Yes! Ive had this on my computer for days but I have been so busy I havn't been able to upload it. I really didn't think I could pull this one off because I always thought it would be quite impossible to go into Wall-E's POV. I didnt want to make him to childish but I still wanted some little kid innocence. Reading this over, I feel like I made him to adult. I'm not sure though. Ive already rewritten this once and I just wanted to publish it. The first version was really bad, I had this whole backround story involving Wall-E's parents, and dont even get me started on how bad it was.
I was absolutely terrified. I don't believe that I had ever been this terrified in my entire life. I was crouching behind a rock, my hair slightly on fire, shaking uncontrollably. Out of the corner of my eye I saw that she had shot a hole right through the rock. I took a deep breath in and held it, trying to control the shaking. I heard her boots crunching gravel as she walking away. I let out the breath that I had been holding.
Glancing up, I saw the ship that had brought her here disappearing into the stars. It had landed only 10 minutes ago in a burst of fire and a lot of shaking. When the dust had cleared a girl had been standing there. She was beautiful, standing strait and tall (taller then me) staring up as the ship lifted into the sky. Before it had gone to far she had turned around and surveyed the area. Her strait black hair fell down past her shoulders, and her bright blue eyes scanned over everything in the area slightly to the left of me.
Then she had done something that shocked me, she had bent down, tapped her shoes, and lifted into the air. Her face showed an extreme happiness and I wondered why she ever landed. When she did her face fell. I leaned out from behind the rock to see what she was doing. The minute I made noise, she spun around, impossibly fast, pulled a gun out of nowhere and shot. Lucky for me she missed. Not lucky for me she set my hair on fire.
As I put the fire out with water from my water bottle I followed her slowly, far behind her. After watching her for a few hours I realized she was looking for something. Using a scanner that turned red after a few seconds of scanning something she would wander from trash pile to trash pile looking more and more frustrated.
I felt sad. I wasn't really sure why, but seeing her so disappointed made me feel unhappy. I sighed and sat down with my back to the pile of tires I was currently hiding behind. Out of the corner of my eye I caught a glimpse of Zeus, my pet cockroach. My only companion on this lonely world, and currently he was scuttling towards his doom.
From the earlier, immediate response to shoot anything that moved I was worried for Zeus's safety approaching the armed girl. I wanted to run out and grab him but I felt that I would give away his position with my stumbling around. When he came within some 5 feet of her she spun around as if sensing him and pointed her gun at him. I caught my breath and held it until she put the gun away and held out her hand.
Zeus hopped on to her hand and ran up to her shoulder, like he did whenever I came back from cleaning. She smiled at him, he stared at her, and I couldn't help but smile. I relaxed and took a step forward and slipped. Crashing into the pile of tires I gave away my position. I hit the ground with full force and slowly looked upwards into the barrel of the girl's gun. That thing sent chills down my spine.
Zeus was sitting on the top of the gun, staring me down as if wondering whether or not I was going to get blasted. I put my hand out and Zeus joined me on the ground at the mercy of this unfamiliar person's judgment. Her pure white T-shirt and pants made me feel self conscious about my permanently dirt streaked clothes. She watched me for a moment more before putting her gun away and walking off stopping every few moments to check a pile of trash. Zeus sat on my head watching her too and I knew that he felt just as sad as I did. I continued to follow her, thinking back to my favorite movie.
Dont you just love the cockroach's name? That was one of my better ideas. Okay read and review! People who dont have accounts on Fanfiction can still review! I know your out there! I take critisism too, at least it means you've read the story.
