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CHAPTER 2

~Eric~

As I lay in bed holding Tris tightly in my arms while she restlessly sleeps and clings to me for dear life, trembling the entire time, I find myself thinking back to five months ago...

The day I saw Tris in the infirmary looking like she was knocking on deaths door. My heart ached for her and all I wanted to do was hold her in my arms and never let her go, but she wasn't mine to hold. So I just sat there for hours, holding her fragile tiny hand to give her some sort of comfort and let her know that she was not alone. I doubt that she ever knew that I was ever there with her.

The story was that she fell jumping from the train which was utter fucking bullshit, and I realized as I looked at her chart then down at all the bruises that were covering her small but very beautiful body; some of them new and some of them old. It only confirmed that this was not an accident at all. Tris was being abused on a massive level, and absolutely no one seemed to care, besides me.

Her friends weren't there to help her and four was nowhere to be found. I found it heartbreaking to see her all alone and fragile like this. But that is how it is when you are forced into being a punching bag by someone that claims to love you. I've seen this all before and had to set and watch a monster like Tobias kill the beautiful soul of a woman like mother was so much like Tris before my father thought that it was his right to take her away from me.

I will not allow Tobias fucking Eaton take Tris from me like my so called father took my mother from me all those years ago. I will die before I ever allow that to happen. I should have never let him get to her in the first place, but I did and there is absolutely nothing I can do to change that. All I can do now is bring her back to life and keep her safe from him and for her to never have to deal with that sorry bastard ever again.

That night that I came so close to loosing Tris, I just sat by her bed for hours just holding her hand and waiting to confront Four but the sorry sack of shit never showed up. The nurse said that someone found her by the tracks and brought her in while she was unconscious. When I asked the nurse if someone called her boyfriend, she told me that they had been trying to get a hold of him for hours but no one had seen or heard from him.

Oh, but I saw him earlier that day with his friends having the time of his life like nothing had happened.

After that day I watched her closely from the shadows and everyday she would have a new injury; each worst than the last and after a few weeks of this I confronted four. He just laughed and told me that she was a terribly clumsy girl. I told him he was full of shit and that a clumsy person wouldn't have ranked first in her initiation. The fucker just scoffed at me and told me not to worry about two stiffs and to stay the hell away from Tris. So I punched him in the face, hard.

He knew better than to retaliate because I could kick his ass out of dauntless for striking a leader. Too damn bad I couldn't kick him out for hurting Tris without proof.

I went to Max that very same day and told him what was happening. Max said that I needed to stay out of it unless Tris came to us for help. He also told me that Tris quit her job as an ambassador and that she wanted to work from home. I knew then and there that Four was making her do that to keep her away from the public so that he could hurt her as much as he wanted without people noticing.

Tris loved her job and would never want to quit. That fucker just continued to take everything form her and gave her nothing but hell and pain in return.

God, I really want to destroy that prick in the most horrifying way possible. And I will, if its the last thing that I do. Tobias will pay with his life for what he has put Tris through.

Hell, I wanted to kill Max for allowing this shit to go on for so damn long. It was an urge that I just barely controlled, but somehow I controlled it, but only just barely though. Max could have stopped all this shit the moment it started but the asshole wanted to go by the rules and wait for Tris to come to us for help even though I explained to him that a woman in that kind of situation would be too scared to ask for help and a dauntless woman would be too ashamed that she needs help. He didn't fucking listen to me.

After a while, it became a habit for me to keep an eye on Tris when she was able to leave her apartment. I tried to figure out a way to help her and protect her in anyway that I could think of. I even came close to killing four the handful of times that I had seen him leaving apartments that I knew belonged to random women.

As it turns out, not only was four killing the most beautiful soul that I have ever had the pleasure of knowing, very slowly and painfully might I add. The monster was also cheating on her with women that range from her friend Christina to women that I have never met. Tobias Eaton was and is worse than his sick father and my father combined.

