chapter 2 : the meeting A/N: I'm glad you all like my story, and lot's of thanks to some helpful criticism from
Lucycrew11
tried to fallow her advise also the characters are a little ooc (out of character .I hope you enjoy this chapter. Sorry for not updating in so long , I most likely will be updating once a week. Thanks again!
(CHARACTERS ARE OOC)
Peter Pevensie
"Bye mum , I love you " Lucy my little sister and I were saying goodbye to our mother on the train platform when I saw her. She had wavy locks of golden brown hair and full pink lips , she was at least a half a head shorter then me.
She turned and our eyes met , she had the most beautiful baby blue eyes I've ever seen , then she turned her head breaking eye contact .She was beautiful , she looked as if a goddess .But I don't think I'll ever see her again.
"Peter , Peter are you there?" Lucy was waving her hand in front of my face . I guess i looked pretty stupid just staring , I wonder if Lucy saw who I was staring at?
"Uh yeah sorry , I was just-"
"Starring at some girl " Lucy said looking me directly in the eyes.
"Uh , I well our eyes just locked and I couldn't turn my head it would be rude " I tried to cover up.
"Peter ,It's okay I'm twelve I understand if you fancy someone I think it's cute my older brother finally found some one to fancy." Lucy stated in a matter fact tone. "And you know your handsome , when you walk past a female stranger and sometimes even some men they usually swoon. They're so blinded with your handsomeness "Lucy said giggling.
"Lucy!" I said appalled." You shouldn't talk like that especially with mother right over there. And besides that um how long was I-" I was about to finish but Lucy being Lucy ,finished for me .
"Starring , not to long , it's just that we have to board the train and you still have to say goodbye to mum , who's watching us like a hawk. " Lucy said turning to look at mother who was indeed close by watching us with sharp eyes as if we'd disappear any second. Which is partially true we were going to the country , because of the war.
I walked over to mother , she reached out and pulled me into her arms giving me a fierce hug. When she whispered in my ear,"Peter , I just wanted to let you know that no matter what happens that I love you and Lucy so much whatever you do be careful , you never know there maybe some attacks out there , just look out for yourself and Lucy. I love you so much. " She whispered feverishly in my ear.
"I love you to mum, don't worry to much about Lucy and I , I'll watch after both of us just look after yourself. I love you too."
"Sorry to break up your parting words , mam but if you want your children safe , the train headed to the country is about to leave ." Said an officer .
" Oh I'll write you , and don't forget to look after yourselves. I love you." Mum said pulling Lucy and I both into a fierce hug.
"I love you to mu-mum."Lucy said her voice cracking slightly at the end . If i could see her face right now , i bet her eyes would be filling with tears she wouldn't let fall.
"Bye mum i love you take care of yourself." I said slightly muffled because my face was placed right in between my mum's shoulder and the crook of her neck.
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After we said goodbye to Mum , Lucy and I ran just in time to make it on the train. We passed at least 30 full compartments till we came along to one half empty which held a boy and girl. The same girl I locked eyes with before. The girl was just sitting down from putting something on the shelf, while who I'm guessing was her brother was sitting against the window .I pointed the compartment out to Lucy and before i could say anything else she dragged me inside.
"Hello, do you mind if we join you? Everywhere else is full." Lucy said.
"Sure, don't mind Edmund?" The girl said. The boy across from her who we just learned was Edmund . Had jet black hair , a hard face and his skin looked so pale he looked deathly. The girl across from him had a slightly better complexion but it was almost as bad as her brothers.
"Sure i don't mind , it took us forever trying to find this compartment." Edmund answered
"Thank you." Lucy and I said together. When were younger Lucy and I would often say things at the same time , I guess it was because we only had each other growing up, it was hard making friends for me being the boy everyone picked on so when Lucy came to the same school and stuck by me everyone started picking on her so we never had a chance to make friends.
Lucy handed me her bag so i could put it on the shelf above our heads. She went and sat next to the girl , which left me a seat next to Edmund. Not that anything was bad with Edmund , he seemed nice enough it was just that i got this feeling from him that was setting me off some how.
"Well introductions should be made , I'll start off I'm Susan Heartfeld and this is my younger brother Edmund Heartfeld , and you two are?"
"I'm Lucy Pevensie and this is my older brother Peter Pevensie." Lucy said before i could even open my mouth , sometimes she just gets too excited.
A/N: Sorry guys it's the end of the second chapter. I hope you liked it! Even if i thought it was a little suckish! I promise to try and update and revise this chapter over or after the holidays so thanks .
