THIS IS MY 1st FIC TTHATS WHY I HAVE ALOT OF GRAMMAR ERROR BUT IM TRYING MY BEST TO CORRECT THEM BASICALY IM WORKING ON THE 4th CHAPTER CUZ THE ACTION BEGINS IN IT LET ME KNOW IF I HAVE IMPROVE PLEASSSSSSSSE
In italic its the thoughts
MISTAKEN
Chapter 2:
The BBA manager drove near a narrow alley and parked nearby. He walked into the alley where a tall and purple haired man was waiting.
'' What took you so long Stanley?''
'' It was the traffic you know Tokyo's circulation.''
'' Whatever! What's the breath taking news that couldn't be told on the phone.''
'' It might give you a shock. ''
'' I don't care! What imports me it's the fact that it might be useful to our plan.''
'' It is! It is! ''
'' So speak'' said the man with impatience in his voice.
'' It seems that young Kai is having a weak for a certain girl. I must say more than a simple weak. ''
'' Wha... what you mean he has a girlfriend? '' Chuckled the abbey owner.
'' Don't make me laugh Stanley. Kai being in love that's absurd! '' Responded Boris.
'' It might sound absurd but his feelings toward the girl might just...''
'' SHUT UP!'' '' THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE YOU KNOW HOW WE TRAIN OUR BEYBLADERS THE FIRST RULE THAT WE TEACH THEM IT'S DO NOT HAVE ANY FEELINGS ''
Boris aimed his weapon at the old man and was just about to shoot him.
'' Wha… What are you doing! You can't kill me. '' Panicked the man.
'' Why can't I kill you? You are pointless to our plan and saying that Kai is in love is an insult towards the abbey.''
'' Bu…but you do not understand Kai is in love if we kidnap the girl he will be obligated to come back at the abbey and subdue to black Dranzer. ''
The purple headed man thought about what just the BBA manager said. It was true that it might work and Kai might as well return to the abbey.
'' Well I guess we could try and if we fail this time I'll make sure that your journey end up in hell and don't call me I'll give the you instructions later. ''
On this the trench coated man left the alley with his bodyguards.
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Kai slowed down to walk into an alleyway near Tyson's dojo.
"This way." Kai managed to say as he rushed Hilary into the alley.
'' What happened?'' asked Hilary a bit confused.
Kai's arm reached her shoulders and pulled her down next to him.
Hilary sighed as she asked him for the second time '' what's wrong Kai?''
'' I...I need to talk to you.''
'' Ok what's wrong?'' asked the brunette.
'' It's just that I'm not comfortable to expose my feelings to the rest of the gang."
'' It's alright I wont tell them until you want me to tell them'' said the ruby eyed girl in a cheerful voice.
Kai smiled as Hilary grabbed the older teen and kiss him with passion.
'' I guess we should go now.''
'' Yeah! Otherwise Tyson will manage to get on my nerves.''
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