Yo yo yiggity yo, ma readers. The sinner be here bringing you a story
If I owned the titans, BB and rae would be together, and Starfire would be as blond as she acted.
The White Raven
In Jump City, the Teen Titans were fighting Trigon, Ravens evil demon father. Jump city was in ruins. All the people were turned to stone and were lifeless. Nothing they did seemed to work.
They barely scratched him when he growled," I grow weary of this battle, VIDEO EXIT AD INFINITUM"(Spell fail, I know)
The shadows around his hand formed a black dagger. Only Raven and Beast Boy were left conscious as the other titans had been KO'd. As Trigon threw the dagger towards Raven, she shut her eyes, awaiting the pain and death. But it never came. Raven opened her eyes and saw who stopped the dagger. It was Beast boy, her secret crush. As he fell she went to his side, crying as she asked," Why would you save me, I'm the weirdo?" Beast boy just smiled," Cause I love you." He then closed his eyes, for what Raven thought was the last time. She then stood and glared at Trigon with her might. She raised a hand and said," You will pay, FIAT LUX!"A blinding white light enveloped all of Jump city, and everything was still.
As Beast boy woke up in the tower infirmary, he found that he had a splitting headache. "Don't try to sit up, your still recovering." He turned to the voice and saw an angel.
It was Raven, but she was different. She was wearing a white cloak and had long white hair. She was not as pale as usual and she was smiling.
"H-how," he stammered, amazed at her increased beauty and appearance.
"Listen and I'll tell you"
Yeah could be better but I need a lot of reviews and suggestions. Also flames will be used to toast marshmellows so don't bother this is a retry, there will be a pole to see which is better. And I need a beta who can do romance stories.
