Two chapters now edited, this might even help me with Ideas for my other stories that I'm working on at the moment. xD I'm hoping I can get all the chapters of this story edits by the end of the night or if not but tomorrow.
I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho
I own Melody, May, April, Mika, Rika, Melody's Mother, Jack, Mike and Ayame.
It has been a few days now and you had the boy on your mind the whole time. you wanted to see him again so you did.
you started swimming back to the lake, you had a smile on your face.
I hope he there you thought.
When you finally get there you pop your head out and hide behind the same rock, you peek over hearing something like a fight. When you look over you see the four boys again but they were fighting.
while two were, well the other two stand to the side watching it.
It was the gel back hair boy and the orange haired boy fighting.
you sighed watching with a small smile, you watch the boys train till they were done.
"man am I hungry" Yusuke says.
(A/N: ok let say you found out their name as they were training)
"yeah me too" Kuwabara says.
"then I guess that my cue to go home and start dinner" Kurama says smiling.
"yay!" both Yusuke and Kuwabara says.
you laugh a little
"hn" is the only thing Hiei says then he look to his left.
you gasp and hide behind the rock.
"hey Hiei come on!" Yusuke yelled as him, Kuwabara and Kurama were already ahead of him walking home. Hiei took one last look at the lake then turn and start to follow the others as you peek over the rock again and watch him go you smile a little.
"Hiei" you say with a dreamy like look on your face.
you stay there swimming around then as the sun falls and the moon come out you sit on a rock that was underwater so the water cover from your waist down. you smile at the moon and start to sing 'Taking over me' by Evanescence without you knowing two red eye's were watching and listening to you in a tree by the lake.
Hiei's pov
you were walking home with the two bakas and the fox, you thought you saw something in the lake by a rock it look like the same thing you thought you saw a few days back when you all went to the lake for some fun.
it look like a girl you thought.
After dinner you had to get out of the house, the two bakas were being annoying again so you went back to the lake.
But when you got there you saw a girl sitting on a rock, her waist down was covered by water she had long black hair and sea blue eye's and she was singing. you sat down in a tree by the lake and listen as you stare at her.
she was staring at the moon.
wow she so bea- what! no...hn she just a baka onna..who has a great voice...hn.
you just sat there listening when.
"Hiei"
you look behind you to see Kurama then back to the lake to see the girl gone.
you growled in anger.
Kurama stop under the tree.
"Hiei we're going to the movies you want to come" Kurama asked.
you look down then at the lake one last time then jump down.
"hn" you say.
Kurama smiled you two walk back to the house.
Melody's pov
you were just sitting there singing when you heard.
"Hiei"
your eye's widing as you look behind you then jump into the water and hide behind the rock.
you peek over to see Kurama looking up into a tree and say something then after a bit Hiei jump down, you gasped as your eyes widen.
please tell me he didn't see me! you thought.
you watch them walk away when they were gone you sigh going back under water and swimming home.
The next day you were humming as you swim around doing your morning things with a smile on your face. Your sisters where sitting at there make-up and hair stuff deck watching you with a weird look.
you swaim into another room.
"what's up with her" Rika asked
Then Mika had a big smile on her face.
"she found someone" Mika says.
The other two had big smiles too then their mother swim in.
"good morning dears"
"morning mother" your sisters says.
Then you swim out of the room still humming, your mother look at you.
"good moring mother" you say kissing her cheek the swim out of the room.
your mother watch you with a kinda shock look.
Rika, Mika and April had a smile on their faces.
"she found someone mother" April says.
Your mother looked more shocked then smiled.
you swim around still humming as you swim into yours and May's hide-out and lay down on a rock with a flower in your hand picking at it .
"he love me, he love me not, he love me, he love me not, he love me, he love me not, he love me! hahahhahah ahh"
you lay on your back staring up with a dreamy look on your face but what you didn't know was someone was watching you.
The Watcher's pov
"hahahahahaha this couldn't be any easier hahahahahaha!" Ayame says.
The sea witch she too was a mermaid but a evil one she had knee high long red hair and red eye's.
she laugh at the bubble that has Melody in it.
"it look like the princess has fall in love with oh my by the look of it a demon hahahaha like mother like daughter!" Ayame says laughing.
"Mike, Jack get over here!" Ayame yelled as two kinda small sharke come swimming over.
