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Respond to lazybum131 well with Goku knowing Instant Transmission as well as the Saiyans coming back to Earth is part of my plot you will find out later which I will cover in this chapter but planned on going on the details much later on when Gohan actually finds out who his parents are and I agree about the commas and sentence structure wise. I really find it no concern if people are turned off by reading my story mentioned in the end since it'll have people disliking the general idea and this is for fun if I end up with more people reading the story I'll just be more committed to putting up more chapters. And Cell's DNA structure I'm not so sure about guess he is a different Cell that's why Gohan was able to destroy him quickly but the Z-Warriors still had problems with him- this is an alternate since in some way Cell came from the future he can still have his DNA just a ripple in time I guess.
About the three girlfriend/wife idea I'll cross that bridge when I get there I guess I've been watching too many harems I'm planning to continue that idea but due to some negative comments about the subject I might back track and have a poll of who Gohan should be with if I get another six comments from members (since someone can leave a comment with nonmember type being the same person) giving it a negative respond. I'm not too sure but I think I read story somewhere that in Saiyan society it's acceptable for the strongest to have many mates and being a teenage guy and all it's a very cool idea due to the anime I have been watching lately (Sekirei+Pure Engagement, To Love Ru, etc.)
So I might do a twist and have Gohan go in to a love triangle/square (Like Baka to Test awesome anime BTW) where all girls love him and Gohan can't decide and he destroys planet Earth LOL JK but seriously speaking I'll be putting a poll up once I reached that point in my story. BTW awsomenessgirl3000 you were very close to the Lime idea that it's not even funny though I hate Angela and don't plan on putting her on here I have no idea how you read my mind about putting Lime in but you'll find out probably in chapter four that the idea of the three girlfriend maybe Erasa because I loved the "Just for the night" lemon on this website but my idea is to combine some animes I watched lately to this Fanfiction close to those if anybody ever watched Futakoi first episode, kind of cheesy but I'm a cheesy kind of guy.
Sirius potter2 Yea I dislike ki-restraints so I guess you'll like this chapter.
Darkestdaye (thank you itachisdbzgurl you read my mind) for now I'll keep it at teen since there won't be to excessive violence in my opinion since I mentioned I'm not very good yet (hopefully) at battle scenes cussing is part of our teenage culture today so unless someone younger reads this it'll be okay. If I put up and excessive scenes like sex and such with vivid description because I'm a type to hint those whether initially or un-initially but if it happens and this story ends up being ban than I'll just put it as rated M and repost it but that will probably won't happen until way later if it happens on in the story because Gohan is like eleven right at the moment IF I decide to make this a lemon than encouraged for the process.
Any more questions I'll be glad to answer regarding what I didn't explain thanks lazybum131 and other reviewers I'll definitely look to see my sentence structure as well as commas really appreciate your suggestion though I am pretty lazy at times which means there is no guarantee that I'll be correcting much since I usually don't look at the stuff I write if anyone else read some of my other stories they know.
Without farther ado
Chapter 2 Undesired Reactions
Nappa, Raditz and Vegeta was stunned speechless. All three were pale as snow as they stared at the boy who continued to get treatment from Dende. Goku who started to get worried crept closer to the three Saiyans.
"What's wrong with you three? It looks like you seen a ghost," Goku stated.
"Very close to a ghost," Vegeta spat out bitterly.
"You have no idea," Nappa stated as he swallowed hard.
"So what's up with the horn?" Goku asked innocently.
Raditz slowly looked at Goku. "Brother, remember when I told you I gave your son to Frieza as a pet? Remember when I told you that before we left to go to Earth for failing to do so in our last couple of attempts that your son was being punished for trying to escape and was severely being beating to death and put in the chamber for a week. If he survived he would be put on the healing chamber but if he died well he died. I also mentioned to you that being beaten by Frieza guaranteed death which your son had been put through. Well this horn was one of Frieza's forms of transformation the second one I think."
Goku's smiling face quickly turned upside down as angered flashed upon his eyes. His onyx eyes quickly turned teal and back as Goku tried to suppress his anger. Goku clinched his fist as he drew blood from his hands. Goku was the first to transform out of the four and the strongest thus far. They all respected him but it was pointless to tell him that his son was probably dead. Goku stride to gain more strength to "rescue" his son however pointless it may seem to the other three.