"Like father like son." or is it "The Apple doesn't fall far from the tree." All I know is that Marcus Eaton raised his sorry excuse for a son in his own image. No wonder Evelyn chose to be faction-less. I would have done the same damn thing.

It's ironic though, because Tobias and Marcus remind me of my father in the worst way and this shit is happening to another woman that I care about. Hell, Tris is the only woman alive that I care for; I would fucking die for that woman.

Fuck, I really want to kill Tobias just as much as I wanted to kill my father all those years ago.

I knew from the first night in our initiation that Tobias had grown up in a similar situation that I had. The only difference was that my father never had the chance to hurt me like he did my mother, and my mother never got the chance to escape my father's constant beatings before he killed her.

Yesterday evening, when I saw Tris leave her apartment for the first time in a week, I think. I had finally had enough and told Max to make getting her out of this horrible situation she was in happen in the next hour, or I was leaving with her and would gladly disappear and become faction-less. I really would leave dauntless for good to save Tris from that monster.

My actions are not only driven by what I saw my mother go through. No, they are driven by my strong feelings for Tris. Strong feeling that I've had for the girl since day one.

No one but me and Max knows how I really feel about Tris and if I wasn't such a stupid jackass, everyone would know what she means to me and we both would have been happy from the word go. But no, my stubborn cold ass had to hide those feelings to protect myself. Worst mistake of my life because I should have been protecting Tris.

From the moment I met Tris, I felt so connected to her in ways that scared the ever loving shit out of me. So I hid my feelings and I hid them well but I really wished I hadn't though. Maybe if I wasn't so damn stubborn and stupid Tris wouldn't have had to go through any of this bullshit and she would be happy, with me. I fully intend to make her happy again; to see that fire in her ignite once more, and this time it will burn brighter with the passion that I will eventually show her.

I really do plan to make her happy and smile again, because all I want for her is to live the life that she deserves, not a life of pain and hell that four forced her into. I seriously plan to make Tobias feel every bit of pain that Tris has felt over the span of there relationship; he will feel all that pain and so much more for what he has done to this beautiful woman in my arms.

It pisses me off royally that her so called friends never tried to help her and that Christina bitch is screwing the sick fucker, knowing what the asshole does to Tris. The assholes just left Tris alone in this hell of a life, and in my opinion they're just as bad as Four and deserve the same fate that is set for him.

Uriah though is different, he actually tried to help her but was jumped by four and his own damn brother for his efforts. I can tell that Uri still tries to help her but Tris just keeps pushing him away to keep him safe. She would rather die than allow him to get hurt anymore. The woman is too damn selfless for her own damn good.

After several hours of just hold Tris while she tosses and turns in my arms I feel her finally relax with her head pressed into my bare chest and my fingertips tracing her spine slowly, trying to comfort her as much as I can. She is so fucking tiny and delicate; so much more fragile than she should be. Fuck, I wish I was able to heal her mind, body and soul instantly. Bringing her back to life with just my touch and love.

How long have I been holding her in my arm and soothing her? How long have I been rubbing her back like this? I don't have a clue, but I realize I don't really care as long as she can get some peace for once, as she sleeps.

After a while, I begin to drift off into a light and restless sleep while I continue to hold her tiny body against mine tightly. I'm use to not sleeping much by now, because of this entire fucked up situation. I've lost so much sleep over worrying that the following day she would be dead. That we would find her broken and lifeless body at the bottom of the chasm, whether by four's hands or by her own. It was only a matter of time before something like that happened to her and I simply couldn't bare the thought of her dead. It would kill me so much that I would most definitely follow her, because I have come to love her that much and she doesn't even know it. Hell, Tris no doubt thinks that no one loves her, but I do, more than anything...

"Eric please do go, I can't..." I hear Tris mumble into the quiet room. I stop stroking her back and listen to see if she's awake or just talking in her sleep. "Stay with me. Please don't ever leave me alone." I can't tell if she's awake or if she's just dreaming, but I answer anyway...

