blonde hair that made the suns ray feel like the darkest shade of black! Her smile so enticing that it could change any ones day. Not even Gwen could compare to her... 'What am I thinking' he pondered to himself ' Gwen is the most beautiful woman inside and out, no one can compare to her' he thought again.

As he approached his and Gwen's apartment he felt his spider sense tingle. He searched the nearby proximity but couldn't see anything. As he landed he began to say " hmm that's str" he was cut off mid sentence by a blow to the head! His eyes slowly closed, he fought valiantly to keep them open but he over was exerted from the battle with black cat.

He woke up a few hours later with Gwen by his side. 'I'm in it now, she's giving me the look!' "Peter Parker you smell of that Lalique for Bentley crystal edition, that perfume that's worth like $5000000 and I know this because Cherry's boyfriend bought her it! Have you been having an affair with cherry!" She questioned assertively. " wait what eww that ugly dog?" He retorted grimacing at the thought. "Don't lie to me we're over!" She screamed the last part barely coming out as she was engulfed with tears." Gw-Gw-Gwen don't do this to me please I'm not cheating on you!" He cried " look Peter get a grip, I never get attention or anything from you, and why would you want me, your spiderman and you can have any one you want!" Peter was struck by this, this was worse than that time he went into that gay bar and kissed a man whilst drunk. He left ashamed leaving everything besides his spare costumes and web shooters there, he swung off to his apartment in Queens and never saw Gwen again after that day.

Peter Parker woke up from his slumber, as tired as he was he needn't to go to work, Jonah had some news for him. He walked in a sombre mood, he didn't even take his costume with him, he just watched crime after crime until he reached The Daily Bugle. "Parker take a seat in 5.3 seconds or your fired!" A booming voice shouted silencing the usually loud workers. As Peter sat his boss saw his mood and questioned " what's wrong boy Parker?" Peter retold him the events that occurred last night, leaving out the parts that would lead to his discovery as spiderman."That's very unlucky for you, but back to why I called you here..." "Continue sir." In a slightly impatient tone " wait boy I've just had an idea, I called you here to take pictures of my date with my new Girlfriend, but I recall her saying she had a girl around your age, do you want me to set up a date perhaps?" Jamison asked " sure mr Jamison but why?" "Well son it's bad for morale and if we have bad morale we don't sell papers, if we don't have papers I don't have money!" He explained secretly hiding out the fact he saw Peter as a son. "Well... Thanks I guess, could you explain her?" Peter asked shyly "well kid her mom said she was your age and she had a great personality, and she's her moms only heir so she is rich." Jamison retorted. 'Oh great she has a "great personality" ha ha ha'

Another chapter done, boring I know but just too give some story to it I promise the other chapters will be a great improvement, please give advice and ideas I will give credit