"All right I think it's safe to put on the ki restraints now." Dende states as he finished healing the mysterious warriors' internal wounds and now working on the exterior.
The Z-Warriors closed the gap as they placed the restraints on the boys' wrist. Ten minutes later the boy who still has many scars that will not disappear looked a lot better as Dende finished healing all his external injuries. The Z-Warriors cautiously looked at the boy with signs of waking however found that it was not happening.
"I don't think his waking up." Tien said stating the obvious.
As they waited for a reaction from the boy who seemed to have a looked of intense pain even without his injuries seemed to worry the group as to why. Unable to wait any longer the group decided to gather the Dragon Balls to wish the people of Earth back. The wishes came and went with Krillin using the last wish to wish the androids to have regular human bodies.
With the current problem solved by the Dragon Balls the Z-Warriors looked at the new one sleeping on the hard ground of the lookout. The boy slowly opened his eyes and blinked a couple of times. He looked around him to see the unfamiliar surroundings as people looked at him. He suddenly jumped up and got into defensive position waiting for them to attack.
"Slow down partner we're not here to cause you any harm unless provoked." Yamcha states as the boy who was still tense didn't budge.
"Maybe he doesn't speak our language," Tien states.
Looking at Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz who were the only ones who knew how to speak Saiyan their native tongue the three looked at each other.
"Who are you boy," Vegeta states.
The boys choose to ignore Vegeta as he looked at his wrist.
Goku walked up in front of the group and towards the boy. Still serious about the information the three Saiyans had given him he tried to look cheerful as he greeted the boy.
"Howdy, I'm Goku and you are." Goku said with a genuine smile.
The boy looked at the figures face for a long time. When the Z-Warriors were about to give up the boy answered in a raspy voice.
"They call me Romo."
Goku smiled. "Nice to meet ya, now you must be wondering what those things in your wrist are."
The boy merely nodded.
"Well you see there for caution we take since we don't really know your intent for this planet. We restrained your ki until we figure out why you're here. We're grateful that you…"
Goku suddenly stopped in mid-sentenced as the boy clenched his fist. He felt power beyond description as the boy overpowered the restraints place upon him. In a blinked of an eye the boy transformed into a Super-Saiyan successfully destroying the ki-restraints. But he was not done powering up as he reached the level that destroyed Cell within seconds. Upon reaching this transformation electricity shot up as the tiles of the lookout raised above the ground. What came next left everybody speechless as the boy's eyebrow disappeared and came together and his hair slowly grew longer. When Goku tried to step up to stop the boy he was shocked as he was stung with electricity. The boy increased his power to the level beyond anyone had ever felt before that the clouds started to gather together turning dark as if a storm was coming up. The boy stopped and looked at his hands with a smirk and a blue hair women was shocked that her invention was destroyed.
Gohan looked at his hands as he felt his new power. He could not comprehend what happened but at first he couldn't access his power however he felt something. Something different and he wanted to just unleash and that's what exactly he did as powered up breaking his limit to the extent that the ki-restraints broke. After the ki-restraint broke it was just pure raw power that was unleashed for being pent up and afterwards his body feels lighter and he felt way stronger than he used to be. He slowly descended back to normal and looked at the disbelief faces of those around him. He smirked before looking at Goku.
"You were saying?" Gohan questioned at first not noticing that everybody dropped down to their defensive position ready to strike.
Goku was beyond shocked. If the Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz were unable to break through the ki-restraint what makes this boy so special. Yes he did defeat Cell but the restraints were supposed to limit the ki to a level from reaching farther than a human standard and if provoked than death was probably on the person's way.
Gohan yawned as he looked at the others who were all now in their own defensive position. "Relax I'm not here to hurt anybody unless 'provoked'," Gohan states copying Yamcha.
Goku chuckled a little dropping his defense.
"So what brings you to our planet?" Goku questioned as he looked behind him to see that everybody didn't dropped their guard including Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz.
