Hey guys, i'm so sorry it has been so long since i have updated any of my stories i have just been really really busy sso here is a quick chapter i wrote on my phone in the car i know there are probably hundredds of gramatical errors but i havent had time to do any editing as i said i wrote this in the car on my phone so sorry for all the mistakes but i hope that you will all still enjoy reading it! please leave reviews i love all feedback for my stories! love you guys! 3 enjoy!
As I slowly started regaining consciousness something that I could not remember ever hopping before caught my attention I saw something a tiny flicker of sparkling light off in the distance. I felt shocked, scared and excited all at the same time I kept trying to see more of the light I couldn't be sure how much time had passed when I finally realised I had moved! My arm was now extended in front of me reaching into the darkness. How can this be happening. It is impossible. I can't move I can't remember ever being able to move. Am I dreaming? "Bella?!" I heard someone call out my name his voice so full of hope and desperation. "Please wake up, I need you, we all do!" As the voice continued the desperation seemed to grow and the hope seemed to fade. "Come on Edward, it's time" a second voice said "No! Not to day! She will wake up! She has to! She would never leave me! Together forever right bells?" The first voice pleaded despair swallowing his voice he sounded devastated. Suddenly I saw the girl dancing in the sunshine I look around her and see a young man who looks around the same age, he stands up and walks to the girl takes her hands in his "together forever right bells?" Before leaning down to kiss her lips when he pulls away she replies with a simple "right" as a huge grin spreads across his face. I realised that girls is me and the voice called Edward is the man I saw he is pleading for me to come back to him but I have no Idea how to get there. Even though i don't remember him i know i have very strong feelings for him and i know i need to find a way to get to him once again. I feel tears start to run down my cheeks as I whisper the words "help me, Edward"
E. Pov
"Omg! Did you here that!" Alice exclaims
"What?" I reply
"It's bella! She just spoke!" My mother, Esme, informs me.
"Go get a nurse quick!" I shout, as I look down at my Bella's lifeless body I notice tears on her cheeks so I wipe them away gently "don't worry bells you're going to be fine trust me" I promised not knowing wether I could jeep my promise.
"Are you sure?" The nurse asks coming into the room with my older brother emmett.
"Yes, she said 'help me Edward' just after Edward said together forever" emmett said sincerely
"Ok, well we could take her for a neuroimaging scan again" the nurse replies
"when will that be?" My father, Carlisle, asks.
"We can get her in at the moment, we should be able to see how active her brain is although I wouldn't get your hopes up not many people in her condition survive" the nurse says before wheeling bella out of the room.
so... what did you think? good? bad? hopefully you could all make some sense of it:) i'm not the best writter but i guess you all know that i really need to getsomeone to edit my stories for me anyone intersersted? pm me if you are! thank you so much for taking the time to read my story! oh feel free tocheck out my other two stories love you guys so much!and i promise i am going to put more effort into writting so i can produce chapters betterr and more efficiently for you guys! thanks again for reading :)xxx
