CHAPTER TWO: The Bad Year
A/N: hey 2 chapters in one day aren't you lucky. well I really want to know what you think about the story and hope you like it. see you at the bottom and don't forget to follow favorite and review.
Tris POV:
Tobias had given me the nickname Tris when I was twelve and I was heading to our spot which I had shown him when I was ten because we haven't there every night since I showed it to him. Tobias had been showing me how to be Dauntless because we both admired them and felt like we didn't fit in here at Erudite. I could tell Tobias was keeping a secret from me but I couldn't tell what it was and not even his friends knew what it was. Today when I got to our spot he wasn't there so I waited and waited but he didn't show so I thought her busy and went home but when he didn't show all week I decided to see what was up. Tobias was drawing away from all his friends and wouldn't talk to anyone.
I stopped going to our spot after that but I promised I would go to his choosing ceremony and when I was there I noticed the glare on his fathers face and the surprised looks on all the other peoples faces when he choose Dauntless and I knew I would follow him there but hack the computers at school to see how he was doing. When it became night I went to the computer lab to check on him but when I found him he was checking on all of his old friends. He had left most of us but that didn't mean he didn't care so I went to bed and in the morning started summer for the year but offered to help Marcus clean since Tobias was no longer there but what I didn't expect was to get beaten when I came over and then told anyone what was going on he would kill my family and beat all my friends so I was told to come every weekend and I would do so but also sad when I found out that this is what Tobias was hiding from me. I did exactly what Tobias did and avoided all my friends not wanting them to get hurt and practicing even harder to get ready for Dauntless.
Tobias POV:
The beating were getting worse as it got closer to my choosing ceremony and he was watching me more so I couldn't go see Tris at our spot but I knew that she knew I had a secret but didn't know what it was so I knew I would have to stop seeing her and my friends would get hurt if I stayed their friends because Marcus my "father" (He doesn't deserve the title father) would go after them when I left. I would use my knowledge of computers to keep an eye on them after I switched factions.
I knew Tris would be the one in the most danger from my father as my neighbor and as my friend so I slowly walked away from my friends and didn't talk to them anymore. When my choosing ceremony came up I knew I shouldn't have made Tris promise to come because I saw the grimace on Marcus's face and I was willing to bet she did too and she would try to find out why he did that. When I got to the dauntless facility I was the first to jump both times and I called myself four when they asked my name. One for each fear I knew I had (heights, being the reason my friends got hurt, small spaces, and Marcus).that night I snuck out the dorm and started to check on all my friends but they were all safe for now so I went to bed
A/N: hey so tell me what you think and how to improve the story but the chapters are getting longer each chapter and will continue to do so until I post the whole thing but remember it is still a work in progress
Revisions done 6/23/16
