A/N ok I wrote several chapters before p osting this so I decided to post chapter 1. YAY
ok criticism is welcomed and no cussing please. I am brand new to all of this so feel free to tell me if I'm doing somet hing wrong.
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Jayfire
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so...
ON with the story
Disclaimer:
i do NOT own warriors I wish I did BUT I don't
Chapter 1- Mae
It was the end-of-summer camp that took place every year in our town. It was spl it into groups so you were only with peo ple in your grade, and was split further so that guys and girls were in differen t places at all times.
Like anything would happen.
So it was the last night of camp this ye ar, but little did we know that it was t he last place any PERSON would ever see us, but before I go on let me introduce myself and my friends.
I am Mae. I'm 14,a bit taller than avera ge with brown-blonde hair down to just a bove my elbows. Ive been told I'm level- headed and witty.
I have several friends that I hang out w ith and we all are total readers.
Next theres Mikaela Marshall there are t wo mikaelas in the group and their last names both start with M so we say last n ames when introducing. Mikaela Marshall has darker skin with brown hair that's S O dark it's almost black. She's pretty a nd kind and really smart.
The other Mikayla is lighter skinned wit h long dark brown hair with a slight wav e to it. she reads A LOT and is in choir . She can easily make you smile and is f ull of random facts. She is smart when s he needs to be and brave when she wants to be.
Paisley is very different then those two . She is light with medium length honey brown hair. She is hyper and outgoing an d funny. She's a good person to have aro und because she is always smiling.
Lastly Madison. Madison is Very pale wit h pretty blonde hair and blue eyes, but this blonde is far from dumb. She is sma rt and happy. she sometimes comes off as sassy but is great when you know her.
But that's quite enough about us let's g et to the story.
So the night started like any other. We ate dinner and roasted marsh-mellows and then we had two hours of free time befo re lights out. It was already around nin e and very dark, but like the girls we w ere we decided to go on a night hike. It was fun in the dark. But then we heard something in the bush, not ten feet away , then something els to the other side. I didn't know what it was and didn't wan t to, but then a twig broke behind us.
Being us,
we freaked and ran blindly away from the noise and ended up lost.
So we walked, and walked, for three hour s, I had a watch, Then I gave up.
Any of you people have a clue? I asked.
None. Said madison.
Uuuuuh... No. Said paisley.
Well let's just keep walking and find a place to wait it out. Suggested Mikaela.
I know it was stupid but we thought we w ere back-tracking so we kept walking and as we walked I was aware that I was so thirsty that as soon as the thought ente red my mind I couldn't get it out but I was in luck because we soon found a pool of crystal clear water fed by a small w ater fall.
No Way am I gonna drink that! Said Madis on.
Unless someone poisoned it it Should be just fine because the water keeps runnin g. I said
I suggest we drink some just to test it. Said Mikaela.
So we did and it was really clean tastin g, so we just kept drinking. But then so mething happened.
As paisley took another sip from her cup ped hand she started being dragged by so me invisible force toward the pool and j ust before she was pulled in she disappe ared in a big poof. All of the sudden Ma dison did the same thing! Then both mika elas one by one then I felt a weird ting ling and was unable to move as I was dra gged to the water then I poofed as well.
A/N ya we seem pretty stupid sometimes i n this chapter but it WAS around midnigh t
;D
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