"yes Ayame" they say.
"I want you to watch this girl" Ayame said pointing to Melody as the two nod smiling a evil smile as Ayame did too then start laughing.
Melody's pov
you had went home to grab something to eat when your mother swim in.
"so Melody whos the lucky merman" you mother ask.
you had almost choke on what you were eating as you to turn to her.
"um well" you start as you mother stare at you.
oh god how am I going to tell her you thought biting your bottom lip.
your mother got a little confused look.
"Melody is there something your hiding from me" she asked.
you stare at her kinda uneasy.
she narrow her eye's.
"well" she says.
"um-" you started again.
Thats when May came swimming over not seeing your mother.
"Melody remember those guys from the lake " May stop finally seeing your mother as your eyes widen.
"what boys by the lake?"
your mother eye's widing
"you went to the sore again didn't you! what have I told you about that!. what if a human saw you huh? Melody why can't you just listen to me I told you not to go and what do you do you go againt my rules and swim up to the sore!" your mother yells at you.
you look down.
your sisters come in wanting to know what all the yelling was about.
"and what about these boys huh! ahh your not tell me you have falling for one have you!" you mother says glaring now.
you just keep looking down without saying anything.
"I will NOT allow this!" your mother yell.
You finally had it and look up and glare back.
"you don't even know him!" you yell.
"I know that he a human and humans are bad!" your mother yell back.
"how would you know! and I know his not hu-" you put your hand over your mouth your eye's widen.
yeah over the time you had been watching him you had found out he was a demon.
your mother eye's widing again.
"no.. no... I CAN'T NOT BELIEVE THIS FALLING IN LOVE WITH A HUMAN IS ONE THING BUT A DEMON I DO NOT THINK SO!" your mother scream.
your sisters gasp staring at you shock as you look to the side.
"MELODY YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT YOUR GETTING YOURSELF INTO YOU COULD BE KILLED DEMONS ARE EVIL" your mother scream again.
"HOW DO YOU KNOW HUH! AND SO WHAT IF I LOVE HIM" you scream back.
your mother sighed calming down.
"melody it's time I told you this and you three as well"
you and your sisters got a confused look.
"well your father, did not get killed by humans he wasn't even a merman" you mother says looking to the side.
your eye's widen and your sisters gasp.
"your father was a...demon"
you were so shocked that you couldn't move, May had a shocked look too.
"why" was the only thing you could say.
your mother look at you kinda confused.
"how come you can love a demon and I can't why!" you yell.
your mother had a sad look.
"because I don't want you going down the same path I did" your mother says.
this time you had the confused look.
"do you have any idea how hard it was for me and your father to be together him being a demon and I being a mermaid" you mother says.
"it was hard and how your father died was because other demons found out about me and your father and didn't like it and they trying catch me and selling me for a lot of money but your father save me but it came with a prices, his death" your mother says trying not to cry.
"I don't want the same thing that happen to me happen to you so I'm telling you now Melody I do not want you to ever go anywere near that boy do you hear me!" your mother says.
tears came to your eye's.
you turn and swim away your sisters watch you with sad eye's as May followed you. You swim fast to the hide-out and cry on a rock.
Ayame's two sharke smirk seeing you as they swim over.
"aww poor princess can't be with the one she loves" Mike says.
you stop crying and looked up.
"yes how sad if only there was a way we could help" Jack says.
they swim around you.
"w-who are you?" you ask wiping your eye's of tears.
they smirked.
"my child we know someone who can help you be with the one you love" Jack says.
"forever" they both say.
you stare at them.
"really" you asked.
they nod.
"Ayame she can do it she is a power girl" Mike says.
you stare at them a bit shocked.
"no no get away from me!" you kinda yell laying back down on the rock.
they sigh and start to swim away.
"oh well I guess you'll never get to be with the one you love so much" they say.
you slowly pick your head up and think a little.
"wait" you say.
"yesss" they say's turning back around smirking.
you look at them.
"I'll do it" you say as they smirk more.
"gooood" they says.
you follow them to where Ayame's hide out is, May who had almost got to the hide-out saw you swimming off with the two sharke.
"huh Melody" May say as she follows you and them.
Well thats the end of this Chapter, things are really starting to heat up now. Also I'm trying not to copy to much of what the movie is so you'll be seeing some different stuff that wasn't in the movie.