Gohan eyes became dazed as he stared off visioning the fight that he had been a part off not long ago and there attempt to shoot his space pod down as maneuver his way out barely escaping. "Let's just say I had a breakdown."
"Hey Romo, I was wondering if you were part of Frieza's Intergalactic Army."
At the mention of Frieza Gohan froze.
"I was never part of it I was just there." Gohan states mechanically thinking back to all the lives he had taken.
With that Goku's head dropped to the ground.
"Oh, well it doesn't hurt to ask but do you by any chance have met a boy name Gohan? His going to be about your age probably, a Saiyan well I guess a demi-saiyan, really a very active child. I have looked everywhere for a year to where my son whereabouts was at but the problem on Earth caught my attention so I had to stop looking that's how I learned Instant Transmission and some other techniques from other planets."
Gohan froze again. Why did that name sound so familiar? Memories started to flashback on Gohan's mind of the times he dreamt of being a little boy who was on top of a shoulder of a man with spiky hair as a womanly figure voice could be heard in the background. He couldn't see the faces to well and couldn't remember a thing about his parents due to the beating he had experience over and over again for crying or showing any type of weak emotions that after he survive Frieza's beating he had the knowledge to show no emotions and a year later transformed into a Super Saiyan for all the emotions he kept inside of him after severely being injured in a suicide mission to purge a planet. After that almost all his missions became suicide missions and he wanted to live so he followed orders which he regretted after snapping out of his one of his hysteria and waking up to noticed that he was holding up a little girl by her neck that was barely living. After he let go of the little girl (watch out for her on later chapters) her eyes told him everything- she was scared beyond recognition that he had caused all this pain, looking around him he noticed she was the only one left of her kind as his subconscious retaliated against him because he had killed of race after race without being considerate to the fact.
"I have never met a Gohan or any other Saiyans beside the four of you," Gohan responded with a chilled look on his eyes that he may have been someone he killed in the past.
"Oh I'm sorry for asking," Goku said unable to hide the disappointment came to his own eyes and voice.
"How did you start serving under Frieza brat," Vegeta said finally lowering his defensive position as the other two Saiyans followed his example.
"I just woke up and I was there. Details to what happened before hand seem like a distant memory because I was very young when I came."
"Did you kill off that bastard?" Vegeta said as a follow up question.
"Yes," Gohan said as he smirked a little. "Yes I killed him, his brother and father after they discovered that they couldn't compare their powers to me alone so they decided it'll be best that after I came back from a suicide mission to attack. They almost killed me too if I hadn't reached the next level. And massacre those fucking bastards."
Gohan looked at his hands remembering every little detail that was engraved into his memory. All the suffering they had caused him physically and emotionally. He remembered beating those three to bloody pulp until he blasted them to obliteration into the next dimension.
"What happened to his army?" Nappa questioned.
"They tried to blast me before escaping. I can imagine that his mother would be the next leader if I hadn't all ready destroyed her after finding out his plans."
He remembered her all right she had tortured him the most. Though he had almost no sexual experience, besides eating out that horrible looking creature for most of his stay under the rule of Frieza having his head stuck inside that disgusting woman was his worst nightmare. She had been the main reason for many of his tail injury or being broken to most of the extent until he had learned how to strengthen his tail at times she even wanted to go all the way before Gohan found out from her Frieza's plan. Her exact words were "you won't be living for too long might as well give you something to remember before you die" after she said those words he blasted her to the next dimension.
"So there's no one left in Frieza's family?" Vegeta questioned.
"No there's one left." Gohan trailed off remembering the power he felt the first time sensing that creature. Frieza, Cooler, and their parents feared him though he wasn't around most of the times. He was the main reason how Gohan first felt the extent of Frieza's and Cooler's full power only to be demolish by this one being. Gohan shivered at the thought.
"What do you know that we don't boy." Vegeta stated coldly.
Gohan glared at Vegeta. "I would back off if you know what's good for you."
Gohan could only compare his power to the remaining threat he had left. He knew that he would probably come for him at any moment. Experiencing his own power he knew in the back of his mind though Gohan was powerful he did not stand a chance as of yet against the tyrant.
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