"I will Always stay with you Tris." I whisper to her with my lip pressed to the bare soft skin of her shoulder. "I promise you sweetheart. I will never leave or hurt you in any way." I place a few open mouth kisses to her neck lovingly, causing her to moan quietly. I allowing my tongue to slip out and slide along her soft skin before kissing her neck once more.

I smile when her body shivers in pleasure. Tris turns her body in my arms and pulls me closer to her, holding me as tightly as I'm holding her. She positions her right leg between mine so that our bodies are deliciously tangled together and I soon drift off to sleep with my mouth still pressed to her soft skin.


Some time later I feel the heat of the warm morning sun shining on me through the window and I also feel movement against my side.When I open my eyes I see Tris get up from the bed,then slowly walk over to open the window and allow the warm summer breeze blow through the room.

Tris' long flowing hair blows behind her and grazes her tiny hips as she just stands there and gazes out at the beauty of the forest that surrounds the cabin.

The sun is shining through the window and casting a surreal and warm glow around her soft silhouette, making the beautiful woman look like an angel. My god, Tris is the most beautiful woman that I have ever seen; she is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful.

I just lay there in bed and let my sleepy eyes slowly scan up and down her small yet gorgeous body. I smile and reach down to adjust my painfully hard morning wood when I notice that Tris is only wearing a blood red sportsbra and a pair of tiny blacklacy panties that reveal her beautifully toned ass.

I throw caution to the wind and slip my hand inside my shorts so that I can rub myself to relieve some of the painful tension that her sexy body is causing. Fuck, I really wish it was her hand touching me.

I close my eyes as I fully grasp my dick in my tight fist and begin to stroke myself hard and fast under the thin sheet that is barely covering me.

Suddenly I feel the bed dip just as Tris straddles my thighs. My eyes snap open and I quickly remove my hand from my shorts while I blush twenty shades of red in embarrassment.

I close my eyes as I wait for her anger at being caught masturbating in her presence. "I'm sorry, you just look so damn beautiful and I..." I stop talking when Tris places her hand to my lips.

"Is it me that made you want to touch yourself, Eric?" Tris smiles as she move off of me only to toss the sheets to the floor. She straddles me again but this time her ass is pressed into my dick causing me to groan and grasp her hips tightly. "I've never felt that I was sexy enough to cause a reaction like this. Did I cause that?" Oh fuck, her voice and tone is just dripping with lust.

All I can do is nod as her hands and nails graze down my heaving chest and abs. "God yes Tris." I manage to grind out between gritted teeth and clenched jaw. "I just saw you standing there and the way your body...Those panties and your tight sexy ass..." I growl then hiss when she rolls her hips against me. "I'm really sorry if I made you uncomfortable, I just couldn't control myself." I don't have the first fucking clue as to why I'm still rambling and apologizing, because she seems to like what she caught me doing.

"Show me, Eric." Tris dismounts my hips and begins to tug my shorts and briefs down and off my legs.

"Show you what, baby?" I set up and thread my fingers through her soft hair.

"I want to see you. I want to watch you touch yourself; pleasure yourself. I want to see how I make you feel. I want to feel what it's like to be wanted and cherished." Tris pulls her shirt over her head and sits on the bed with her back pressed against the headboard. Her legs spread wide open with her knees bend and her fingers playing with her puckered nipples.

I look at her long and hard, trying to figure out if this is really what she wants.

"I'm sorry Eric. Of course this isn't what you want." Tris shakes her head. "Stupid Tris, nobody wants you." She mumbles to herself as she tries to get up and cover herself.

"Tris," I grab her arm and pull her up to her knees directly in front of me and kiss her hard, shoving my tongue into her mouth and kissing her with all the need, passion, and love that I feel for her. "I want and need you more than anything on this planet baby..." I confess against her lips then kiss her once more before I quickly set her back the way she was before, with her back against the headboard. I remove her panties, leaving her bare and completely naked for me. I then slide my hands down her soft legs and spread them wide open so that I can see her soaking wet heat. "I was just shocked that you want me to touch myself while you watch. I was even more shocked that you want me just as much and I want you. Even after all the shit that you've been through." I smile down at her as I drag two finger through her folds; coating my fingers with her arousal and flicking her clit repeatedly.

Fuck me, she is so damn wet.

"I want to move on with my life Eric and I promised myself that I wouldn't live in the past and let Tobias ruin my future. So, as of yesterday that fucking monster doesn't exist to me and I never went through that hell that he called a relationship. I'm starting over and moving forward." Tris smile and moans loudly from what I'm doing to her wet and oh so beautiful pussy. "I am Tris Prior. I am Dauntless. I am brave. I am happy, and I want you, Eric Coulter, more than anything." She cries out as she cums all over my hand.

Once her body stops shaking from her orgasm she slides her hand down her body slowly and gives me a sexy little grin. "I'm going to live my life as it was meant to be lived. No sad poor me attitude. I'm gonna live and be free. I want true love and real pleasure. Just like this, Eric." Tris is moaning every word and promise that she says.

Oh goddamn, there's that fire that I love so fucking much, and it's blazing so fully that it has me harder than I was before. "I'll give you any and everything you'll ever want baby." I moan as I get to my knees in front of her with a knee on either side of her thighs and grasp my hard cock; coating it completely with the juices from her orgasm. "Tell me Tris." I groan when I see her pinch and pull her nipples. "Fuck baby, what do you want me to do?" I stroke myself slowly as I wait for her to tell me what she wants.

Tris slowly slides her hand down to her slick pussy and rubs herself a few times; coating her hand with her arousal then reaches up and grabs the end of my dick and begins to stroke me when I move my own hand away and allow her to timidly stroke my hard dick.

Her pace is slow and maddening so I place my hand over hers so that we both are grasping my cock tighter. "Show me, Eric." We both moan as I grip her tiny fist tighter and begin pumping my dick faster.

I grin down at he as I remove my hand and let her take control completely. She begins to squeeze me tighter and pump my cock faster. "Mmmm, just like that baby." I hiss as she begins to pump my hard dick even faster and harder.

I close my eyes and let my head lull back at the wonderful feeling my goddess is causing me. A few moments later my eyes snap open and I stare down at Tris as she swirls her soft warm tongue around the head of my weeping cock while staring up at me through her lashes.

"Oh fuck yeah baby! YES! Just like that, Tris!" I yell out as I give my hips a little thrust.

Tris catches on quickly and wraps her lips around the head then slowly sucks my dick into her wet and oh so warm mouth; all the way to the back of her tight little throat. Fuck me, she doesn't have gag reflexes. "Mmmm..." She swallows then lets out a little moan that sends vibrations all the way down to my tightening balls.

"Holy shit Tris, I'm so fucking close baby." I try to pull myself from her mouth but she reaches around me and grasps my ass roughly and sucks my dick really fucking hard down her throat. "Tris!" I roar really fucking loud as I cum so damn hard. "Holy fucking shit baby!" I hiss loudly as she swallows every bit of cum that I give her. "That was the hottest thing that I have ever experienced in my entire fucking life, baby..."

Tris looks up at me with those gorgeous hazel eyes giving me a very sexy smile, and it's in that very moment that I know for a fact I'm completely and utterly in love with her.

"Eric..." Tris smiles at me as she pushes me to lay on my back then straddles my hips. "I love you..."


I feel myself waking up from the best sleep that I have had in a long damn time. I try to keep from waking up so that I can stay in this wonderful dream, but my mind is becoming aware that what just happened was only a fuck awesome wet dream.

Damn it, waking up from a dream like that sucks. But I fully intend to make that dream a reality as soon as I possible can.

Tris Prior will be mine, soon.

To be continued...


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